Unit 1 Asia
单元话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1．BBC 纪录片Wild China正在拍摄有关中国大好河山的纪录片，现需要向全社会征集相关素材。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语文章，向该栏目推荐你的家乡。
要点：
1. 家乡的地理位置；
2. 值得一游的景点；
3. 让你印象深刻的变化；
4. 你对家乡的感受。
注意：
（1）短文须包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数：90-110。
参考词汇：recommend vt. 推荐，介绍；impressive adj. 给人印象深刻的；
sight spot 景点；be worth doing… 是值得……。
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【答案】例文
In the middle of Zhejiang lies the peaceful city of Zhuji. It is my hometown. The air here is always moist. People here lives a slow life.
My hometown is not only known as the hometown of Xishi, one of the Four Beauties of ancient China, but also famous for Wuxie Waterfalls. It has attracted many tourists and is worth visiting.
In the past few years, Zhuji has become different from what it used to be like. Many changes have been taken place. More tall buildings and shopping malls have been built. People are living a happier and more convenient life. I love my hometown and look forward to its better future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描写家乡的地理位置；
第二步，描写家乡的景点；
第三步，描写家乡的变化和对家乡的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be known as以……而闻名
②take place发生
③look forward to期盼
[高分句型]
①In the past few years, Zhuji has become different from what it used to be like.（what引导的宾语从句）
2．泰州是著名的教育之乡。你的英国朋友想了解泰州的教育，想请你用英语介绍一下，你列出如下提纲：
1. 良好的教育环境（校园美丽，名人众多……写1-2点）；
2. 优秀的老师；
3. 自己的学习表现。
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，可适当拓展；
2. 不得使用真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3. 词数 100 左右。
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【答案】例文
I am proud to be a student in Taizhou. There is a good educational environment. The campus here is beautiful, and there are many celebrities, such as Hu Yuan, Wang Anshi and so on. There are also many libraries and famous universities.
The teachers here are also excellent. Most of them are teachers who graduated from famous universities, and some even returned from studying abroad. They have advanced teaching methods and teaching ideas. They also produce a large number of excellent students.
In addition to learning cultural knowledge, I also join many clubs, such as basketball club, chess club, dancing club and so on. Here I not only learn cultural knowledge, but also learn a lot of life philosophy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍泰州的教育，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍泰州良好的教育环境；
第二步，介绍优秀的老师；
第三步，介绍自己的学习表现。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of为……感到自豪
②graduate from毕业于
③a large number of许多
[高分句型]
①Most of them are teachers who graduated from famous universities, and some even returned from studying abroad.（who引导的定语从句）
②Here I not only learn cultural knowledge, but also learn a lot of life philosophy.（not only...but also...连接并列结构）
3．为帮助学生了解国情、开阔视野、增长知识，你校每学期都组织研学旅行活动。你校英语社团将举办以“我爱研学旅行”为主题的征文活动，请你以“Me and my wonderful school trip”为标题写一篇短文投稿，介绍一次你印象深刻的研学旅行活动，内容包括：
1. 研学旅行前的规划；
2. 研学旅行中的经历；
3. 你的收获及感受。
注意：
1. 词数 90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文中不得泄露个人信息。
Me and my wonderful school trip
We have a school trip every term. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文1：
Me and my wonderful school trip
We have a school trip every term. It’s an opportunity to learn something practical.
This term, our school decided to take us to Xuzhou International Garden Expo on April 28th. Before the trip, we collected some logs, stones, grass and flowers.
During the trip, I was amazed to find so many beautiful views of different cities gathered together in a special and harmonious way. Our teacher also encouraged us to use the material we had prepared to build our mini garden. We came up with different creative designs. It was fantastic!
This wonderful trip did broaden my horizons. I feel proud to be a Chinese and dream to become a garden designer in the future.
例文2：
Me and my wonderful school trip
We have a school trip every term. It’s a great opportunity for us to get close to nature.
This term, we voted on several destinations and decided to visit Pengzu Garden on Friday. Before the trip, we were divided into groups of eight and reminded to take some water and food.
During the trip, we appreciated different versions of the Chinese character shou, meaning a long life. At lunchtime, we put on tents and shared food together. Later, we rode the sky wheel and fed the parrots and rabbits in the zoo.
