2023届高三英语地市级新题快递-一模考试专辑
专题08 短文改错甲乙卷区 解析版
【2023河南郑州一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
Last Saturday I took part a farm work program in the suburbs, which really impressed me. Before an activity, our team leader told us some specific arrangements about it. Its theme was “Labor is the most glory”. Meanwhile, he stressed the importance or value of working with our own hands. Unable to hold back my happiness, I pictured that was to come next. On the farm, we worked hard with the farmers, picking watermelons and carried them to the truck. While I was working, I had realized how tough it was to work in the fields in the burning sun. When I got home, I put down my luggages, hungry and tired. Over dinner, I shared my experience with my parents excited. Happy and proud, they all spoke highly of me.
【答案】1.在part后面加in 2.an→the 3. glory→glorious 4.or→and 5.that→what 6. carried→carrying 7.删掉had 8. luggages→luggage 9. excited→excitedly 10.all→both
【解析】
【导语】本文是记叙文。文章主要讲述作者上周六参加的一个郊区农活项目的事情。
【详解】1.考查动词短语。句意：上周六，我参加了一个郊区的农活项目，这给我留下了深刻的印象。这里考查动词短语take part in，意为“参加”。故在part后面加in。
2.考查冠词。句意：在活动之前，我们的团队领导告诉了我们一些具体的安排。分析句子结构和意思可知，这里的activity是指上文提到过的a farm work program，所以用定冠词the修饰，表示特指。故将an改为the。
3.考查形容词。句意：其主题是“劳动是最光荣的”。分析句子结构和意思可知，这里要用形容词作表语，意为“光荣的”。故将glory改为glorious。
4.考查连词。句意：与此同时，他强调了用自己的双手工作的重要性和价值。分析句子结构和意思可知，importance和value是并列关系，所以用and，表示“和”的意思。故将or改为and。
5.考查宾语从句。句意：无法抑制我的幸福，我想象着接下来会发生什么。分析句子结构和意思可知，动词pictured后面是宾语从句，从句中缺少主语，用连接代词what引导，意为“什么”。故将that改为what。
6.考查非谓语动词。句意：在农场里，我们和农民们一起努力工作，摘西瓜，然后把西瓜运到卡车上。分析句子结构和意思可知，动词carry和picking是并列的关系，作伴随状语，与逻辑主语we之间是主动关系，用现在分词表主动。故将carried改为carrying。
7.考查谓语动词。句意：当我工作的时候，我意识到在烈日下在田野里工作是多么艰难。分析句子结构和意思可知，这句话描述的是过去的事情，所以主句谓语用一般过去时。故将had删掉。
8.考查名词。句意：回到家后，我放下行李，又饿又累。luggage是不可数名词，无复数形式。故将luggages改为luggage。
9.考查副词。句意：晚餐时，我兴奋地和父母分享了我的经历。这里需要副词修饰动词shared。故将excited改为excitedly。
10.考查代词。句意：他们既高兴又骄傲，都对我赞不绝口。分析句子结构和意思可知，这里的they是指作者父母两个人，所以用both代替。故将all改为both。
【2023河南安阳一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
Dear Jack,
Heard that you have been addicted to Tiktok recently, I feel terrible sorry and can’t wait to write this email in reply to your problem. Actually, this is commonly seen that the growing number of teenagers get crazy about Tiktok. They spend plenty of time watching and sharing videos online, what makes it hard for them to focus on study. As a result, action must taken before things get worse.
In my opinion, you’ d better try and develop a few other hobby. Besides, communicating with friends face to face will do the trick. That’s why this can help you shift your attention and formed good habits. I do hope my suggestions will be of greatly helpful to you. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】1.Heard→Hearing
2.terrible→terribly
3.this→it
4.the→a
5.what→which
6.在must后加be
7.hobby→hobbies
8.why→because
9.formed→form
10.去掉of
【解析】
【导语】本文是一封书信，针对Jack沉迷于抖音这一问题，李华给他提出一些建议。
【详解】1.考查非谓语动词。句意：听说你最近沉迷于抖音，我感到非常难过，迫不及待地写这封邮件来回复你的问题。feel是谓语，hear用非谓语动词，I和hear之间是主谓关系，因此用现在分词hearing表主动，作状语，位于句首，首字母大写，故将Heard改为Hearing。
2.考查副词。句意：听说你最近沉迷于抖音，我感到非常抱歉，迫不及待地写这封邮件来回复你的问题。修饰形容词sorry要用副词，terrible的副词是terribly，意为“非常”，故将terrible改为terribly。
3.考查代词。句意：事实上，越来越多的青少年为抖音疯狂，这是很常见的。“that the growing number of teenagers get crazy about Tiktok”是that引导的主语从句，应该用it作形式主语，故将this改为it。
4.考查冠词。句意：事实上，越来越多的青少年为抖音疯狂，这是很常见的。a number of是固定短语，意为“很多……”，故将the改为a。
5.考查定语从句。句意：他们花大量的时间在网上观看和分享视频，这使得他们很难集中精力学习。“makes it hard for them to focus on study”是非限制性定语从句，从句中缺少主语，从句中的主语是前面整个主句的内容，因此用关系代词which引导定语从句，故将what改为which。
6.考查被动语态。句意：因此，必须在事态进一步恶化之前采取行动。根据语境可知，句子表示“必须在事态进一步恶化之前采取行动”，行动是被采取，要用被动语态，因此应该是must be done，故在must后加be。
7.考查名词的复数。句意：在我看来，你最好试着培养一些其他的爱好。other后用复数，hobby的复数是hobbies。故将hobby改为hobbies。
8.考查表语从句。句意：这是因为这可以帮助你转移注意力，养成好习惯。“this can help you shift your attention and formed good habits”是表语从句，从句中不缺主宾表，根据句意可知，that's because...这是因为，符合题意，故将why改为because。
9.考查固定短语。句意：这是因为这可以帮助你转移注意力，养成好习惯。help sb. do sth.是固定短语，意为“帮助某人做某事”，故将formed改为form。
10.考查介词。句意：我希望我的建议能对你有很大帮助。副词greatly修饰形容词helpful，因此of是多余的（of后要接名词），故去掉of。
【2023陕西咸阳一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
On a recent weekend, my family had so many fun in Huangshandian village. The village, attracted more than 400, 000 tourist arrivals on average every year, becomes a hot spot thanks to it’s country lifestyle. We took a part in adventures in the mushroom house and the outdoor pumpkin rolling classes in the morning. Then, we picked eggs, dig up sweet potatoes and ran after chickens in the field. It was calm at night, but we set a big campfire and a group tourists gathered round it, singing and dancing happily. My son who has never done farm work before said it was so different from that they did in school. He told me he couldn’t wait to go here again.
