Unit 4 Finding your way 书面表达（含解析）牛津译林版 七年级下册英语题型专项集训
1．假定你是李华，请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件，邀请你的好朋友Peter一起去翠湖公园野餐。
提示：(1) 你的打算：步行去公园，玩游戏，放风筝等；
(2) 介绍公园：公园离家很近，里面有花有树，环境优美；
(3) 告诉他前往的路线：路线见图。
要求: (1) 包含以上所有信息，为使行文连贯可适当增加细节内容；
(2) 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清楚；
(3) 不少于60词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I am going to have a picnic at Cuihu Park this weekend. Would you like to come with me
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I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假如你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文已有两年，为祝贺她顺利通过考试，学有所成，并欢送她回国，你和同学们打算给她举办一场欢送会。现在请你用英文给她发一封email，邀请她参加欢送会。
内容提示：
1. 感谢她对你们英语学习的帮助；
2. 时间：本周六晚上6点；
3. 活动：准备了大量的食物和饮料, 你们准备玩一些游戏；
4. 地点：阳光俱乐部（the Sun Club）302房间；
5. 路线：在她所住旅馆（hotel）的门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。
注意事项：
1. 须包括上述所有内容, 可以适当增加细节, 以使内容连贯；
2. 词数70左右。开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇：欢送会farewell party直接地directly
Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am happy you have made great progress in your two years of studying in China.
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I wish you success in the years ahead!
Yours,
Li Hua
3．你的远方朋友Kathy想从北京到你所在的海滨城市玩几天。
请根据以下要点给她写一封信，告诉她怎样到你家等内容。
1.出火车站乘9路公交车至迎宾路社区；
2.你家在社区中心，即在公交站后边；
3.你家离大海不远，可以每天步行去那儿。
注意：
1.可以适当增加细节；
2.词数：80词左右，短文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Kathy，
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Yours,
Sue
4．本周日是你的15岁生日，你想邀请你的同学们来参加你的生日聚会。请你写一封80个词左右的邀请信，信中必须说明到达你家的路线。要点如下：
1.时间：本周日中午12：00开始。地点：你家。
内容：聚餐、唱歌、跳舞等各类活动。
2.路线：走出校门，向右拐，一直往前走，在第三个路口向左转。经过中国银行并穿过人民路，在路的左边有一幢高楼，你家就在504室。
Dear friends,
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Yours,
Jim
5．书面表达
Simon邀请Neil到他家参加他的生日聚会。请根据提示写一篇70词左右的短文。
提示：
从学校大门出来，乘地铁，从B出口出来，然后向右转，一直走并经过天桥。然后沿着第五大街直走，经过红楼，当你来到红绿灯处时，过马路。继续一直走到路的尽头，你会看到一棵树，Simon家就在它的后面。
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6．书面表达.
假如你是Millie，你打算在家举办一个生日聚会，请你根据以下提示，给Simon写一封邀请信，请他来参加聚会。80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：1.时间：4月21日，本周六，下午两点。
2．父母会准备大量的食物和饮料。
3．路线：乘地铁，从A出口出来，向右转，沿着淮海路走，然后在交通灯处左转，直走，就会在左边看见一家邮局，我家就在邮局的后面。
Dear Simon，
I am going to have a birthday party at home this Saturday. _________________________
I am looking forward to seeing you at the party.
Yours，
Millie
7．假设你是Jacky，明天是你的生日，你想请你的同学参加你的生日派对。请根据下面的
提示，写一封70词左右的email给Wilson，告诉他有关派对的事宜及去你家的路线。
Time: From 5:00 to 7:30 in the afternoon
Place: Home
Location: Rongchang Garden
Route: Walk along Qinhuai Road from the school, turn left into Xinglong Street at the second turning,see the gate on your right
Activities: Make dumplings, play games
Dear Wilson,
Tomorrow is my birthday and I am going to have a party for it.
Best wishes,
Jacky
8．书面表达
请你根据提示介绍一下East Supermarket，要求介绍该超市的位置、特点及某一天你在该超市所见到的或所做的事情。
英语提示词：between...and...，Leo’s Restaurant，the police station，big，all kinds of，today，Sunday，see，talk with，shop assistant
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9．Andy想在周末举办一个聚会，他想请外教Mr. Green也参加。请你替他写一封邀请信，60词左右(开头和结尾不计入总词数)。
要点：1. 时间：周六晚6点—8点；
2. 地点：Andy家；
3. 被邀请者：Andy的老师和同学；
4. 路线：从学校门口坐3路公交车到Beijing Road下车，然后向前走大约1分钟，右拐进迎春街；
5. Andy将于周六晚5点40分在迎春街的第一幢大楼前等Mr. Green。
Dear Mr. Green,
I will have a party this Saturday evening. I hope you will come to my party if you have time.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All my family look forward to seeing you at the party.