It was a wonderful trip. I not only felt relaxed but also learned much about the local culture and how to protect animals.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：注意不要遗漏题目所列要求，重点讲述“经历”部分。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，说明研学的地点和研学前的准备；
②第二步，阐述研学的过程；
③第三步，总结研学后的收货和感受。
[亮点词汇]
① decide to do sth. 决定做某事
② encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
③ come up with 想出（计划）
④ not only...but also... 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
① It’s an opportunity to learn something practical.（it作形式主语）
② Our teacher also encouraged us to use the material we had prepared to build our mini garden.（定语从句；动词不定式做目的状语）
③ Before the trip, we were divided into groups of eight and reminded to take some water and food.（被动语态）
4．走进江苏，游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“Go Jiangsu”旅游活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Welcome to Lianyungang”为题写一篇英语短文，邀请他们走进家乡连云港，品山海文化，游大圣故里。
注意：
（1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Welcome to Lianyungang
I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you.
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【答案】例文
Welcome to Lianyungang
I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you.
Lianyungang lies in the north-east of Jiangsu. It’s famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain, the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea. It’s cool in summer.
Moreover, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you. Remember to try our local food. I’m sure you will enjoy it.
Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”. Welcome to our hometown. We’re looking forward to meeting you soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明连云港的地理位置以及著名的景点；
第二步，介绍连云港丰富的文化和当地的人们以及食物；
第三步，最后邀请大家来连云港做客。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而著名
②moreover而且
③look forward to doing期待做
[高分句型]
Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．后疫情时代(post-epidemic era)，人们的生活方式和生活理念发生了变化。今年”五一”假期，中国掀起了一股旅游狂潮(travel frenzy)。最近，无锡日报英文专栏正在举办以”Travelling” 为题的征文比赛，请你根据以下流程图，从旅游的意义出发，描述自己的某次旅游经历，并谈一谈旅游时的注意事项。
注意事项：
1. 短文内容需涵盖流程图中的要点，并作适当发挥；
2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
3. 词数在100个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
Travelling
In the post-epidemic era, most of us would rather go travelling than stay at home during our holiday. This year alone, China’s post-epidemic travel frenzy has broken May Day record. Why is travelling so popular __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s enjoy ourselves on our journey!
【答案】例文
In the post-epidemic era, most of us would rather go travelling than stay at home during our holiday. This year alone, China’s post-epidemic travel frenzy has broken May Day record. Why is travelling so popular
In my opinion, travelling provides us with a chance to visit different places and meet different people. It opens up a new world to us.
I still remember my last trip to Guilin. When taking a boat trip along the Lijiang River, I saw mountains in unusual shapes. I also rode around the countryside. What a pleasant trip!
Safety comes first. So we’re supposed to guard against any possible danger during our trip. For example, we should avoid telling strangers our personal information. Besides, good tourists always pay attention to manners. Remember it’s rude to push in or litter everywhere.
Let’s enjoy ourselves on our journey!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；描述自己的旅行经历时要用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏流程图中的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写旅行的意义，比如了解当地文化习俗，开阔自己知识面，开阔眼界等；
第二步，具体描述自己的某次旅游经历。重点介绍了去了哪，做了什么，有什么感受；
第三步，谈一谈旅行的注意事项。包括安全、礼仪等。
[亮点词汇]
①opens up打开
②guard against any possible danger提防任何可能的危险
③pay attention to关注
[高分句型]
①So we’re supposed to guard against any possible danger during our trip. （be supposed to应该）
②Remember it’s rude to push in or litter everywhere. （It’s adj. to do sth.句型）
6．暑期临近，你和父母决定外出旅行，出行前，你会认真为家人做好旅行攻略。为此，你将结合以下提示用英语写一篇旅游计划书。
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3. 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不能出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Travel Plan
This summer holiday, I decide to travel with my parents. We have a discussion about that. Now I’d like to share the travel plan.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Travel Plan
This summer holiday, I decide to travel with my parents. We have a discussion about that. Now I’d like to share the travel plan.
Beijing is my first choice. It’s the capital of China with deep and rich culture. A great number of tourist attractions lie there, drawing millions of visitors’ attention from around the world. The Summer Palace used to be the place where the emperors spent their summers. How amazing! Much treasure is hidden in the Palace Museum. I’m so curious about anything about Beijing that we must put it the first place to go to.
We need to carry a map, a camera and some medicine. The map can guide us when getting lost. We will take pictures of some wonderful moments. When we get sick, medicine is a great help to us. Of course, we need to book tickets and hotels before we leave. I’ll consider that rather than getting my parents to do it.