【答案】1.many→much
2.attracted→attracting
3.it’s→its
4.删除a
5.dig→dug
6.but→so/and
7.group后添加of
8.has→had
9.that→what
10.here→there
【解析】
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者一家去黄山店村玩耍的经历。
【详解】1.考查形容词。句意：最近的一个周末，我们一家在黄山店村玩得很开心。修饰不可数名词fun应用much。故many改为much。
2.考查非谓语动词。句意：这个村庄平均每年吸引40多万游客，由于其乡村生活方式而成为热门景点。分析句子结构可知attract与逻辑主语village构成主动关系，故用现在分词作状语。故attracted改为attracting。
3.考查代词。句意：这个村庄平均每年吸引40多万游客，由于其乡村生活方式而成为热门景点。此处修饰名词country lifestyle应用形容词性物主代词。故it’s改为its。
4.考查固定短语。句意：我们参加了蘑菇屋的冒险活动，早上还参加了户外南瓜滚课堂。短语take part in表示“参加”。故删除a。
5.考查时态。句意：然后，我们捡鸡蛋，挖红薯，在地里追赶鸡。描述过去发生的事情应用一般过去时。故dig改为dug。
6.考查连词。句意：夜晚风平浪静，我们生了一堆篝火，一群游客围在篝火周围，高兴地载歌载舞。结合前后文语境可知为因果关系或并列关系，应用连词so或and。故but改为so/and。
7.考查介词。句意：夜晚风平浪静，我们生了一堆篝火，一群游客围在篝火周围，高兴地载歌载舞。短语a group of表示“一群”。故group后添加of。
8.考查时态。句意：我的儿子以前从未干过农活，他说农活和他们在学校里干的活儿大不相同。定语从句中表示“过去的过去”应用过去完成时。故has改为had。
9.考查宾语从句。句意：我的儿子以前从未干过农活，他说农活和他们在学校里干的活儿大不相同。引导宾语从句，从句缺少宾语，指事情应用what。故that改为what。
10.考查副词。句意：他告诉我他迫不及待地想再去一次。此处表示“去那里”应用there。故here改为there。
【2023甘肃张掖一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove，I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together.＂Not that way，＂my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.
【答案】
【解析】
【分析】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者做西红柿炒鸡蛋的过程。
【详解】1.考查形容词。句意：今天我自己尝试做一道简单的菜。根据名词dish可知，此处应用形容词作定语，故将simply改为simple。
2.考查非谓语动词。句意：我喜欢吃西红柿炒鸡蛋。动词fry与tomatoes之间是动宾关系，所以此处应用过去分词作定语，故将frying改为fried。
3.考查情态动词用法。句意：并且我认为它一定很简单。must是情态动词，后接动词原形，to多余，故将to去掉。
4.考查非谓语动词。句意：我妈妈告诉我如何准备这道菜。分析句子可知，“how+不定式”作told的宾语，to是不定式符号，后应接动词原形，故将preparing改为prepare。
5.考查连词。句意：首先我把西红柿切成块，并把它们放在一边。I cut the tomatoes into pieces与put them aside之间是并列关系，应使用and连接，故将but改为and。
6.考查名词复数。句意：下一步我把鸡蛋打到一个碗里，然后用筷子快速搅拌。chopstick是可数名词，意为“筷子”，通常以复数形式出现，故将chopstick改为chopsticks。
7.考查介词。句意：之后我把油倒进一个平底锅，然后开火。根据I poured oil into a pan及常识可知，把油倒进锅里后应是打开炉子，所以此处应使用短语turn on，故将off改为n。
8.考查连词。句意：我耐心等待，直到油烧热。此处是指“直到”油烧热，应使用until/till引导时间状语从句，故将unless改为until/till。
9.考查冠词。句意：然后我把西红柿和打好的鸡蛋一起放进平底锅。此处特指上文提到的pan，所以其前应加定冠词the，故在pan前the。
10.考查代词。句意：“不是那样。”我的妈妈尽力阻止我，但是失败了。根据上文可知，是作者一个人做菜，此处指妈妈尽力阻止“我”，应使用第一人称单数的宾格，故将us改为me。
【2023四川成都一模】下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Early this morning, I was riding my bike to my school while suddenly it hit a parked car. Frightening and guilty, I saw a scratch (划痕) on the car. At first, I thought about run away. Butwhen I remembered the quality of honesty taught by my parents, I decided to do nothing better. However, I wrote a note with my apology and personal informations. Then I placed it on thewindow of the car and leave for my school. Surprising, in the afternoon the owner came topraise for me in front of my classmates. What unforgettable day!
【语篇解读】这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了在上学路上不小心擦挂了路边小车的经历，
说明诚实的重要性。
1. 考查状语从句连接词。句意：今早我正骑车去上学，突然撞上了一辆停着的小车。固
定句型“be doing...when...”译为“正在做……突然……”，故将while 改为when。
2. 考查形容词。“frighten（使害怕；惊吓）”的形容词有frightening（令人害怕的）与
frightened（感到害怕的，受到惊吓的）。句意：看到车子上有划痕，我既害怕又内疚，故将
Frightening 改为Frightened.
3. 考查非谓语。句意：刚开始，逃离的念头闪现过。about 为介词，后面的动词run 用
动名词形式running 作宾语，故将run 改为running。
4. 考查不定代词。句意：很快我想起父母曾教我为人诚实，我决定将事情做得更好。故
将nothing 改为something。
5. 考查连词。句意：因此我写了一张便条，里面有对此事的道歉和我个人信息。上文
decided to do something better 和下文wrote a note 构成因果关系，故将However 改为Therefore。
6. 考查名词单复数。句意同上。information 为不可数名词，故将informations 改为
information。
7. 考查谓语。句意：我把这张便条放在车窗上，然后离开去学校。事件发生在过去，and
并列两个谓语动词，前后一致，应用过去时态，故将故将leave 改为left。
8. 考查副词。句意：令我惊讶的是车主下午来当着全班同学表扬我。Surprisingly 单独
使用作状语，类似用法有“Fortunately”，“Immediately”等，故将Surprising 改为Surprisingly。
9. 考查介词。句意同上。此处praise 为及物动词，直接加宾语，故去掉praise 后的for。
10. 考查冠词。句意：今天是一个多么难忘的一天。day 为可数名词，unforgettable 为
元音音素开头的形容词修饰day，故在unforgettable 前加冠词an.
【2023四川凉山一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
As is know to us, the 21st century is attached to knowledge economy and a learning-type society. However, a lecture named “lifelong education” was held at my school last Thursday.
In the lecture, a university professor introduced that lifelong learning meant and was explained what benefits it would bring us. For example, educational input will have a profound influence on their competitiveness, especially when we need to cope with technologically development.
I was inspired by speech. For me, the most important thing is that we can feel a sense to achievement by finish some challenging tasks when we are learning continuously. Lifelong learning will be one of the most rewarding pursuit if we stick to it.
