第08讲 建议信
（考试时间：15分钟/每题 ）
目 录
建议信常用词汇 P1
建议信常用句型 P2
建议信常用模版与演练 P3
建议信精准测试18篇 P4
通用高分替换训练（文娱和体育） P14
一、建议信常用词汇
序号 中文 英文
1 给某人提建议
2 向某人征求意见
3 如下
4 在我看来
5 认为…… 有用
6 参加
7 采纳某人的建议
8 把…… 考虑在内
9 关于；就
10 提出
11 在这点上 / 在这方面
12 与某人分享某事
13 随着时间的推移
14 面临
15 重视；认真对待
二、建议信常用句型
1.很遗憾听说你在... 有困难。
______________________________________________________________________________________2.这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
______________________________________________________________________________________3.我已经收到了你的来信，信上说......
______________________________________________________________________________________4.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
______________________________________________________________________________________5.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何......
______________________________________________________________________________________6.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在......我写信给你一些建议。
______________________________________________________________________________________7.我希望这些建议会对你有用。
______________________________________________________________________________________8.记住：有志者事竟成。
______________________________________________________________________________________9.我会非常开心看到（情况）有所改善。
______________________________________________________________________________________10.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习 / 工作顺利！
______________________________________________________________________________________11.这里有一些建议。
三、建议信常用模版与演练
1. 基本模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
You can’t imagine how ______(情感) I am hearing about ______(写信的原因). I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.
Firstly, you are supposed to ______ (建议一) . Additionally(For one reason), it makes sense to ______ (建议二/理由一) . Moreover（For another reason）, ______ (建议三/理由二)is also a good choice . Do bear in mind that （Therefore）______ (建议四/理由三)
I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will______ (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 写作实操技巧
假如你是李华，你的外教Mr Geller计划让8岁的女儿在中国学习一门传统艺术作为兴趣培养，正在书法、剪纸与象棋中选择，写邮件寻求你的看法和学习建议。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐内容及简要原因；
2.切实可行的学习建议；
3.祝福与希望。
注意：1．词数：80词左右；
2．内容应包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
参考词汇：书法：calligraphy 剪纸：paper-cutting 象棋：Chinese chess
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3. 仿写演练
假定你是李华，你朋友张帅在美国学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，前不久, 他来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信。
1.建议他回国。
2.你的理由是国内形势好、学有所用、就业机会多、便于照顾父母、报效祖国等。
注意：1.词数80左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四、建议信精准测试18篇
1.（2025·河北·三模）
假定你是李华，近日你发现一些招聘广告对应聘者设置了年龄限制。请你给当地英文报写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 描述你对此现象的看法；
2. 说明存在的问题；
3. 提出你的建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.（2025·河南豫东部分名校·三模）
假定你是李华，近日，你发现同学们参与外教Thomas组织的“英语月”活动的兴趣不高，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Thomas,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
3.（2025·陕西咸阳·二模）
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter因学业压力将放弃足球训练，请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示理解；
2．给出建议。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re considering quitting football training due to academic pressure.
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Best wishes，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
4. (2025·山东青岛·一模)
假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动(spring outing)，现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)具体活动； (2)你的理由。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5.（2025·江苏南通·三模）
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分学校举行春季远足活动这一现象，以“My views on spring outings”为主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.陈述看法； 2.提出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My dear classmates,
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That’s all. Thank you!