I hope that my parents will have a great time and we can have good communication through this. After this trip, we can understand each other better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，根据提示和要点介绍自己的暑期旅游计划，注意要点齐全，可适当展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写明自己规划要去的旅行目的地，并说明原因；
第二步，说明自己旅行需要携带的物品，并简单介绍其用途；
第三步，文章总结，表达对此次旅行的期待以及旅行的意义。
[亮点词汇]
① tourist attraction 旅游景点
② draw one’s attention 吸引某人注意力
③ be curious about... 对……好奇
[高分句型]
① A great number of tourist attractions lie there, drawing millions of visitors’ attention from around the world. （现在分词作结果状语）
② The Summer Palace used to be the place where the emperors spent their summers.（where引导定语从句）
③ I’m so curious about anything about Beijing that we must put it the first place to go to.（so...that...引导结果状语从句）
7．假如你叫李明，是南京阳光中学学成会成员之一。该校的国际部要组织学生下周三来扬州瘦西湖开展研学活动。请你以学生会的名义，根据以下提示，为国际部的学生们拟一则英文通知。提示如下：
Time, transportation & places When & how will you go Where will you go
Activities What can you see there What can you do there …
Tips (At least 3 points) Manners Safety tips
参考词汇：study tour, the Slender West Lake
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear schoolmates,
It’s my great honor to inform you that we will…__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Students’ Union of Sunshine Middle School
【答案】例文
Dear schoolmates,
It’s my great honor to inform you that we will go to the Slender West Lake in Yangzhou for a study tour next Wednesday.
We’ll meet at the school gate at 6 a.m. and then go to the Slender West Lake by coach. Spring is the best time to visit the lake. There we can enjoy beautiful views and have a chance to see bees and butterflies play among different kinds of flowers. We can also walk along the riverside and go boating with our friends if we are interested. What’s more, while walking in the park, we can hear birds sing happily in the green trees.
When we enjoy the beauty, we should mind our behaviors. Always remember not to pick flowers or drop litter everywhere. Besides, it is important for us to keep safety rules in mind, especially when we row a boat or play in the amusement park.
It will be a fine day. I hope we can enjoy ourselves.
Students’ Union of Sunshine Middle School
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏表格中提示的每一项内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇点题介绍国际部要组织学生下周三来扬州瘦西湖开展研学活动。
第二步，具体介绍活动的时间、交通方式、具体活动及注意事项等情况。
第三步，书写结语，表达期许和祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①have a chance to do sth.有机会做某事
②different kinds of各种各样的
③mind our behaviors注意我们的行为
④keep safety rules in mind牢记安全规则
[高分句型]
①What’s more, while walking in the park, we can hear birds sing happily in the green trees.（省略句）
②Besides, it is important for us to keep safety rules in mind, especially when we row a boat or play in the amusement park.（“It is +adj. for sb. to do sth.”句型）
8．以文明之风塑造文明之城，近来泰兴新一轮文明城市创建检查正在进行，假如你是泰兴市实验初中学生会78 李华，请你以创建文明城市为主题写一篇倡议书，文章内容包括：
1. 你们城市存在的不文明的现象（至少三点）；
2. 关于如何创建文明城市的建议（至少三点）；
3. 最后谈谈自己感想。
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：文明城市civilized city
Dear friends,
Nowadays, our city is making its effort to become a civilized city. As a member of our city, it’s our great honor and duty to help build a national civilized city.
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【答案】范文
Dear friends,
Nowadays, our city is making its effort to become a civilized city. As a member of our city, it’s our great honor and duty to help build a national civilized city.
I’m so happy that our city is becoming more and more beautiful because of everyone’s effort, but there’s still something we should do. Some people can’t obey traffic rules at the rush hour, some even ride e-bikes without helmets. It’s very dangerous I think. What’s worse, I often see someone drop litter everywhere.
For these problems, I think we should take action right away and set some good examples for others to follow. Personally, we can avoid traffic jam and reduce air pollution by riding bikes or walking more often. And we’d better raise our pets in a civilized way like keeping dogs on a string. What’s more, we can help to clean the streets and conduct the traffic as volunteers.
In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life. In our daily life, we’d better do what we can to save the energy and protect our earth. In a word, everyone can play an important part in building our city into a civilized one.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：题干中给出了写作方向，考生注意仔细阅读题干，根据内容提示列出要点；注意逻辑清晰、行文连贯、无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，建设文明城市是每个人的荣幸和义务；
第二步，列举城市中存在的不文明现象；
第三步，针对如何建设文明城市提出建议；
第四步，总结全文，谈谈自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
① more and more ... 越来越……
② because of 因为
③ take action 采取行动
④ play an important part in 在……中发挥重要作用
[高分句型]
① I think we should take action right away and set some good examples for others to follow.（省略that的宾语从句）
② In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life. （so that引导的结果状语从句）
9．为了进一步提升扬州国际文化旅游名城的新形象，扬州市正在举办中学生英语导游大赛。请根据以下流程图的提示完成一篇参赛导游词。
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3. 词数在100词左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇：
Slender West Lake瘦西湖；Five-pavilion Bridge五亭桥；He Garden何园；double-path corridor复道回廊
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Yangzhou! I’m your tour guide. Yangzhou, my hometown, lies between the Huai River and the Yangtze River.