【答案】1. know→known
2.However→Therefore/Thus/Hence
3.that→what
4.删除and后的was
5.their→our
6.technologically→technological
7.by后加the
8.to→of
9.finish→finishing
10.pursuit→pursuits
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是作者参加了学校上周四举行的一场“终身教育”的讲座，受到了很大的启发。
【详解】1.考查非谓语动词。句意：众所周知，21世纪是知识经济和学习型社会的。分析句子可知，定语从句谓语动词know与定语从句主语as之间为被动关系，as is known to us意为“众所周知”。故将know改为known。
2.考查副词。句意：因此，上周四在我的学校举行了一场名为“终身教育”的讲座。根据句子之间的逻辑关系可知，该句“a lecture named “lifelong education” was held at my school last Thursday. ”与其前的句子为因果关系，且位于句首，首字母要大写。故将However改为Therefore/Thus/Hence。
3.考查宾语从句连接词。句意：在讲座中，一位大学教授介绍了终身学习的意义，并解释了它将给我们带来什么好处。分析句子可知，introduced后面为宾语从句，从句中缺少meant的宾语，结合句意可知，此连接词指代的是事情，所以使用连接代词what。故将that改为what。
4.考查谓语动词。句意：在讲座中，一位大学教授介绍了终身学习的意义，并解释了它将给我们带来什么好处。分析句子可知，explain与句子主语a university professor之间为主动关系，不能在explained前加was。故删除and后的was。
5.考查代词。句意：例如，教育投入将对我们的竞争力产生深远的影响，特别是当我们需要应对技术发展时。结合句意可知，此处指的是“教育输入”对我们的影响，且全文都是第一人称，不能使用第三人称。故将their改为our。
6.考查形容词。句意：例如，教育投入将对我们的竞争力产生深远的影响，特别是当我们需要应对技术发展时。该句中development是名词，其前使用形容词作定语而不是副词。故将technologically改为technological。
7.考查冠词。句意：我受到演讲的启发。可数名词单数前必须要有限定词，结合语境可知，此处的speech指的是上文中提到的“终身教育”演讲，所以是特指，使用定冠词。故在by后加the。
8.考查介词。句意：对我来说，最重要的是，当我们不断学习时，通过完成一些具有挑战性的任务，我们可以感受到成就感。表示“一种成就感”应该是a sense of achievement，此处表示“……的”应该使用介词of。故将to改为of。
9.考查非谓语动词。句意：对我来说，最重要的是，当我们不断学习时，通过完成一些具有挑战性的任务，我们可以感受到成就感。介词by后面应该为动名词doing作宾语，不能跟动词原形。故将finish改为finishing。
10.考查名词。句意：如果我们坚持下去，终身学习将是最有价值的追求之一。分析句子可知，one of +名词复数，表示的是“……之一”，所以此处pursuit应使用名词复数。故将pursuit改为pursuits。
2．【2023甘肃兰州一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
When I was very small, my parents will tell me stories before bedtime. Among these stories, I was very interesting in fairy tales. The famous stories like The Little Mermaid, Cinderella and Snow White are very familiar with me. I learned a lot of from these stories, what made me a strong girl. As a girl, I knew I must have a strong will like these fairy. I should ever run away or give up when faced with difficulties. The most important thing I learnt from the fairies was to have kind heart. As the saying went, a kind heart is a fountain of gladness, making something around it freshen into smiles.
【答案】1. will→would 2. interesting→interested 3. with→to 4. 删除of 5. what→which
6. fairy→fairies 7. ever→never 8.在kind前面加a 9. went→goes
10. something→everything
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。讲述了作者小时候，父母会在睡前给她讲故事，她从这些故事中学到了很多，这让她成为了一个坚强的女孩。
【详解】1.考查时态。句意：当我很小的时候，父母会在睡前给我讲故事。根据“When I was very small”可知，此处是讲述过去发生的事情，应用“would + 动词原形”来表示过去经常做的事情。故将will改为would。
2.考查固定短语。句意：在这些故事中，我对童话非常感兴趣。be interested in是固定短语，意为“对……感兴趣”。故将interesting改为interested。
3.考查介词。句意：《小美人鱼》、《灰姑娘》和《白雪公主》等著名故事对我来说非常熟悉。be familiar with意为“某人熟悉某人或某物”；be familiar to意为“某物或某事为某人所熟悉”。根据句意，此处指“《小美人鱼》、《灰姑娘》和《白雪公主》等著名故事为我所熟悉”，故用be familiar to。故将with改为to。
4.考查介词。句意：我从这些故事中学到了很多，这让我成为了一个坚强的女孩。a lot意为“许多”，词性可以为副词，用来修饰动词，在句中作状语，也可以为名词词性，在句中作主语、宾语、表语等；而a lot of意为“许多的”，词性为形容词，用来修饰名词，在句中作定语。分析句子结构可知，这里作learned的宾语，of多余。故将of删除。
5.考查定语从句。句意同上。分析句子可知，逗号后为非限制性定语从句，先行词为整个主句，从句缺少主语，应用关系代词which引导从句。故将what改为which。
6.考查名词的数。句意：作为一个女孩，我知道我必须像这些仙女一样有坚强的意志。根据句中“these”可知，此处应用名词复数形式。故将fairy改为fairies。
7.考查副词。句意：当我遇到困难时，我不应该逃跑或放弃。根据句意可知，此处指“我不应该逃跑或放弃”。ever意为“曾经”，此处应用never，意为“绝不”，表示否定。故将ever改为never。
8.考查冠词。句意：我从仙女们那里学到的最重要的一点是要有一颗善良的心。heart意为“内心，心肠”是可数名词。根据句意，此处指“要有一颗善良的心”，故应使用不定冠词，表示“一个，一颗”。故在kind前面加a。
9.考查时态。句意：俗话说，一颗善良的心是快乐的源泉，让周围的一切都充满了笑容。表示“俗话说”应用as the saying goes，用一般现在时。故将went改为goes。
10.考查不定代词。句意：同上。根据句意，此处指“让周围的一切都充满了笑容”，something意为“某物”，此处指“一切事物”，应用everything。故将something改为everything。
3．【2023江西抚州一模】短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Xi’an Forest of Stone Tablets, initially set up in the 1087, was official named in the Qing Dynasty. It is an art treasure house where is composed of more than 3,000 stone tablets from the Han Dynasty through the Qing Dynasty. The museum is naming “Forest of Stone Tablets” because the numerous stone tablets housing in the museum look like a dense forest. The museum was a treasure house of ancient Chinese calligraphy as well as a good collection of historical documents and stone carvings in various styles. Moreover, the tablets bear evidences to the cultural exchanges in ancient China and show the great achievements of that period. However, for the visitors to Xi’an, the Forest of Stone Tablets is of great attraction in addition terracotta warriors. We will surely be impressed by its rich culture.
