【备战2023高考英语】全国甲卷真题变式：09 书面表达
一、真题
1．（2022·全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1）海洋的重要性；
2）保护海洋的倡议。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
二、变式题
2．（2022高三上·望奎开学考）你校将举办题为"Let's save food"的英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，主要内容包括：
1）简述浪费粮食的现象；
2）节约粮食的意义：
3）发出倡议。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）题目已为你写好。
3．（2022·云南模拟）假定你是学校英文报主编李华，计划举行"身边的榜样"（A Role Model in My Life）征文活动。请你写一封邮件给英国朋友Eric约稿，邮件内容包括：
1）征文要求：主题、字数等；
2）截止时间：3月31日；
3）投稿邮箱：tegnstoday@。
注意:
1）词数100左右；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Erie,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2022高三上·重庆月考）今年夏天森林火灾频发，生态破坏严重。你校英文报以保护森林为主题，举办征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1）森林的重要性；
2）保护森林的倡议。
注意：1）词数不少于80;
2）短文的题目已为你写好。
Save the Forest
5．（2023高三上·青铜峡期末）新学期开始了，你校英文报正在举行"诚信为本"的征文活动，你打算以 “诚信考试”为题投稿，内容包括： 1）考试不诚信的现象；2）诚信考试的重要性；3）你的呼吁。
注意： 1）词数 100 左右；2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Take Exams Honestly
6．（2022高三上·长沙开学考）你校英语社团的微信公众号正在开展 "中国符号"
主题征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1）你心目中的中国符号；
2）简要介绍；
3）说明理由。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Symbol of China
7．（2022·淮北模拟）你校英语社团公众号正在开展征文活动，主题是"Where there is
a will, there is a way."请你结合自身经历，写一篇英文短文参与。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
8．（2023高三上·清远期末）你校英文报正在举行主题为"How Can We Relieve Pressure？"的征文比赛，请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1）压力的来源及其影响；
2）缓解压力的方法。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How Can We Relieve Pressure
9．（2020·昆明模拟）假如你是某英文报社的小记者李华，请你报道你校本周开展的题为“保护野生动物”的征文活动。内容包括：
1）活动目的；
2）征文情况。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
10．（2021高三下·凉山州开学考）假定你是李华，你们学校英语报社征文，题目是“我理想的高中生活”，请根据下列要点用英语写一篇征文。要点如下：
1）学习情况； 2）班级氛围； 3）课外活动。
注意：1）字数100左右。
2）开头已给出，不计入总字数。
I often imagine what my life
will be like in my dream high school.
答案解析部分
1．【答案】When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can't be thrown into ocean. What's more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主，举办英语征文比赛 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）海洋的重要性；2）保护海洋的倡议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. 运用了时间状语从句；Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. 运用了倒装句，并列句；Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. 运用了it作形式主语；First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.运用了主语从句； For example, garbage can't be thrown into ocean. 运用了被动语态；The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.运用了“the+比较级，the+比较级”固定句式；All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean.运用了虚拟语气。
2．【答案】Save Food and Oppose Food Waste
It is a common phenomenon that people order more food than they can eat, and even throw away their leftovers in restaurants, which has caused lots of wasting. Here, I'd like to give some advice on reducing food waste.
First, we should have the awareness of saving food. Besides, we ought to treasure grain wherever we are. Last but not least, we should have the courage to fight against wasting food.
Just as the saying goes, "Saving is earning." Saving food is a virtue. So let's act now to save food as much as possible.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇短文参赛 。写作背景： 你校将举办题为"Let's save food"的英语征文比赛。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）简述浪费粮食的现象；2）节约粮食的意义：3）发出倡议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：It is a common phenomenon that people order more food than they can eat, and even throw away their leftovers in restaurants, which has caused lots of wasting. 运用了比较状语从句，主语从句，非限制性定语从句； Besides, we ought to treasure grain wherever we are.运用了地点状语从句； Just as the saying goes, "Saving is earning." Saving food is a virtue. 运用了名言警句；So let's act now to save food as much as possible.运用了祈使句。
3．【答案】Dear Eric,
I'm Li Hua, chief editor of the school English newspaper. We are starting a new column which welcomes readers to write articles for it. I wonder whether you'd like to share your story. The requirements are as follows.
