六年级英语上册期末复习专项四（作文训练）
根据表格内容，描写人物Amy的变化。要求语句通顺，不少于6句话。
Age Height Character (性格) Appearance(外貌) Favourite season Ability
Then 7 years old 1.3 metres quiet short; short hair spring sing
Now 13 years old 1.65 metres active tall; long hair winter draw and play the piano
看下面表格所给的内容，根据你自己的需要，选出合适的内容介绍你自己的情况及你上周的活动。请根据提示写一篇不少于6句话的短文，可以适当发挥。
Age Weight Height Hobby Every weekend Last weekend
11 41kilograms 1.63metres play the piano do homework play basketball,read books,cook
Mike结束了惠州的旅行，他写了一封邮件给他的笔友Jim，告诉他上周旅行发生的事情，请以A wonderful trip为题，请根据提示写一篇不少于6句话的短文，可以适当发挥。
请根据图片信息写作。要求:1.书写规范，内容全面；2.用正确的时态表达，不少于6句话。
Zip 向她的朋友John 分享了她这几年在中国的变化及对未来的畅想，请根据提示写一篇不少于6句话的短文，可以适当发挥。
转眼间，小学生活将要结束了。在这六年里，我们都发生了很多变化。请你根据表格内容完成写作。
要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。
2.可以展开合理的想象，不少于6句话。
3.文中不得出现考生的学校和真实姓名。
Height Character Ability Hobby
Before 1.26m shy and quiet swim（×） draw pictures
Now 1.66m funny and active swim （√） go cycling
“双减政策实施以来，学生的课外生活越来越丰富了。假如你是Amy，以“Last weekend”为题，根据提示写一篇不少于6句话的短文，来描述一下你上周末的活动吧!可以适当发挥。
请根据思维导图，以“My changes”写一篇不少于6句话的短文。
下面是Mike五年前，现在和十年后的一些信息。请你根据提示信息介绍Mike的变化。要求：1.注意三种时态的变化；2.不少于6句话。
5 years ago Now 10 years later
1.2metres；30 kilograms 13 years old ；1.65m；50 kg teacher；drive to work
同学们，了解完Lucy和Amy的精彩生活，请你根据提示介绍一下你的好朋友吧！短文不少于6句话，可以适当发挥。
假如你是John,请结合微博上的图片，以“Changes in me”为题，介绍一下3年前后你的诸多变化吧。
five years ago now ten years later
1.23 metres quiet couldn’t ride a bike 1.64 metres active go cycling every day doctor go to work by car like playing ping-pong
以上表格是John五年前、现在和十年后的一些信息。请根据提示的信息介绍John的变化，写一篇不少于6句话的短文，可以适当发挥。
计划让你掌控未来，而不是被未来掌控。六年的小学生活已经接近尾期，暑期即将来临。根据以下思维导图提示，用英文写一篇暑期计划。要求不少于6句话，可以适当发挥。
上周末Peter和苏轼乘坐公共汽车来到高榜山（Gaobang Mountain）,他们爬了山，还吃了豆腐脑（Tofu Pudding）和荔枝(lychees)，真是快乐的一天！下周末他们将会去北京，还会拍许多照片。要求语句通顺，不少于六句话，可以适当发挥想象。
John想从家里出发去书店买一本故事书。请你根据提示写出他行走的路线。要求语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，可以适当发挥，不少于6句话的。
home park hospital
cinema ↓ shop museum
→
library zoo bookstore
参考答案：
作文评分标准：
1.短文通顺完整，表达清楚，语法基本无误，书写规范，卷面整洁。5-6分；
2.短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，基本无语法错误，书写较规范。3-4分；
3.能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语法错误较多，但尚能表达。1-2分；
4.仅能写明部分要点，短文不完整，语法错误多，影响意思表达。0-1分。
（单词、语法错误两处扣0.5）
范文：
Six years ago, Amy was 7 years old. She was 1.3 metres. She was quiet. She was short and she had short hair. She liked spring best.She could sing. But now,she is 13 years old.She is 1.65metres. She is active. She is tall and she has long hair.She likes winter best.She can draw and play the piano well. She really changed a lot.
A wonderful trip
Dear Jim：
Hello！Jim,Let me tell you something about my trip.I went to Huizhou last week.I went there with my family.We went to Huizhou by plane..First, I met my friend Wu Binbin.We went to the West Lake.It was beautiful.We also went to Double Moon Bay.We swam in the sea and ate some delicious seafood.I ran a marathon.I was so tried.The last day.We went to Honghua Lake. We rode a bike.We had a good time.I love Huizhou.
Yours,
Mike
My changes
Hello,I am Lily.How time flies! I changed a lot. Before,I was 1.36m. Now,I am 1.61m. Before,I was 34 kilograms. Now,I was 55 kilograms. Before, I liked wearing T-shirt.I couldn’t ride a bike.I was quiet in class. Now,I like wearing dress.I can swim and I go swimming every weekend. I am active and I have many friends now.
Lily is my friend. She is tall and thin. She has long hair and big eyes. She likes dancing and drawing. She goes to school on foot. She wants to be a dancer one day. Last holiday, she read some books and went camping. She is going to Sanya this summer holiday. She is going to go fishing.
My name is John. Before, I was short. I was 1.23 metres. Now, I am tall. I am 1.64 metres. Before, I was quiet. Now, I am active. Before, I couldn’t ride my bike well. Now, I go cycling every day. I am going to be a doctor. I am going to go to work by car. I like playing ping-pong.
Peter and Sushi went to Gaobang Mountain last weekend. They went there by bus. They climbed the mountain. They ate bean jelly and lychees. It was a happy day! Peter and Sushi will go to Beijing. They will visit Tian’anmen. They will take lots of pictures.
John wants to go to the library.He wants to buy a storybook.The bookstore is not far from his home. He can go there on foot. He can go straight from his home, and turn left at the second crossing. Then go straight. He can see the bookstore on his right.
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