【答案】1.去掉the
2. official→officially
3. where→which/that
4. naming→named
5. housing→housed
6. was→is
7. evidences→evidence
8. However→Therefore
9. addition后加to
10. We→They
【导语】这是一篇说明文。文章介绍了西安石碑林的历史及其重要的文化价值。
【详解】1.考查冠词。句意：西安石碑林始建于公元1087年，清代正式命名。具体的年代前面不加冠词。故去掉定冠词the。
2.考查副词。句意：西安石碑林始建于公元1087年，清代正式命名。分析句子可知，此处修饰谓语动词name，应该用副词。故将official改为officially。
3.考查定语从句。句意：这是一座由从汉代到清代的3000多块石碑组成的艺术宝库。分析句子可知，an art treasure house后面是一个定语从句，对先行词an art treasure house进行限定说明，定语从句的关系词代替先行词an art treasure house在从句中作主语，应用关系代词that或which引导定语从句。故将where改为that或which。
4.考查被动语态。句意：这座博物馆被命名为“石碑森林”，因为博物馆里收藏的众多石碑看起来像一片茂密的森林。根据句意可知，这座博物馆被命名为“石碑森林”，所以句子应该用被动语态。故将naming改为named。
5.考查过去分词。句意：这座博物馆被命名为“石碑森林”，因为博物馆里收藏的众多石碑看起来像一片茂密的森林。分析句子可知，句中的house是动词，意义为“收藏”，它和前面的逻辑主语stone tablets之间是被动关系，所以应该用过去分词作后置定语。故将housing改为housed。
6.考查时态。句意：这座博物馆是中国古代书法的宝库，也收藏了大量的历史文献和各种风格的石雕。该句子也是介博物馆现在的情况，所以应该用一般现在时。故将was改为is。
7.考查名词单复数。句意：此外，石碑是中国古代文化交流的证据，展示了那个时期的伟大成就。此处evidence是不可数名词。故将evidences改为evidence。
8.考查副词。句意：所以，对于到西安的游客来说，除了兵马俑，石碑林也有很大的吸引力。根据句意可知，该句子与上文是因果关系，不是转折关系。故将However改为Therefore。
9.考查固定搭配。句意：所以，对于到西安的游客来说，除了兵马俑，石碑林还也很大的吸引力。in addition意为“另外，此外”，在句中状语，常用逗号与句子主干隔开，“in addition to”是介词短语，意为“除……之外”，其后跟宾语；句中应用介词短语in addition to，跟宾语terracotta warriors，表示“除了兵马俑”。故在addition后加to。
10.考查代词。句意：他们一定会对中国丰富的文化留下深刻印象。此处顺接上文，说的是到西安的游客一定会对中国丰富的文化留下深刻印象。所以应该用代词they，而不是we。故将We改为They。
4．【2023河南信阳一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文，请修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有1处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Popularity is the state of being liked, enjoyed or supported by others. Natural, we all desire to win popularity in one way or another. To enjoy popularity, we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and try our best to take active part in all our class activities. We should be responsible for the work and keep team spirit on mind.
To be a popular student, we must show our respect, concern and sympathy for other. As a result, we never hesitated to lend a hand to those in need. We ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do it at school and make an effort to achieve all-round development, be good not only at our lessons but also at sports, music, painting, social services and so on. In time of success we remain modest, when in time of difficulty we keep strong-minded.
All in all, being a popular student among the classmates and teachers come to those who can overcome their shortcomings but keep improving their personal qualities.
【答案】1.Natural→Naturally
2.take后加an
3.on→in
4.other→others
5．hesitated→hesitate
6.删掉do后面的it
7.be→being
8.when→while
9.ome→comes或者在come前加will
10.but→and
【导语】这是一篇说明文。短文介绍了如何成为一名受欢迎的学生。
【详解】1.考查副词。句意：自然，我们都渴望以这样或那样的方式赢得声望。副词naturally作状语修饰整个句子。故Natural改成Naturally。
2. 考查冠词。句意：我们应该把班级当作我们的大家庭，尽我们最大的努力积极参加我们班级的所有活动。take an active part in“积极参加”。active首字母的发音为元音音素。故take后加an。
3. 考查介词。句意：我们应该对工作负责，并牢记团队精神。keep sth in mind “记住某事”为固定短语。故on改成in。
4.考查代词。句意：要成为一个受欢迎的学生，我们必须表现出对他人的尊重、关心和同情。表示其他人用others做for的宾语，故other改成others。
5.考查时态。句意：因此，我们要毫不犹豫地向那些需要帮助的人伸出援手。本句在陈述事实，所以本句为一般现在时，与整篇时态一致。故hesitated改成hesitate。
6.考查代词。句意：我们应该严格要求自己在学校做的每一件事，努力实现全面发展，不仅在我们的课程，而且在体育，音乐，绘画，社会服务等。everything为先行词作do的宾语，所以it省略。故删掉do后面的it。
7.考查现在分词。句意：我们应该严格要求自己在学校做的每一件事，努力实现全面发展，不仅在我们的课程，而且在体育，音乐，绘画，社会服务等方面都做得很好。本句已经有谓语动词，所以be good at用非谓语动词与we在逻辑上是主动关系，所以用现在分词。故be改成being。
8.考查连词。句意：在成功的时候我们保持谦虚，然而在困难的时候我们要保持坚强。根据句意可知，本句在对比两种情况，表示然而，所以连词为while。故when改成while。
9.考查时态和主谓一致。句意：总之，在同学和老师中成为一名受欢迎的学生，是那些能够克服缺点并不断提高个人素质的人。动名词作主语，谓语动词为单数形式comes，也可用一般将来时。故come改成comes或者在come前加will。
10.考查连词。句意：在同学和老师中成为一名受欢迎的学生，是那些能够克服缺点并不断提高个人素质的人。前后句意为并列关系。故but改成and。
5．【2023陕西宝鸡一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Ladies and gentleman, Thank you for coming today to attend the graduation ceremony at No. 3 Senior High School. Firstly of all, I’d like to congratulate all the students who are here today. I remember meet all of you when you were just started Grade 7 at this school. You were all so full of energy and thirst for knowledge. And yes, some of you were a little difficult to deal !But today I see a room full of talented young adults who is full of hope in the future. I hope you'll remember the important people in your lives who helped and support you — your parents, your teachers, your classmate and your friends. Please consider how they’ve done for you and what they mean for you. Lastly, the end of junior high school is the beginning of a new life. You’ll make mistake along the way, but the key is to learn from your mistakes and never give up. But along with difficulties, there will also be many excited things wait for you. Behind each door you open is chances to learning new things, and you have the ability to make your own choices. Choose wise and be responsible for your decisions and actions. Although you have to go your separate ways now, but I hope that in a few years’ time, you’ll come back to visit our school.
As you set out on our new journey, you shouldn’t forget where you came from. The future is your. Good luck and hope to see you again sometimes soon!