There must be many role models who have inspired you so much. The article is supposed to focus on the theme "A Role Model in My Life". As for the length of the text, there is no limit. While submitting your work, don't forget to include a self-introduction. Finally, please send your article to tecnstoday@ before the deadline of March 31st.
If you have any question, please feel free to contact me. Your contribution will be highly apprcciatcd.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以 学校英文报主编 李华的身份 写一封邮件给英国朋友Eric约稿 。写作背景：你 计划举行"身边的榜样"（A Role Model in My Life）征 文活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）征文要求：主题、字数等；2）截止时间：3月31日；3）投稿邮箱：tegnstoday@。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm Li Hua, chief editor of the school English newspaper. 运用了同位语；We are starting a new column which welcomes readers to write articles for it.运用了限制性定语从句； I wonder whether you'd like to share your story. 运用了宾语从句；There must be many role models who have inspired you so much.运用了限制性定语从句； While submitting your work, don't forget to include a self-introduction. 运用了省略；Finally, please send your article to tecnstoday@ before the deadline of March 31st.运用了祈使句；If you have any question, please feel free to contact me. 运用了条件状语从句，祈使句；Your contribution will be highly apprcciated.运用了被动语态。
4．【答案】 As you might know, deforestation has become a growing concern worldwide. It is high time that we took this issue seriously.
Forests are of great significance as they produce over 20% the Earth's oxygen, and house an incredible variety of wildlife. So, what can we do to make a difference To begin with, the local communities ought to develop sustainable agriculture. That way, it is more likely to achieve a balance between forest protection and economic development. In addition, it is essential for the government to outlaw excessive deforestation. As for us, we should raise our awareness of conserving forest resources. For instance, we can start from reducing our daily consumption of paper.
Forests are critical to the survival of every living thing on the Earth. Let's join hands to ensure a greener planet for the generations to come!
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 今年夏天森林火灾频发，生态破坏严重。你校英文报以保护森林为主题，举办征文比赛。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）森林的重要性；2）保护森林的倡议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： As you might know, deforestation has become a growing concern worldwide.运用了非限制性定语从句； It is high time that we took this issue seriously.运用了虚拟语气；Forests are of great significance as they produce over 20% the Earth's oxygen, and house an incredible variety of wildlife. 运用了原因状语从句； In addition, it is essential for the government to outlaw excessive deforestation. 运用了it作形式主语； Let's join hands to ensure a greener planet for the generations to come!运用了祈使句。
5．【答案】范文：
Take Exams Honestly
Nowadays quite a few students make too much of test results to behave honestly in exams, such as looking at others' papers or using their digital devices. They may obtain high grades by dishonest means but lose personal integrity and dignity.
In my opinion, taking exams with integrity is of primary importance to a student. Honesty is cherished as one of the most important Chinese traditional virtues. It's also the most prized qualities of a person. Besides, honesty is fundamental to academic and career success. As far as a student's concerned, it's a dishonest behavior and a shame as well to cheat in exams. As the old sayings go, honesty is the best policy and dishonesty is ultimately self-defeating.
It's highly advocated that we as students should value honesty. We should learn to be honest from an early age and behave with integrity in every way so as to excel morally and academically.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以“诚信考试”为题投稿。写作背景：新学期开始了，你校英文报正在举行"诚信为本"的征文活动 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1）考试不诚信的现象；2）诚信考试的重要性；3）你的呼吁。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：In my opinion, taking exams with integrity is of primary importance to a student. 运用了动名词作主语；Honesty is cherished as one of the most important Chinese traditional virtues. 运用了被动语态；As the old sayings go, honesty is the best policy and dishonesty is ultimately self-defeating. 运用了非限制性定语从句；It's highly advocated that we as students should value honesty. 运用了主语从句，虚拟语气。
6．【答案】A Symbol of China
Spring Festival, which is celebrated by all Chinese at home and abroad, is definitely a symbol of China.
For every Chinese family, Spring Festival bears unique meanings. On this occasion, families do thorough cleaning to welcome the new year, get together to enjoy big dinners on New year's eve and express best wishes via many other activities.