Lots of love
Andy
10．书面表达。
你的朋友打算这个星期天下午2:00去野营，地点就在海边的小公园。你给Bob 写了一封邀请信。请按照下面的线路，写信给Bob：沿着Happy Road往前走，在红绿灯处向左拐，在第二个拐弯处向右拐，走过桥进入Binghe Road，一直往前走，就会看到海边的小公园。公园里鸟语花香，我们既可以泛舟湖上，也可以唱歌、跳舞、做游戏。公园里还有一个小动物园，你可以看到各种各样的动物。长颈鹿们的长脖子帮助它们吃树上的叶子；猴子跳来跳去，引人发笑；大象的大耳朵就像张开的扇子。我确定这会非常有趣。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Peter,
I am going to have a picnic at Cuihu Park this weekend. Would you like to come with me
The park is beautiful with many trees and flowers. I am going to walk there and I am going to play games and fly kites. The park is not far from my home. It’s easy to get there. Just go straight and turn right at the first turning. Walk along the street and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. It is opposite a restaurant.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：一般将来时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，仔细阅读所给内容；
第二步，具体阐述你的打算并介绍公园；
第三步，描述前往公园的路线。
[亮点词汇]
①beautiful美丽的
②far from...离……远
③go straight直走
④turn right/left向右/左转
[高分句型]
①Walk along the street and turn left when you find a hospital.（祈使句，when引导的时间状语从句）
2．One possible version:
Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am happy you have made great progress in your two years of studying in China.
Thanks you so much for your help with our English during your study here! So we will hold a farewell party for you in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 p.m. We’ll have plenty of food and drinks and play some games.
By the way, you can take No. 332 bus in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.
I wish you success in the years ahead!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求给Jane发一封电子邮件，邀请她参加欢送会；要求包含所有内容提示。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时和一般将来时；采用第一和第二人称；可采用4段落格式，第一段和第四段都已给出；第二段：通知对方活动地点、时间和活动内容；第三段：告知对方路线。
3．例文Dear Kathy
Welcome to my hometown! Now I am happy to tell you the way to my house. After you come out of the train station，you can take the Number 9 bus to Yingbin Road Community. My home is in the centre of the community. It’s behind the bus stop. You can't miss it. By the way, my home is not far from the sea. So we can walk there every day. The sea is very beautiful. I think you will have a great time here.
Yours，
Sue
【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，写信告诉Kathy怎样到我家。
【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Now I am happy to…，My home is…，I think…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头欢迎Kathy来我的家乡，接下来介绍怎样到我家，最后祝愿她在这里玩得高兴。此处the way to, come out of, in the centre of, by the way, have a great time等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
4．Dear friends，
This Sunday is my 15th birthday. Could you come to my party I plan to have the party at home. It will begin at 12 o’clock this Sunday noon. We can have dinner, sing and dance. Of course, you can do many other things.
Now, let me tell you the way to my home.
First, go out of the school. Then turn right and go along the street all the time. When you see the third turning, turn left. Walk past Bank of China, and go along Renming Street. There is a high building on the left side of the street. My home is Room 504.
Yours
Jim
【详解】这是一篇书信作文，根据材料中的相关信息写一封邀请信。所提供的材料中列举了到达你家的路线。主要从1. 时间：本周日中午12：00开始。地点：你家。内容：聚餐、唱歌、跳舞等各类活动。 2. 路线：走出校门，向右拐，一直往前走，在第三个路口向左转。经过中国银行并穿过人民路，在路的左边有一幢高楼，你家就在504室。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】When you see the third turning, turn left. 当你看到第三个转弯处时，向左转。
句子When you see the third turning是由when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】There is a high building on the left side of the street. 这条街左边有一座高楼。
该句话用there be结构来写的。
5．One passible version: Here is the route to Simon's home. Walk out of the school gate. Take the underground, get out at Exit B and turn right. Walk straight on and you'll see a bridge. Then cross the bridge. Walk along
Fifth Street. You'll pass the Red Building. Cross the road when you are at the traffic lights. Walk on until you get to the end of the road. You will see a tree. Simon's home is behind it.
【分析】这是一篇材料作文。
【详解】英语作文一般分为三个部分
第一部分：开篇点题——交代写作目的：介绍怎么去Simon家的路线。
第二部分：具体内容——描述具体路线：从学校大门出来，乘地铁，从B出口出来，然后向右转，一直走并经过天桥。然后沿着第五大街直走，经过红楼，当你来到红绿灯处时，过马路。继续一直走到路的尽头，你会看到一棵树，Simon家就在它的后面。
第三部分：提醒对方不要错过自己的房子。
6．Dear Simon，
I am going to have a birthday party at home this Saturday. I would like to invite you to my party. The party will start at 2 p．m. on 21 April. My parents will prepare plenty of food and drinks for us. We will also sing together and play games.