【答案】1. meet →meeting
2.删除were
3. thirst→ thirsty
4.在deal 后加with
5. is → are
6.how →what
7.mistake →mistakes
8.wait →waiting
9. wise→wisely
10 your→yours
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。文章叙述了一所学校为毕业生举办毕业典礼的发言稿，学校教育毕业生要懂得感恩，鼓励学生继续努力学习，书写自己更加灿烂的人生而奋斗。
【详解】1.考查非谓语动词。句意：我记得在你们刚开始在这所学校读七年级的时候，我见过你们所有人。remember doing sth.记得做过某事，符合题意。故将meet改为meeting。
2.考查动词。句意：我记得在你们刚开始在这所学校读七年级的时候，我见过你们所有人。start与句子的主语you是主动关系，不必用被动语态，故将were删除。
3.考查形容词。句意：你们都那么精力充沛，渴望知识。分析句子结构，be动词后用形容词 thirsty（渴望的），构成系表结构。故将thirst改为thirsty。
4.考查固定搭配。句意：是的，你们中的一些人有点难对付！deal with处理，固定搭配。故在deal后加with。
5.考查主谓一致。句意：但今天，我看到一屋子充满了对未来充满希望的有才华的年轻人。分析句子结构，关系代词who引导定语从句，先行词adults在从句作主语，be动词用复数形式。故将is改为are。
6.考查宾语从句。句意：请考虑他们为你做了什么，以及它们对你意味着什么。分析句子结构，此句为宾语从句，作从句do的宾语，用连接代词what引导。故将how改为what。
7.考查名词。句意：一路上你会犯错误，但关键是要从错误中吸取教训，永不放弃。make mistakes犯错误，固定搭配。故将mistake改为mistakes。
8.考查非谓语动词。句意：但除了困难，还有很多激动人心的事情等着你。There be 句型种已经有了动词be ,再出现的动词wait用其非谓语形式，因为wait与其逻辑上的主语things是主动关系，用现在分词形式。故将wait改为waiting。
9.考查副词。句意：明智地选择，对自己的决定和行动负责。此处修饰动词choose用副词修饰，作状语，wisely明智地，符合题意。故将wise改为wisely。
10.考查代词。句意：未来属于你。根据句意，可知此处应该用名词性物主代词作表语。故将your改为yours。
6．【2023四川成都一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
The other day, I discover I couldn't move my right arm and fingers after sleeping through a flight. Having diagnosed me with neural injury, the doctor suggested I could try acupuncture(针灸). So I followed his advices and began my treatment. Dozens tiny needles were inserted across my arm and fingers. I dared not move, because even a small change of position could cause a acute pain. Two weeks went by since I could eat a meal with chopsticks and it took a month for my arm and fingers to return back to their normal functions. I was very amazing at how magic these needles were. That I had always considered old-fashioned and useless turned out to be of great use. I hope acupuncture, with its help I recovered, will continue to bring health to other people.
【答案】1. discover→discovered
2删除could或could→should
3. advices改→advice
4. 在Dozens后加of
5.a→an
6. since→before
7.删除back
8. amazing→amazed
9. That→What
10. its→whose
【导语】这是一篇记叙文，文章讲述了作者的一次针灸经历，感叹针灸的神奇作用。
【详解】1.考查一般过去时。句意：有一天，我发现在飞机上睡觉后，我的右臂和手指都动不了。结合“The other day”可知，此处应用一般过去时，故将discover改为discovered。
2.考查虚拟语气。句意：医生诊断我有神经损伤，建议我试试针灸。suggest表示“建议”，其后的宾语从句应用虚拟语气，即谓语部分用“（should）+动词原形”，should可省略，故删除could或将could改为should。
3.考查不可数名词。句意：所以我听从了他的建议，开始了我的治疗。advice是不可数名词，无复数形式，故将advices改为advice。
4.考查固定短语。句意：几十根细小的针插在我的手臂和手指上。dozens of几十个，固定短语。故在Dozens后加of。
5.考查不定冠词。句意：我不敢动，因为即使是小小的改变姿势也会引起剧烈的疼痛。acute发音以元音音素开头，应用不定冠词an。故将a改为an。
6.考查时间状语从句引导词。句意：两个星期后我就可以用筷子吃饭了，我的手臂和手指恢复正常功能花了一个月的时间。结合句意可知，此处应用before引导时间状语从句，since意为“自从”，不符合题意。故将since改为before。
7.考查动词意义。句意：两个星期后我就可以用筷子吃饭了，我的手臂和手指恢复正常功能花了一个月的时间。return表示“返回，归还”，back在语义上重复，故删除back。
8.考查形容词。句意：我对这些针的魔力感到非常惊讶。主语是I，指人，应用形容词amazed作表语，amazing表示“令人诧异的”，修饰物，故将amazing改为amazed。
9.考查主语从句引导词。句意：我一直认为过时和无用的东西却变得很有用。分析句子可知，此处引导主语从句，从句中considered缺少宾语，表示“认为过时和无用的东西”，应用what引导，that引导主语从句时在从句中不作任何成分，不符合题意。故将That改为What。
10.考查定语从句。句意：在针灸的帮助下，我康复了，我希望针灸能继续为人们带来健康。分析句子可知，此处是非限制性定语从句，先行词是acupuncture，关系词在从句中作定语，和help是所属关系，应用whose引导。故将its改为whose。
7．【2023河南漯河一模】下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Qinghai Lake has seen it largest water areas since 2004 as a result of increased rainfall and improving ecological conservation. Increased rainfall was the mainly reason for the lake’s water area expansion. Enhanced ecological conservation also played the important role.
The lake has been shrinking since the 1950s due to multiple reason, such as human activities. It was the combined efforts of conservation and changes to the regional climate which turned things around.
In 2008, Qinghai launched a 10-year plan on the ecological environment protection as well comprehensive management of the Qinghai Lake basin. However, the improved ecosystem of the lake has benefited from a variety of plant and animal species.