As a symbol of China, Spring Festival has been an integral part of Chinese culture. Meanwhile, the spirit of the festival — family — is always highly valued in the heart of every Chinese.
One possible version 2:
A Symbol of China
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Some of them are representative. So whenever people mention them, they will think of China. Those are called Chinese symbols. As for me, "Mid-Autumn Festival" is the most distinctive Symbol of China.
Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar, when all the family members will come home for the festival, enjoying the moon cakes and appreciating the beautiful moon. As one of the most representative Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity, which means Chinese people extremely value family union. That is why Mid-Autumn Festival is regarded as Symbol of China".
Mid-Autumn Festival is always my favorite holiday.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 你校英语社团的微信公众号正在开展 "中国符号" 主题征文活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你心目中的中国符号；2）简要介绍；3）说明理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： One possible version 1中的：Spring Festival, which is celebrated by all Chinese at home and abroad, is definitely a symbol of China.运用了非限制性定语从句； Meanwhile, the spirit of the festival — family — is always highly valued in the heart of every Chinese.运用了被动语态。
One possible version 2：As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China.运用了非限制性定语从句，there be句式；So whenever people mention them, they will think of China. 运用了时间状语从句；Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar, when all the family members will come home for the festival, enjoying the moon cakes and appreciating the beautiful moon. 运用了非限制性定语从句；As one of the most representative Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity, which means Chinese people extremely value family union.运用了非限制性定语从句； That is why Mid-Autumn Festival is regarded as Symbol of China".运用了表语从句。
7．【答案】 The widely accepted and well-known proverb "Where there is a will, there is a way." means that whenever we meet challenges, we will eventually succeed as long as we have a strong will.
It is widely recognized that thought decides behavior; nothing will be hard for a determined and persistent person. Now, we are faced with the College Entrance Examination, we need to set a goal for ourselves and strive for it, otherwise we will have no motivation to get our goal achieved. So, having a goal and working hard for it is the basis of our success. What we need to do now is to get rid of bad habits, improve study efficiency and discuss with our teachers actively. Everything comes to him who waits. Perseverance means victory.
Living in an age when the modern competition becomes more and more fierce, a strong will seems more than necessary. With this awareness, we can overcome all the challenges calmly and confidently.
【知识点】命题作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本体是一篇命题作文，要求考生你结合自身经历，写一篇英文短文参与你校英语社团公众号正在开展的主题为"Where there is a will, there is a way."征文活动。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。 例如： The widely accepted and well-known proverb "Where there is a will, there is a way." means that whenever we meet challenges, we will eventually succeed as long as we have a strong will.运用了宾语从句，时间状语从句，条件状语从句；It is widely recognized that thought decides behavior运用了主语从句； Now, we are faced with the College Entrance Examination, we need to set a goal for ourselves and strive for it, otherwise we will have no motivation to get our goal achieved. 运用了转折并列句；So, having a goal and working hard for it is the basis of our success. 运用了动名词短语作主语；What we need to do now is to get rid of bad habits, improve study efficiency and discuss with our teachers actively. 运用了主语从句；Everything comes to him who waits.运用了限制性定语从句；Living in an age when the modern competition becomes more and more fierce, a strong will seems more than necessary. 运用了现在分词作状语，时间状语从句。
8．【答案】How Can We Relieve Pressure
Nowadays, we high school seniors are under stress, which is mainly from heavy school work and our teachers, parents and even ourselves. Undoubtedly, it is likely to seriously affect our physical and mental health.
Despite the fact that we are always living with pressure, there are still many ways to relieve it. To begin with, we can adjust ourselves to facing the pressure positively. In addition, we are advised to communicate with people around more often. Last but not least, exercise matters as well.
It is impossible for us to be totally free from pressure. Only in appropriate ways can we properly deal with pressure.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇短文参赛 。写作背景： 你校英文报正在举行主题为"How Can We Relieve Pressure？"的征文比赛 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）压力的来源及其影响；2）缓解压力的方法。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Nowadays, we high school seniors are under stress, which is mainly from heavy school work and our teachers, parents and even ourselves.运用了非限制性定语从句；Despite the fact that we are always living with pressure, there are still many ways to relieve it. 运用了同位语从句，there be句式；In addition, we are advised to communicate with people around more often.运用了被动语态；It is impossible for us to be totally free from pressure. 运用了it作形式主语；Only in appropriate ways can we properly deal with pressure.运用了倒装句。
9．【答案】 This week our school held an essay contest whose theme is protecting wild animals. The purpose of this activity is to raise students' awareness of caring for wild animals, especially endangered ones.
