专题13 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（2023·海南三亚·小升初真题）以“Children’s Day”为题，写一篇小短文。要求语句通顺，不少于50词。
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2．（2023·广东惠州·小升初真题）暑假快到了，请用be going to句式，写写你的暑假计划吧！不少于5句话。
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3．（2023·湖北十堰·小升初真题）请以“My Summer Holiday Plan”为题，分享一下你的假期计划吧!。要求：条理清楚，意思连贯，标点正确，书写规范，不少于5句话。
4．（2023·青海黄南·小升初真题）同学们，暑假即将来临，但是疫情还未结束，我们尽量不要出游！相信同学们不出去旅游，假期生活依然会多姿多彩。请你围绕下面的思维导图，合理规划一下你的暑假生活吧！
注意：1. 必须包含思维导图中的三点，可适当发挥，词数不少于60（已给出部分不计入总词数）。书写工整清晰，短文连贯通顺，条理清楚，时态得当。
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5．（2023·浙江宁波·小升初真题）写作：请描述你的一位好朋友，就用Mike（Amy）代替他（她）的真实姓名。开头两句已写出，请你接着写，至少写5句。不能出现校名等真实信息。
I have a good friend. His / Her name is Mike / Amy. He / She …
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6．（2023·陕西汉中·小升初真题）假如你是John，你和家人上周末度过了充实又快乐的时光。请你根据下面表格中的内容写篇短文，描述一下你们上周末都做了哪些有意义的事情吧！
爸爸 妈妈 姐姐 自己
要求：（1）所写内容须包含表格中的信息，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）不少于六句话。
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7．（2023·云南昆明·小升初真题）亲爱的同学们，刚刚过去的“六一”是你们在小学阶段度过的最后一个儿童节。请回忆一下，在儿童节活动中你和同学们、老师们是怎样度过的，请以“My Children’s Day”为题，写一篇小短文，不少于5句话。
要求：（1）语句通顺，时态正确，书写规范，卷面整洁。
（2）文中不能使用真实姓名、学校，否则不计入评分。
（3）可参考下列词组。
have a party sing songs dance eat some food play games take pictures have a good time
My Children’s Day
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8．（2023·浙江宁波·小升初真题）正值周末，公园里有许多人游玩、运动或休息放松。请根据下图，适当发挥想象，介绍公园里的景色和人们正在做的事情. 作文不少于2种句型，至少8句话，注意使用正确的表达方式。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（2023·青海·小升初真题）2023年5月22日，中国“水稻之父”袁隆平院士逝世了。他生前热爱科学，工作认真努力，业余时间喜欢打排球、游泳、跳舞。他开朗、乐观、和蔼可亲，乐于帮助他人，会拉小提琴，能流利地说英语。袁隆平院士为国家的发展做出了卓越的贡献，我们永远热爱他。请以“A great scientist—Yuan Longping”为题目，写一篇英语短文。
要求：（1）不要逐条翻译，表达正确，语句通顺，行文连贯：
（2）运用参考词汇，可以适当发挥：
（3）不少于50词。
参考词汇： science (科学), scientist (科学家), play volleyball, optimistic (乐观的), helpful (乐于助人的), kind (和蔼可亲), play the violin (小提琴), speak English fluently (说英语流利), make a great contribution (贡献) to our country, forever (永远)
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参考答案：
1．
Children’s Day
My favorite special day is Children’s Day. It’s on June 1st. I can have a party in the morning on this day. After that I can go to the park with my parents in the afternoon. I can row a boat on the lake. I can also enjoy many interesting shows in the park. I can have a good time all day.
【详解】（1）题干解读：本题要求以Children’s Day为题写一篇小短文，可以写出在那一天和谁做了什么事，那一天过得怎么样，文章可以用一般现在时态，注意语句要通顺和符合词数要求。
（2）参考词汇和参考句型：
参考词汇：special day特殊的日子，party聚会，go to the park去公园，row a boat 划船，enjoy欣赏， have a good time玩得开心
参考句型：My favorite special day is…； It’s …；I can…； After that I can …；
2．范文：
The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to Qingdao this summer holiday. I’m going to see the sea. I’m going to swim in the sea. I’m going to take some pictures. I’m going to buy some presents for my friends. I can’t wait.
【详解】（1）题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己暑假计划，注意文章为一般将来并要符合句子数量要求。
（2）参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：summer holiday暑假，sea大海，swim游泳，take some pictures拍照，present礼物
参考句型：The summer holiday…； I’m going to… ；I can’t wait.