【答案】1.it→its
2.improving→improved
3.mainly→main
4.the→an
5.has→had
6.reason→reasons
7.which→that
8.在well后加as
9.However→Therefore/Thus
10.去掉from
【导语】本文是一篇说明文，主要讲的是自2004年以来，随着降雨的增加和生态保护的改善，青海湖的水域面积达到了最大。
【详解】1.考查物主代词。句意：自2004年以来，随着降雨的增加和生态保护的改善，青海湖的水域面积达到了最大。Qinghai Lake和water areas是所属关系，因此it应改为its，故将it改为its。
2.考查形容词。句意：自2004年以来，随着降雨的增加和生态保护的改善，青海湖的水域面积达到了最大。根据句意可知，句中表示的是“已经增加的降雨和已经改善的生态保护”，“已经改善的”是improved，故将improving改为improved。
3.考查形容词。句意：降雨的增加是湖泊水域面积扩大的主要原因。修饰名词reason应用形容词main，意为“主要的”，故将mainly改为main。
4.考查冠词。句意：生态文明建设也发挥了重要作用。played an important role是固定短语，意为“发挥重要作用”，故将the改为an。
5.考查生态。句意：自20世纪50年代以来，由于人类活动等多种原因，该湖泊一直在缩小。根据第一段的“Qinghai Lake has seen it largest water areas since 2004”可知，自2004年以来，随着降雨的增加和生态保护的改善，青海湖的水域面积达到了最大，自20世纪50年代以来到2004年，该湖泊一直在缩小，因此时态应用过去完成进行时，即had been doing，故将has改为had。
6.考查名词复数。句意：自20世纪50年代以来，由于人类活动等多种原因，该湖泊一直在缩小。multiple后应用复数reasons，故将reason改为reasons。
7.考查强调句。句意：正是保护和改变区域气候的共同努力，才扭转了局面。根据It was和句意可知，句子是强调句，结构是“it is/was+被强调的部分+who/that+其他部分”，句中被强调的是“the combined efforts of conservation and changes to the regional climate”，因此用that，故将which改为that。
8.考查固定短语。句意：2008年，青海省启动了青海湖流域生态环境保护和综合治理十年规划。“ecological environment protection”和“comprehensive management of the Qinghai Lake basin”之间是并列关系，用as well as连接，故在well后加as。
9.考查副词。句意：因此，湖泊生态系统的改善使许多动植物物种受益。根据语境可知，前后是因果关系，句子表示“因此，湖泊生态系统的改善使许多动植物物种受益”，“因此”是therefore/thus，故将However改为Therefore/Thus。
10.考查动词及物性。句意：因此，湖泊生态系统的改善使许多动植物物种受益。根据语境可知，句子表示“湖泊生态系统的改善使许多动植物物种受益”，“使某人获益”是benefit sb.，from为多余，故去掉from。
8．【2023河南开封一模】下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last weekend,my classmates and I took the trip to the Wetland Park.Upon arrival,we attracted by the beautiful scenery there. The park was really a nice place for him to go bird-watching. We followed a guide,who brief introduction was interesting. We saw differently types of birds and took a lot of picture. After lunch,we divided ourselves from groups to play games and sing songs. At around 5p.m, we had started to walk back. The trip was of great useful. It offered us a chance to get close to nature，and made us know the importance of protect the environment.
【答案】1.the→a
2.we后接were
3.him→us
4.who→whose
5.differently→different
6.picture→pictures
7.from→into
8.去掉had
9.useful→use
10.protect→protecting
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，短文叙述了上个周末，作者和同学去湿地公园游玩的经历。
【详解】1.考查冠词。句意：上个周末，我和我的同学去湿地公园游玩。take a trip to sp“去某地旅行/旅游”。故将the改为a。
2.考查语态。句意：一到那里，我们就被那里美丽的风景所吸引。分析句子可知，主语we与谓语attract为被动关系。故在we后接were。
3.考查代词。句意：公园对我们来说真是个观鸟的好地方。根据“my classmates and I”可知，公园对我们来说真是个观鸟的好地方。故将him改为us。
4.考查关系代词。句意：我们跟着一个导游，他的简短介绍很有趣。guide为先行词，作定语从句的定语，关系代词为whose。故将who改为whose。
5.考查形容词。句意：我们看到了不同类型的鸟，并拍了很多照片。形容词different修饰名词types。故将differently改为different。
6.考查名词。句意：我们看到了不同类型的鸟，并拍了很多照片。picture为可数名词，且有a lot of修饰用复数形式。故将picture改为pictures。
7.考查介词。句意：午饭后，我们分成小组玩游戏和唱歌。divide…into…“把……分成…..”。故将from改为into。
8.考查时态。句意：在下午5点左右。我们开始往回走。本句在描述过去发生的事情，为一般过去时。故去掉had。
9.考查名词。句意：这次旅行很有用。be of use=be useful。故将useful改为use。
10.考查动名词。句意：它为我们提供了一个接近自然的机会，让我们知道了保护环境的重要性。of为介词后接动名词作宾语。故将protect改为protecting。
9．【2023四川绵阳一模】
Before the holiday, I thought about doing something meaningfully. Suddenly, I remembered that there was a lot of primary school students putting up small shops and sell red bags on the street last Spring Festival. Wanting to have a try, so I begged my father to support him. He bought some lovely red bags and small toy. For the first time in my life I begin to sell things at the gate of the park. This experience of selling taught me the secret of communicating strangers, and I understood what hard it is for my parents to make money.
【答案】1.meaningfully → meaningful
2.was → were
3.sell → selling
4.删除so
5.him → me
6.toy → toys
7.begin → began
8.the → a
9.在 communicating 后加 with
10.what → how
【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者在假期在街边卖东西的经历，体会到生活的艰辛，增强了和陌生人的沟通能力。
【详解】1.考查形容词。句意：在放假之前，我就打算做一些有意义的事情。形容词修饰不定代词something 时要置于其后，作后置定语。故将meaningfully 改为 meaningful。
2.考查主谓一致。句意：突然我想起去年春节时在街边有许多小学生建起了小商店卖红色的书包。宾语从句是there be句式，主语是 a lot of primary school students，再联系主句的谓语remembered 可知此处用were。故将was 改为 were。
3.考查非谓语动词。句意：突然我想起去年春节时在街边有许多小学生建起了小商店卖红色的书包。动词sell 与students 是逻辑上的主谓关系，与putting并列作后置定语，修饰 students。故将sell 改为 selling。
4.考查连词。句意：我想尝试一下，因此请求父亲帮助自己。分析句子结构可知，逗号前是非谓语动词作原因状语，逗号后是句子的主谓宾部分，因此两部分之间不需要并列连词。故删除so。
5.考查代词。句意：我请求父亲帮助我。由句意可知，作者请求父亲帮助自己，故将him 改为me。
6.考查名词复数。句意：他给我买了一些可爱的红色书包和小玩具。根据and表明的并列关系可知，此处与前面的 lovely red bags 并列作宾语，应该表示不止一个玩具，要用名词复数形式。故将toy 改为toys。
7.考查动词时态。句意：在我人生中第一次在公园门口卖东西。本句依旧在描述过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时。故将begin 改为 began。
8.考查冠词。句意：在我人生中第一次在一个公园门口卖东西。此处park第一次出现，故用不定冠词a表示泛指。故将the 改为 a。
9.考查固定搭配。句意：卖东西的经历教会了我和陌生人交流的秘密。communicate with“和……交流”，是固定搭配。故在 communicating 后加 with。
10.考查感叹句。句意：我也理解了父母挣钱是多么的辛苦。分析句子结构可知，此处是感叹句作 understood的宾语。引导感叹句时how修饰形容词和副词，what修饰名词。此处修饰形容词hard，故用how。故将what 改为 how。
10．【2023陕西咸阳一模】下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As children grow, they usually wants to pull away from their parents and develop their own personality. They may act different. A child who used to being friendly can easily become angry. One who once enjoyed spend time with his family may choose to stay lonely.
Although these changes in behavior can be difficult, but they are for the most part a normal part. But many parent may not know when it is not normal. Sarah Clarke, who is a co-director of the study, notes these changes can make it challenging to understand a child emotional state. So, to ask mental health expert for help is necessary when you were puzzled.