The activity attracted a number of students. A total of 300 articles were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet. There are different styles of essays, including novels, poems, and letters. Some students expressed their great concern for the situation of wild animals, and others put forward a wide variety of measures to protect them.
The students have come to realize the importance of protecting wild animals through the activity.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以某英文报社的小记者李华李华的身份，报道你校本周开展的题为“保护野生动物”的征文活动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）活动目的；
2）征文情况。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：This week our school held an essay contest whose theme is protecting wild animals.运用了限制性定语从句； A total of 300 articles were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet. 运用了被动语态和非限制性定语从句；Some students expressed their great concern for the situation of wild animals, and others put forward a wide variety of measures to protect them.运用了并列句。
10．【答案】I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream high school. In my mind, my dream high school should not be so stressful and the schedule not so tight. We students have time to relax ourselves by listening to music and taking a lot of exercise.
In our class, everyone is friendly and helpful, who studies hard by themselves instead of being pushed by their teachers and parents.
Every day, after class at 4：00 o'clock, we are supposed to have a number of activities, in which we develop our own hobbies and interest, such as painting, photographing and so on. We are designed to have labor class, too—do some farming and gardening.
This is the high school that I dream of.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份，以“我理想的高中生活”为题写一篇征文。写作背景：你们学校英语报社征文，题目是“我理想的高中生活”。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）学习情况； 2）班级氛围； 3）课外活动。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：In my mind, my dream high school should not be so stressful and the schedule not so tight. 运用了并列句；In our class, everyone is friendly and helpful, who studies hard by themselves instead of being pushed by their teachers and parents.运用了非限制性定语从句；Every day, after class at 4：00 o'clock, we are supposed to have a number of activities, in which we develop our own hobbies and interest, such as painting, photographing and so on. 运用了非限制性定语从句；
This is the high school that I dream of.运用了限制性定语从句。
【备战2023高考英语】全国甲卷真题变式：09 书面表达
一、真题
1．（2022·全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1）海洋的重要性；
2）保护海洋的倡议。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can't be thrown into ocean. What's more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主，举办英语征文比赛 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）海洋的重要性；2）保护海洋的倡议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. 运用了时间状语从句；Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. 运用了倒装句，并列句；Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. 运用了it作形式主语；First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.运用了主语从句； For example, garbage can't be thrown into ocean. 运用了被动语态；The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.运用了“the+比较级，the+比较级”固定句式；All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean.运用了虚拟语气。
二、变式题
2．（2022高三上·望奎开学考）你校将举办题为"Let's save food"的英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，主要内容包括：
1）简述浪费粮食的现象；
2）节约粮食的意义：
3）发出倡议。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）题目已为你写好。
【答案】Save Food and Oppose Food Waste
It is a common phenomenon that people order more food than they can eat, and even throw away their leftovers in restaurants, which has caused lots of wasting. Here, I'd like to give some advice on reducing food waste.
First, we should have the awareness of saving food. Besides, we ought to treasure grain wherever we are. Last but not least, we should have the courage to fight against wasting food.
Just as the saying goes, "Saving is earning." Saving food is a virtue. So let's act now to save food as much as possible.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇短文参赛 。写作背景： 你校将举办题为"Let's save food"的英语征文比赛。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）简述浪费粮食的现象；2）节约粮食的意义：3）发出倡议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：It is a common phenomenon that people order more food than they can eat, and even throw away their leftovers in restaurants, which has caused lots of wasting. 运用了比较状语从句，主语从句，非限制性定语从句； Besides, we ought to treasure grain wherever we are.运用了地点状语从句； Just as the saying goes, "Saving is earning." Saving food is a virtue. 运用了名言警句；So let's act now to save food as much as possible.运用了祈使句。
3．（2022·云南模拟）假定你是学校英文报主编李华，计划举行"身边的榜样"（A Role Model in My Life）征文活动。请你写一封邮件给英国朋友Eric约稿，邮件内容包括：
1）征文要求：主题、字数等；
2）截止时间：3月31日；
3）投稿邮箱：tegnstoday@。
注意:
1）词数100左右；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Erie,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric,
I'm Li Hua, chief editor of the school English newspaper. We are starting a new column which welcomes readers to write articles for it. I wonder whether you'd like to share your story. The requirements are as follows.