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I hope you’ll have a very nice stay in Yangzhou.
【答案】例文：
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Yangzhou! I’m your tour guide. Yangzhou, my hometown, lies between the Huai River and the Yangtze River. It has a history of over 2,500 years.
Yangzhou has a lot of places of interest. If you go to the gardens, you can have a good look at Slender West Lake, where there is Five-pavilion Bridge. Besides, He Garden is also attractive. You can walk on the double-path corridor, which is so great. If you want to know more about Yangzhou’s culture, China Paper-cutting Museum is the best choice. It’s well worth visiting. You can enjoy paper-cutting works about different subjects.
Just as an ancient poem goes, take a journey to Yangzhou in March. So you are here. Yangzhou is a land of fish and rice and you can enjoy many delicious food.
I hope you’ll have a very nice stay in Yangzhou.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：城市信息和旅游景点相关的提示已经给出，需要其他方面再补充两点；“园林”部分，瘦西湖与五亭桥、何园与复道回廊之间的关系需要表达清楚。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描写扬州的历史（位置信息已经给出）；
第二步，描写扬州的园林和博物馆；
第三步，描写扬州的美食。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest 名胜
②have a good look 好好看看
③be well worth visiting 很值得一游
④a land of fish and rice 鱼米之乡
[高分句型]
①If you go to the gardens, you can have a good look at Slender West Lake, where there is Five-pavilion Bridge.（条件状语从句、定语从句）
②You can walk on the double-path corridor, which is so great.（定语从句）
③Just as an ancient poem goes, take a journey to Yangzhou in March.（古诗文）
10．随着第 24 届冬季奥林匹克运动会在北京的胜利举行，中国再一次成为世界关注的焦点。为了让国外友人更好地了解中国，21 世纪英文报开辟了“Cities in China” 的专栏，鼓励广大中小学生用英文介绍中国城市。 假如你是张华，请你选择中国的一个城市，根据下列问题提示，完成一篇 100 词左右的征文。
提示：
1.Which city would you like to introduce
2. What’s the city like ( location, places of interest, local food, people…)
3. What do you think of the city
要求：
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.必须包括提示中所有信息，并适当发挥；
3.词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名等。
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, Beijing is one of the greatest. It is the capital city of China. It lies in the northeast of China.
Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace.
You can also try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit. (100 words)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文；
②时态：本文时态用“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据提示内容介绍中国的一个城市，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己想要介绍的城市；
第二步，介绍这个城市的特点；
第三步，阐述自己对这个城市的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest名胜景点
②and so on等等
③be worth sth值得某物
[高分句型]
①If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square.（if条件从句）
②If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there.（if条件从句）
③I think Beijing is worth a visit.（宾语从句）
二、书信作文
11．假如你是王强，你打算邀请你的英国笔友Ryan来你的家乡扬州游玩。请根据以下要点提示用英语写一封邀请信。要点如下：
1. What is your hometown like （至少两点）
2. What do you think of the people in your hometown （至少举两例）
3. What can you and Ryan do together in your hometown （至少两点）
注意：
1. 参考要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得透露校名、姓名等信息。
3. 词数100左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Yangzhou.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope to see you soon in Yangzhou.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
【答案】例文：
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Yangzhou.
Yangzhou is a modern city with a long history. There are a lot of places of interest around it. In spring, there are green trees everywhere. Every morning we can smell the beautiful flowers and hear the birds sing.
The people in Yangzhou are very nice and helpful. There’re many volunteers in the park, and they are always ready to help you. If I’m not at home, my neighbours will help me to look after my house.
I’ll show you around the city when you come here. I’ll take you to visit the gardens and try some delicious food in Dongguan Street. We can also go shopping and buy some presents. I’m sure you’ll have a good time.
Hope to see you soon in Yangzhou.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍扬州是什么样的；
第二步，介绍你觉得扬州的人怎么样；
第三步，最后表达你和Ryan在家乡能一起做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest风景名胜
②be ready to do sth乐意做某事
③show sb around带某人参观
[高分句型]
①If I’m not at home, my neighbours will help me to look after my house.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I’ll show you around the city when you come here.（when引导的时间状语从句）