【答案】1.wants→want
2.different→differently
3.being→be
4.spend→spending
5.lonely→alone
6.删除but
7.parent→parents
8.child→child’s
9.ask后添加a
10.were→are
【分析】这是一篇说明文。文章主要说明了孩子成长中一些行为和心理的变化以及专家对此向父母提出的建议。
【详解】1.考查主谓一致。句意：随着孩子的成长，他们通常想要远离父母，发展自己的个性。此处主语为they，谓语应用动词原形。故wants改为want。
2.考查副词。句意：他们的行为可能不同。修饰动词act应用副词differently，作状语。故different改为differently。
3.考查动词原形。句意：一个习惯友好的孩子很容易生气。此处为短语used to do sth.表示“过去常常做某事”，be用动词原形形式。故being改为be。
4.考查动名词。句意：一个曾经享受与家人共度时光的人可能会选择独自一人。结合句意表示“享受做某事”可知短语为enjoy doing sth.，spend用动名词形式。故spend改为spending。
5.考查形容词。句意：一个曾经享受与家人共度时光的人可能会选择独自一人。此处表示行动、动作上的“独自的”应用形容词alone；lonely表示心灵上“寂寞的，孤独的”。故lonely改为alone。
6.考查状语从句。句意：虽然这些行为上的改变可能很困难，但它们在很大程度上是正常的。although引导让步状语从句，不与but连用。故删除but。
7.考查名词的数。句意：但许多家长可能不知道这是不正常的。parent为可数名词，由many修饰应用其复数形式。故parent改为parents。
8.考查名词所有格。句意：这项研究的联合负责人Sarah Clarke指出，这些变化会让理解孩子的情绪状态变得很困难。此处child与emotional state构成所属关系，应用名词所有格形式。故child改为child’s。
9.考查冠词。句意：因此，当你感到困惑时，向心理健康专家寻求帮助是必要的。expert为可数名词，此处表泛指应用不定冠词，且mental是发音以辅音音素开头的单词，应用a。故ask后添加a。
10.考查时态。句意：因此，当你感到困惑时，向心理健康专家寻求帮助是必要的。结合全文可知，文章陈述客观事实用一般现在时，从句主语为you，从句谓语用复数are。故were改为are。
11．【2023陕西渭南一模】下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
While in New Zealand as an exchange student, I stay with a host family. My host parents organized many activities for me at my spare time to relieve my homesickness. However, life in New Zealand isn’t easily to me. My main problem was the language, I was failed to understand much and that lasted for several week. Fortunately, I soon made several friends, whom help made me adapt gradually. They talked about life both in China and in New Zealand, learn more about each other’s culture. Now back home, I still remember the life here. For me, it is unique and valuable experience.
【答案】1. stay→stayed
2. at→ in
3. easily → easy
4. 去掉failed前was
5. week → weeks
6. whom→whose
7. They → We
8. learn → learning
9. here → there
10. unique 前加a
【详解】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者在新西兰做交换生期间，得到新西兰寄宿家庭和朋友帮助的故事。
1.考查动词时态。句意：在新西兰做交换生期间，我和一个寄宿家庭住在一起。由时间状语“While in New Zealand as an exchange student”可知，本句描述的是作者在做交换生时发生的事情，所以主句的谓语动词需用一般过去时。故将stay改为stayed。
2. 考查介词。句意：我的寄宿家庭的父母在业余时间为我组织了许多活动来减轻我的思乡之痛。in one’s spare time在某人业余时间，固定搭配。故将at改为in。
3. 考查形容词。句意：然而，在新西兰的生活对我来说并不容易。此处需用形容词作表语，副词多用作状语。故将easily改为easy。
4. 考查语态。句意：我的主要问题是语言，我不能理解很多语言，这种情况持续了几个星期。动词fail与主句主语I之间是主动关系，所以此处需用主动语态，不需要被动语态。故将failed前was删除。
5.考查名词的数。句意：同上。several后需接可数名词复数。故将week改为weeks。
6.考查定语从句。句意：幸运的是，我很快认识了几个朋友，他们的帮助使我逐渐适应。本句需用关系词引导非限制性定语从句，先行词是friends，指人，关系词在定语从句中作定语修饰名词help，所以此处需用关系代词whose引导非限制性定语从句。故将whom改为whose。
7.考查代词。句意：我们讨论了在中国和新西兰的生活，了解了彼此的文化。根据前一句“Fortunately, I soon made several friends, whom help made me adapt gradually. ”可知，此处指作者和朋友们讨论，所以此处需用第一人称复数we。故将They改为We。
8.考查非谓语动词。句意：同上。本句已有谓语动词talked，且此处没有连词，所以动词learn需用其非谓语动词形式作状语，动词learn与主语We之间是主动关系，所以此处需用现在分词learning作状语。故将learn改为learning。
9.考查副词。句意：现在回到家，我仍然记得那里的生活。作者介绍的是自己在新西兰做交换生时的经历，所以此处需用副词there。故将here改为there。
10.考查冠词。句意：对我来说，这是一次独特而宝贵的经历。此处泛指一段独特而宝贵的经历，需用不定冠词a/an，unique的发音以辅音音素开头，所以此处需用不定冠词a。故在unique前加a。2023届高三英语地市级新题快递-一模考试专辑
专题08 短文改错甲乙卷区 原卷版
【2023河南郑州一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
Last Saturday I took part a farm work program in the suburbs, which really impressed me. Before an activity, our team leader told us some specific arrangements about it. Its theme was “Labor is the most glory”. Meanwhile, he stressed the importance or value of working with our own hands. Unable to hold back my happiness, I pictured that was to come next. On the farm, we worked hard with the farmers, picking watermelons and carried them to the truck. While I was working, I had realized how tough it was to work in the fields in the burning sun. When I got home, I put down my luggages, hungry and tired. Over dinner, I shared my experience with my parents excited. Happy and proud, they all spoke highly of me.
【2023河南安阳一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
Dear Jack,
Heard that you have been addicted to Tiktok recently, I feel terrible sorry and can’t wait to write this email in reply to your problem. Actually, this is commonly seen that the growing number of teenagers get crazy about Tiktok. They spend plenty of time watching and sharing videos online, what makes it hard for them to focus on study. As a result, action must taken before things get worse.
In my opinion, you’ d better try and develop a few other hobby. Besides, communicating with friends face to face will do the trick. That’s why this can help you shift your attention and formed good habits. I do hope my suggestions will be of greatly helpful to you. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【2023陕西咸阳一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
On a recent weekend, my family had so many fun in Huangshandian village. The village, attracted more than 400, 000 tourist arrivals on average every year, becomes a hot spot thanks to it’s country lifestyle. We took a part in adventures in the mushroom house and the outdoor pumpkin rolling classes in the morning. Then, we picked eggs, dig up sweet potatoes and ran after chickens in the field. It was calm at night, but we set a big campfire and a group tourists gathered round it, singing and dancing happily. My son who has never done farm work before said it was so different from that they did in school. He told me he couldn’t wait to go here again.
【2023甘肃张掖一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove，I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together.＂Not that way，＂my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.