There must be many role models who have inspired you so much. The article is supposed to focus on the theme "A Role Model in My Life". As for the length of the text, there is no limit. While submitting your work, don't forget to include a self-introduction. Finally, please send your article to tecnstoday@ before the deadline of March 31st.
If you have any question, please feel free to contact me. Your contribution will be highly apprcciatcd.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以 学校英文报主编 李华的身份 写一封邮件给英国朋友Eric约稿 。写作背景：你 计划举行"身边的榜样"（A Role Model in My Life）征 文活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）征文要求：主题、字数等；2）截止时间：3月31日；3）投稿邮箱：tegnstoday@。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm Li Hua, chief editor of the school English newspaper. 运用了同位语；We are starting a new column which welcomes readers to write articles for it.运用了限制性定语从句； I wonder whether you'd like to share your story. 运用了宾语从句；There must be many role models who have inspired you so much.运用了限制性定语从句； While submitting your work, don't forget to include a self-introduction. 运用了省略；Finally, please send your article to tecnstoday@ before the deadline of March 31st.运用了祈使句；If you have any question, please feel free to contact me. 运用了条件状语从句，祈使句；Your contribution will be highly apprcciated.运用了被动语态。
4．（2022高三上·重庆月考）今年夏天森林火灾频发，生态破坏严重。你校英文报以保护森林为主题，举办征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1）森林的重要性；
2）保护森林的倡议。
注意：1）词数不少于80;
2）短文的题目已为你写好。
Save the Forest
【答案】 As you might know, deforestation has become a growing concern worldwide. It is high time that we took this issue seriously.
Forests are of great significance as they produce over 20% the Earth's oxygen, and house an incredible variety of wildlife. So, what can we do to make a difference To begin with, the local communities ought to develop sustainable agriculture. That way, it is more likely to achieve a balance between forest protection and economic development. In addition, it is essential for the government to outlaw excessive deforestation. As for us, we should raise our awareness of conserving forest resources. For instance, we can start from reducing our daily consumption of paper.
Forests are critical to the survival of every living thing on the Earth. Let's join hands to ensure a greener planet for the generations to come!
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 今年夏天森林火灾频发，生态破坏严重。你校英文报以保护森林为主题，举办征文比赛。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）森林的重要性；2）保护森林的倡议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： As you might know, deforestation has become a growing concern worldwide.运用了非限制性定语从句； It is high time that we took this issue seriously.运用了虚拟语气；Forests are of great significance as they produce over 20% the Earth's oxygen, and house an incredible variety of wildlife. 运用了原因状语从句； In addition, it is essential for the government to outlaw excessive deforestation. 运用了it作形式主语； Let's join hands to ensure a greener planet for the generations to come!运用了祈使句。
5．（2023高三上·青铜峡期末）新学期开始了，你校英文报正在举行"诚信为本"的征文活动，你打算以 “诚信考试”为题投稿，内容包括： 1）考试不诚信的现象；2）诚信考试的重要性；3）你的呼吁。
注意： 1）词数 100 左右；2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Take Exams Honestly
【答案】范文：
Take Exams Honestly
Nowadays quite a few students make too much of test results to behave honestly in exams, such as looking at others' papers or using their digital devices. They may obtain high grades by dishonest means but lose personal integrity and dignity.
In my opinion, taking exams with integrity is of primary importance to a student. Honesty is cherished as one of the most important Chinese traditional virtues. It's also the most prized qualities of a person. Besides, honesty is fundamental to academic and career success. As far as a student's concerned, it's a dishonest behavior and a shame as well to cheat in exams. As the old sayings go, honesty is the best policy and dishonesty is ultimately self-defeating.