3．范文：
My Summer Holiday Plan
Summer holiday is coming. I will have a happy holiday. I will do my homework first. And then I am going to Beijing with my parents. We will go there by plane. We are going to visit the Great Wall. We will take lots of photos. We will buy some gifts there. We will stay there for seven days.
【详解】（1）题干解读：该题目要求以“My Summer Holiday Plan”为题，分享一下自己的假期计划。然后再阐述做的事情，和谁一起。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。
（2）参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：do one’s homework做作业，go to Beijing去北京，by plane乘飞机，visit the Great Wall参观长城，take photos拍照
参考句型：I/We will …； And then I am going to …；
4．范文：
Summer holiday is coming. I will do a lot of things. I must study every day. I will do my homework every day. I will read English books and listen to music. I want to have a healthy diet. I will get up early and have breakfast. I will have an egg and some milk for breakfast. For lunch, I will have some vegetables, fish and some meat. I will eat some rice. For dinner, I will eat a little. I want to do some sports. I want to play table tennis with my father at home. I want to help my mother do some housework. I can sweep the floor and wash dishes. I think I can have a colorful summer holiday!
【详解】（1）题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己的暑假计划，包括学习计划、饮食计划和运动计划等。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合单词数量要求。
（2）参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：summer holiday暑假，study学习，do my homework做作业，listen to music听音乐，healthy diet健康饮食，do some sports做运动，play table tennis打乒乓球
参考句型：I will do …； I want to …；I can …； I think I can …
5．参考范文：
I have a good friend. His name is Mike. He’s 13 years old. He is tall but thin. He wears glasses. He likes playing football very much. He can do some kung fu. He can sing many English songs, too. I like him very much.
【详解】（1）题干解读：该题目要求用描述一位你的好朋友。其中包括年龄，外貌，爱好及能力各个方面，注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
（2）参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：tall高的，thin瘦的，glasses眼镜，play football踢足球，Kung fu功夫，song歌曲
参考句型：His name is …； He is …；He likes …； He can …
6．范文：
I am John. My family had a good time last weekend. In the morning, my father rode a horse on a big farm. My mother cooked some nice food for us. In the afternoon, My sister went shopping. I did my homework in the study. We were busy but happy.
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求写John一家人上周末的活动。注意文章为一般过去时态并符合所给图片信息。
参考词汇：ride a horse骑马，cook food做饭，go shopping去购物，do homework做作业，have a good time玩得愉快
参考句型：We had...；My father rode a horse...；My mother cooked...；My sisiter went...；I did...；We were...
7．范文：
My Children’s Day
We had a party on Children's Day. We sang songs at the party. We also danced. We also ate some food. We also played games. We took some pictures. We had a good time.
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求写自己的六一儿童节。然后阐述我们如何庆祝六一儿童节。注意文章为一般过去时态并用到所给提示短语。
参考词汇：had a party开派对，sang songs唱歌，danced跳舞，ate some food吃一些食物，played games玩游戏，took pictures拍照， had a good time玩得很愉快
参考句型：We had...；We also...；We had a good time.
8．范文：
Today is the weekend. People's Park is very beautiful. There are some trees in it. There are also colorful flowers in bloom. Some people are having a picnic in the park. Some people are singing and dancing in the park. Two children are riding bicycles in the park. There is a boy reading on a chair. Now everyone is very happy.
【详解】（1）题干分析：要求根据图片内容，介绍公园里的景色和人们正在做的事情，要用第三人称的角度描述，主要用现在进行时，要满足句子数量要求和句型要求。
（2）参考词汇和参考句型：
参考词汇：beautiful漂亮的，flowers花，having a picnic在野餐，singing and dancing唱歌和跳舞。
参考句型：Today is…；There are…；Some people are…；There is…。
9．范文：
A great scientist—Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping is a great scientist. He loved science very much. And He worked very hard. In his spare time, he liked playing volleyball, swimming and dancing. He was outgoing, optimistic, helpful and kind. He could play the violin and speak English very well. Yuan Longping made a great contribution (贡献) to our country, so we will love him forever.
【详解】题目解读：这是个命题作文，需要介绍伟大科学家袁隆平的生前的工作热情，喜好和事迹，用一般过去时，把内容介绍全面且满足词数要求。
（1）参考单词与词汇：science 科学，scientist 科学家，play volleyball打排球，optimistic 乐观的，helpful 乐于助人的，kind 和蔼可亲，play the violin 小提琴，speak English fluently 说英语流利，make a great contribution to our country为国家做贡献，forever 永远
（2）参考句型：He liked doing something；He could do something；He was...；We will love him forever.