【2023四川成都一模】下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Early this morning, I was riding my bike to my school while suddenly it hit a parked car. Frightening and guilty, I saw a scratch (划痕) on the car. At first, I thought about run away. Butwhen I remembered the quality of honesty taught by my parents, I decided to do nothing better. However, I wrote a note with my apology and personal informations. Then I placed it on thewindow of the car and leave for my school. Surprising, in the afternoon the owner came topraise for me in front of my classmates. What unforgettable day!
【2023四川凉山一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
As is know to us, the 21st century is attached to knowledge economy and a learning-type society. However, a lecture named “lifelong education” was held at my school last Thursday.
In the lecture, a university professor introduced that lifelong learning meant and was explained what benefits it would bring us. For example, educational input will have a profound influence on their competitiveness, especially when we need to cope with technologically development.
I was inspired by speech. For me, the most important thing is that we can feel a sense to achievement by finish some challenging tasks when we are learning continuously. Lifelong learning will be one of the most rewarding pursuit if we stick to it.
2．【2023甘肃兰州一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
When I was very small, my parents will tell me stories before bedtime. Among these stories, I was very interesting in fairy tales. The famous stories like The Little Mermaid, Cinderella and Snow White are very familiar with me. I learned a lot of from these stories, what made me a strong girl. As a girl, I knew I must have a strong will like these fairy. I should ever run away or give up when faced with difficulties. The most important thing I learnt from the fairies was to have kind heart. As the saying went, a kind heart is a fountain of gladness, making something around it freshen into smiles.
3．【2023江西抚州一模】短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Xi’an Forest of Stone Tablets, initially set up in the 1087, was official named in the Qing Dynasty. It is an art treasure house where is composed of more than 3,000 stone tablets from the Han Dynasty through the Qing Dynasty. The museum is naming “Forest of Stone Tablets” because the numerous stone tablets housing in the museum look like a dense forest. The museum was a treasure house of ancient Chinese calligraphy as well as a good collection of historical documents and stone carvings in various styles. Moreover, the tablets bear evidences to the cultural exchanges in ancient China and show the great achievements of that period. However, for the visitors to Xi’an, the Forest of Stone Tablets is of great attraction in addition terracotta warriors. We will surely be impressed by its rich culture.
4．【2023河南信阳一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文，请修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有1处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Popularity is the state of being liked, enjoyed or supported by others. Natural, we all desire to win popularity in one way or another. To enjoy popularity, we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and try our best to take active part in all our class activities. We should be responsible for the work and keep team spirit on mind.
To be a popular student, we must show our respect, concern and sympathy for other. As a result, we never hesitated to lend a hand to those in need. We ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do it at school and make an effort to achieve all-round development, be good not only at our lessons but also at sports, music, painting, social services and so on. In time of success we remain modest, when in time of difficulty we keep strong-minded.
All in all, being a popular student among the classmates and teachers come to those who can overcome their shortcomings but keep improving their personal qualities.
5．【2023陕西宝鸡一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Ladies and gentleman, Thank you for coming today to attend the graduation ceremony at No. 3 Senior High School. Firstly of all, I’d like to congratulate all the students who are here today. I remember meet all of you when you were just started Grade 7 at this school. You were all so full of energy and thirst for knowledge. And yes, some of you were a little difficult to deal !But today I see a room full of talented young adults who is full of hope in the future. I hope you'll remember the important people in your lives who helped and support you — your parents, your teachers, your classmate and your friends. Please consider how they’ve done for you and what they mean for you. Lastly, the end of junior high school is the beginning of a new life. You’ll make mistake along the way, but the key is to learn from your mistakes and never give up. But along with difficulties, there will also be many excited things wait for you. Behind each door you open is chances to learning new things, and you have the ability to make your own choices. Choose wise and be responsible for your decisions and actions. Although you have to go your separate ways now, but I hope that in a few years’ time, you’ll come back to visit our school.
As you set out on our new journey, you shouldn’t forget where you came from. The future is your. Good luck and hope to see you again sometimes soon!
6．【2023四川成都一模】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起不计分）
The other day, I discover I couldn't move my right arm and fingers after sleeping through a flight. Having diagnosed me with neural injury, the doctor suggested I could try acupuncture(针灸). So I followed his advices and began my treatment. Dozens tiny needles were inserted across my arm and fingers. I dared not move, because even a small change of position could cause a acute pain. Two weeks went by since I could eat a meal with chopsticks and it took a month for my arm and fingers to return back to their normal functions. I was very amazing at how magic these needles were. That I had always considered old-fashioned and useless turned out to be of great use. I hope acupuncture, with its help I recovered, will continue to bring health to other people.
7．【2023河南漯河一模】下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Qinghai Lake has seen it largest water areas since 2004 as a result of increased rainfall and improving ecological conservation. Increased rainfall was the mainly reason for the lake’s water area expansion. Enhanced ecological conservation also played the important role.
The lake has been shrinking since the 1950s due to multiple reason, such as human activities. It was the combined efforts of conservation and changes to the regional climate which turned things around.
In 2008, Qinghai launched a 10-year plan on the ecological environment protection as well comprehensive management of the Qinghai Lake basin. However, the improved ecosystem of the lake has benefited from a variety of plant and animal species.
8．【2023河南开封一模】下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last weekend,my classmates and I took the trip to the Wetland Park.Upon arrival,we attracted by the beautiful scenery there. The park was really a nice place for him to go bird-watching. We followed a guide,who brief introduction was interesting. We saw differently types of birds and took a lot of picture. After lunch,we divided ourselves from groups to play games and sing songs. At around 5p.m, we had started to walk back. The trip was of great useful. It offered us a chance to get close to nature，and made us know the importance of protect the environment.
9．【2023四川绵阳一模】下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Before the holiday, I thought about doing something meaningfully. Suddenly, I remembered that there was a lot of primary school students putting up small shops and sell red bags on the street last Spring Festival. Wanting to have a try, so I begged my father to support him. He bought some lovely red bags and small toy. For the first time in my life I begin to sell things at the gate of the park. This experience of selling taught me the secret of communicating strangers, and I understood what hard it is for my parents to make money.
10．【2023陕西咸阳一模】下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As children grow, they usually wants to pull away from their parents and develop their own personality. They may act different. A child who used to being friendly can easily become angry. One who once enjoyed spend time with his family may choose to stay lonely.
Although these changes in behavior can be difficult, but they are for the most part a normal part. But many parent may not know when it is not normal. Sarah Clarke, who is a co-director of the study, notes these changes can make it challenging to understand a child emotional state. So, to ask mental health expert for help is necessary when you were puzzled.
11．【2023陕西渭南一模】下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
While in New Zealand as an exchange student, I stay with a host family. My host parents organized many activities for me at my spare time to relieve my homesickness. However, life in New Zealand isn’t easily to me. My main problem was the language, I was failed to understand much and that lasted for several week. Fortunately, I soon made several friends, whom help made me adapt gradually. They talked about life both in China and in New Zealand, learn more about each other’s culture. Now back home, I still remember the life here. For me, it is unique and valuable experience.