It's highly advocated that we as students should value honesty. We should learn to be honest from an early age and behave with integrity in every way so as to excel morally and academically.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以“诚信考试”为题投稿。写作背景：新学期开始了，你校英文报正在举行"诚信为本"的征文活动 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1）考试不诚信的现象；2）诚信考试的重要性；3）你的呼吁。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：In my opinion, taking exams with integrity is of primary importance to a student. 运用了动名词作主语；Honesty is cherished as one of the most important Chinese traditional virtues. 运用了被动语态；As the old sayings go, honesty is the best policy and dishonesty is ultimately self-defeating. 运用了非限制性定语从句；It's highly advocated that we as students should value honesty. 运用了主语从句，虚拟语气。
6．（2022高三上·长沙开学考）你校英语社团的微信公众号正在开展 "中国符号"
主题征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1）你心目中的中国符号；
2）简要介绍；
3）说明理由。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Symbol of China
【答案】A Symbol of China
Spring Festival, which is celebrated by all Chinese at home and abroad, is definitely a symbol of China.
For every Chinese family, Spring Festival bears unique meanings. On this occasion, families do thorough cleaning to welcome the new year, get together to enjoy big dinners on New year's eve and express best wishes via many other activities.
As a symbol of China, Spring Festival has been an integral part of Chinese culture. Meanwhile, the spirit of the festival — family — is always highly valued in the heart of every Chinese.
One possible version 2:
A Symbol of China
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Some of them are representative. So whenever people mention them, they will think of China. Those are called Chinese symbols. As for me, "Mid-Autumn Festival" is the most distinctive Symbol of China.
Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar, when all the family members will come home for the festival, enjoying the moon cakes and appreciating the beautiful moon. As one of the most representative Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity, which means Chinese people extremely value family union. That is why Mid-Autumn Festival is regarded as Symbol of China".
Mid-Autumn Festival is always my favorite holiday.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 你校英语社团的微信公众号正在开展 "中国符号" 主题征文活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你心目中的中国符号；2）简要介绍；3）说明理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： One possible version 1中的：Spring Festival, which is celebrated by all Chinese at home and abroad, is definitely a symbol of China.运用了非限制性定语从句； Meanwhile, the spirit of the festival — family — is always highly valued in the heart of every Chinese.运用了被动语态。
One possible version 2：As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China.运用了非限制性定语从句，there be句式；So whenever people mention them, they will think of China. 运用了时间状语从句；Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar, when all the family members will come home for the festival, enjoying the moon cakes and appreciating the beautiful moon. 运用了非限制性定语从句；As one of the most representative Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity, which means Chinese people extremely value family union.运用了非限制性定语从句； That is why Mid-Autumn Festival is regarded as Symbol of China".运用了表语从句。
7．（2022·淮北模拟）你校英语社团公众号正在开展征文活动，主题是"Where there is
a will, there is a way."请你结合自身经历，写一篇英文短文参与。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】 The widely accepted and well-known proverb "Where there is a will, there is a way." means that whenever we meet challenges, we will eventually succeed as long as we have a strong will.
It is widely recognized that thought decides behavior; nothing will be hard for a determined and persistent person. Now, we are faced with the College Entrance Examination, we need to set a goal for ourselves and strive for it, otherwise we will have no motivation to get our goal achieved. So, having a goal and working hard for it is the basis of our success. What we need to do now is to get rid of bad habits, improve study efficiency and discuss with our teachers actively. Everything comes to him who waits. Perseverance means victory.
Living in an age when the modern competition becomes more and more fierce, a strong will seems more than necessary. With this awareness, we can overcome all the challenges calmly and confidently.
【知识点】命题作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本体是一篇命题作文，要求考生你结合自身经历，写一篇英文短文参与你校英语社团公众号正在开展的主题为"Where there is a will, there is a way."征文活动。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。 例如： The widely accepted and well-known proverb "Where there is a will, there is a way." means that whenever we meet challenges, we will eventually succeed as long as we have a strong will.运用了宾语从句，时间状语从句，条件状语从句；It is widely recognized that thought decides behavior运用了主语从句； Now, we are faced with the College Entrance Examination, we need to set a goal for ourselves and strive for it, otherwise we will have no motivation to get our goal achieved. 运用了转折并列句；So, having a goal and working hard for it is the basis of our success. 运用了动名词短语作主语；What we need to do now is to get rid of bad habits, improve study efficiency and discuss with our teachers actively. 运用了主语从句；Everything comes to him who waits.运用了限制性定语从句；Living in an age when the modern competition becomes more and more fierce, a strong will seems more than necessary. 运用了现在分词作状语，时间状语从句。
8．（2023高三上·清远期末）你校英文报正在举行主题为"How Can We Relieve Pressure？"的征文比赛，请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1）压力的来源及其影响；
2）缓解压力的方法。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How Can We Relieve Pressure
【答案】How Can We Relieve Pressure
Nowadays, we high school seniors are under stress, which is mainly from heavy school work and our teachers, parents and even ourselves. Undoubtedly, it is likely to seriously affect our physical and mental health.