You can come to my home by underground.You can get out at Exit A. Turn right and walk along Huaihai Road. Then turn left at the traffic lights and walk straight on. You will see a post office on your left. My home is behind it.
I am looking forward to seeing you at the party.
Yours，
Millie
【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，给Simon写一封邀请信，请他来参加我的生日聚会。
【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am going to……，I would like to……，We will……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我要邀请你参加我的生日聚会，接下来介绍生日聚会的情况以及来我家的路线，最后我期望在聚会上看见你。此处would like to, invite sb to, by underground, get out, turn left, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
7．Dear Wilson,
Tomorrow is my birthday and I am going to have a party for it. It will be from 5:00 p.m. to 7:30 p.m. I hope you can
come.
It is easy to go from the school to my home. My home is in Rongchang Garden. You can walk along Qinhuai
Road from the school and turn left into Xinglong Street at the second turning.
Rongchang Garden is just on your right. I will wait for you at the gate. Please call me before you get here.We will
make dumplings together and after dinner we will play some games. I am sure you will enjoy them.
Best wishes,
Jacky
【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be going to，have a party，from to，walk along，turn left，at the second turning，on your right，wait for，at the gate，play some games等。而Tomorrow is my birthday and I am going to have a party for it. / I will wait for you at the gate./Please call me before you get here./I am sure you will enjoy them.等多种时态和从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
8．East Supermarket
There is a new supermarket near my home. Its name is East Supermarket. It’s between Leo’s Restaurant and the police station. It’s very big. And it’s very clean. There are all kinds of clothes，toys，food and fruit in it. And the clothes are very cheap.
Today is Sunday. The weather is sunny. I go to East Supermarket with my sister. There I see a young woman in red. She is talking with the shop assistant.
【详解】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了大量短语，例如a new supermarket，near my home，between…and…，all kinds of，go to East Supermarket，with my sister，in red，talk with等。同时There is a new supermarket near my home. / There are all kinds of clothes，toys，food and fruit in it.等多种there be句式的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。
点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，可把提示的单词或短语结合实际展开合理的想象，把它们拓展成一个个英文句子。还要注意在行文中使用一些常见的短语，会给习作增色。
9．例文
Dear Mr. Green,
I will have a party this Saturday evening. I hope you will come to my party if you have time. It will last from six o’clock to eight o’clock in my house. The people who are invited are my teachers and classmates. I’m sure you know all of them, so don’t worry you will be alone. Anyway, if you come here, you can take the No.3 bus in front of our school gate, get off on Beijing Road, walk straight on for about one minute, then turn right into Yingchun Street. I will wait for you in front of the first building in Yingchun Street at twenty to six.
All my family look forward to seeing you at the party.
Lots of love
Andy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邀请信；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时和一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容给Mr. Green写一封邀请信，注意要点齐全，逻辑清晰，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点题，表明写信的目的是邀请对方参加聚会；
第二步，具体介绍聚会的时间、地点、被邀请者及乘车路线等信息；
第三步，书写结语，期待对方的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①get off 下车
②in front of在……前面
③wait for等待
[高分句型]
①The people who are invited are my teachers and classmates.（who引导定语从句）
②if you come here, you can take the No.3 bus in front of our school gate, get off on Beijing Road, walk straight on for about one minute, then turn right into Yingchun Street.（if引导的条件状语从句）
10．Dear Bob,
I am very glad to invite you to a picnic. We will have the picnic in the small park near the sea at 2:00 p.m this Sunday. Here is the way to it: Go along Happy Road and take the second turning on the right. Walk across the bridge into Binghe Road. Go straight on, you will see the small park near the sea. The park is very beautiful. We can go boating there, and we can also sing, dance and play games. There is a small zoo in the park, so we can see all kinds of animals. We will see the giraffes. Their long necks help them eat the leaves from the tree. The monkeys jump around and make people laugh. The elephants’ ears are like open fans. I hope you can come to have a good time with us.
Yours faithfully,
Tim
【详解】本篇作文主要讲述了星期天要和朋友去野营, 想邀请Bob去参加，并给他交代了地址和那里比较好玩的地方。写作时注意条理清晰，和汉译英的正确性，注意且不可逐条翻译，注意句子和句子之间的连贯性。本文两点：首先在格式上符合书信要求，思路条理清晰。句式也体现了多样性，例如Go straight on, you will see the small park near the sea. The monkeys jump around and make people laugh. 在语句之间使用了一些例如and, so, 等连词，使文章具有连贯性，是一篇很不错的文章。