Despite the fact that we are always living with pressure, there are still many ways to relieve it. To begin with, we can adjust ourselves to facing the pressure positively. In addition, we are advised to communicate with people around more often. Last but not least, exercise matters as well.
It is impossible for us to be totally free from pressure. Only in appropriate ways can we properly deal with pressure.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇短文参赛 。写作背景： 你校英文报正在举行主题为"How Can We Relieve Pressure？"的征文比赛 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）压力的来源及其影响；2）缓解压力的方法。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Nowadays, we high school seniors are under stress, which is mainly from heavy school work and our teachers, parents and even ourselves.运用了非限制性定语从句；Despite the fact that we are always living with pressure, there are still many ways to relieve it. 运用了同位语从句，there be句式；In addition, we are advised to communicate with people around more often.运用了被动语态；It is impossible for us to be totally free from pressure. 运用了it作形式主语；Only in appropriate ways can we properly deal with pressure.运用了倒装句。
9．（2020·昆明模拟）假如你是某英文报社的小记者李华，请你报道你校本周开展的题为“保护野生动物”的征文活动。内容包括：
1）活动目的；
2）征文情况。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】 This week our school held an essay contest whose theme is protecting wild animals. The purpose of this activity is to raise students' awareness of caring for wild animals, especially endangered ones.
The activity attracted a number of students. A total of 300 articles were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet. There are different styles of essays, including novels, poems, and letters. Some students expressed their great concern for the situation of wild animals, and others put forward a wide variety of measures to protect them.
The students have come to realize the importance of protecting wild animals through the activity.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以某英文报社的小记者李华李华的身份，报道你校本周开展的题为“保护野生动物”的征文活动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）活动目的；
2）征文情况。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：This week our school held an essay contest whose theme is protecting wild animals.运用了限制性定语从句； A total of 300 articles were received, all of which were submitted through the Internet. 运用了被动语态和非限制性定语从句；Some students expressed their great concern for the situation of wild animals, and others put forward a wide variety of measures to protect them.运用了并列句。
10．（2021高三下·凉山州开学考）假定你是李华，你们学校英语报社征文，题目是“我理想的高中生活”，请根据下列要点用英语写一篇征文。要点如下：
1）学习情况； 2）班级氛围； 3）课外活动。
注意：1）字数100左右。
2）开头已给出，不计入总字数。
I often imagine what my life
will be like in my dream high school.
【答案】I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream high school. In my mind, my dream high school should not be so stressful and the schedule not so tight. We students have time to relax ourselves by listening to music and taking a lot of exercise.
In our class, everyone is friendly and helpful, who studies hard by themselves instead of being pushed by their teachers and parents.
Every day, after class at 4：00 o'clock, we are supposed to have a number of activities, in which we develop our own hobbies and interest, such as painting, photographing and so on. We are designed to have labor class, too—do some farming and gardening.
This is the high school that I dream of.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份，以“我理想的高中生活”为题写一篇征文。写作背景：你们学校英语报社征文，题目是“我理想的高中生活”。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）学习情况； 2）班级氛围； 3）课外活动。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：In my mind, my dream high school should not be so stressful and the schedule not so tight. 运用了并列句；In our class, everyone is friendly and helpful, who studies hard by themselves instead of being pushed by their teachers and parents.运用了非限制性定语从句；Every day, after class at 4：00 o'clock, we are supposed to have a number of activities, in which we develop our own hobbies and interest, such as painting, photographing and so on. 运用了非限制性定语从句；
This is the high school that I dream of.运用了限制性定语从句。