6.（高三模拟题精选01）
最近，你班越来越多的同学使用AI助手完成学习任务，请你就该现象写一篇短文投稿校英文刊，内容包括：1、你的看法 2、你的建议
注意：写作词数应为80词左右。
请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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7.（高三模拟题精选02）
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Leslie最近来中国某中学交换学习，她来信告诉你她不知道如何跟新同学相处，请你给她回一封信。
内容包括：1.写信的目的；2.具体建议及理由；3.表达个人期待。
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8.（高三模拟题精选03）
假如你是李平，为丰富校园英语广播节目内容，校英语广播电台向全体同学征求建议。请你向负责管理英语广播电台的老师John提出三点建议，使校园英语广播内容丰富起来。
注意：词数100左右。
Dear John,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9.（高三模拟题精选04）
假如你是李华，你的学习中文专业的外国朋友Tony将于近期来中国交流，他来信询问你如何提高汉语口语水平。请你给他回信。
内容包括： 1.提出建议； 2.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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10.（高三模拟题精选05）
假定你是李华，你的好友Steven即将代表学校参加全市留学生中文演讲比赛，写信向你求助。请你给他回一封信。
内容包括：1.表示祝贺； 2.提供建议； 3.表达祝愿。
注意事项：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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11.（高三模拟题精选06）
假定你是李明。你的外国朋友 David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信。
内容包括：1.提出建议； 2.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Ming
12.（高三模拟题精选07）
假如你是晨光中学高三学生李津。为了改进教学并有效提升每个学生的英语水平，你的英语老师Ms.Li希望了解你的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
①对英语学习的认识；
②自己目前的英语水平；
③自己英语学习存在的主要问题；
④对英语教学的两点建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms.Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
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Thank you!
Yours,
Li Jin
13.（高三模拟题精选08）
假定你是李华，美国“汉语桥(Chinese Bridge)”网上冬令营组织方正在网上征集活动内容，欢迎网友献计献策。请你给组织方写一封建议信，内容包括：
1. 你建议的活动(至少两项)；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你的希望。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear committee members,
I’m glad to know that
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Yours,
Li Hua
14.（高三模拟题精选09）
假定你叫李华，是西北师范大学附属中学的一名高中生。你发现你校校门口在上学放学高峰期交通堵塞特别严重。请你就此向二十一世纪学生英文报Teens专栏写信，内容包括：
1. 校门口的交通现状;
2. 改变该现状的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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15.（高三模拟题精选10）
假如你是李华，你校外教Daniel正为每周的“English Corner”征集自由讨论的话题，欢迎同学们畅所欲言。请你给他写一封建议信，内容包括：
1.你建议的话题（至少两个）；
2.你的理由；
3.你的希望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.内容应包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Daniel,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
16.（高三模拟题精选11）
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter来信，说他每次大型考试来临，都会感到十分焦虑，为此写信向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示，用英语给Peter写一封建议信。内容包括：
1. 表示理解；2. 具体建议；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
17.（高三模拟题精选12）
假定你是李华，你校交换生George给你发来邮件，说他在学习唐诗时遇到了一些困难，希望你能给他提供一些建议。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 给出建议；2. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear George,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
18.（高三模拟题精选13）
假定你是李华，你们学校将举办主题为“校园最美，因为有你”（Most Beautiful Campus, Thanks to You）的海报设计大赛，学生作品将在校内展出，你的好朋友Ryan，现就他的参赛作品初稿征求你的意见。请回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 提出存在的问题；
2. 给出修改建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
五、通用高分替换训练（文娱与体育）
1. 高分词汇替换
词义 简单词汇 高分词汇
开端，起源 beginning
运动员 sportsman
结果 result
技巧 skill
吸引力 attraction
出名 become famous
喜爱 be fond of
被认为…… be regarded as...
看电影 watch films
出版 be published
保持健康 keep healthy
追溯到…… start from...
深受欢迎 be popular
去户外 go outside
与优秀选手对抗 play against the good players
各种各样的 all kinds of...
擅长 be good at
2. 高分句型替换
句意 普通句型 高分句型
很多人玩…… Many people play...
对他们的技能感到惊讶，我决心要和他们一样优秀。 Surprised at their skills, I decided to be as good as them.
你将一定得到…… 回报。 You are certain to get...
…… 需要很多时间和精力。 ... needs a lot of time and energy.
你可能会认为…… You may think that...
3. 经典表达
汉语释义 经典表达
表演者
乐器
表演艺术
主角
杰作，名著
练习
观众，听众
灵感
主题
家庭聚会
庆祝活动
娱乐
结局
气氛，氛围
场景
形式
娱乐的
令人高兴的
有指导意义的
感人的
令人享受的
准备充分的
有创造力的
体育馆
想象力
欣赏
传统体育
赛事
运动爱好者
技巧
奖章
锦标赛
潜力，潜能
精力充沛的
身体的；物理的
激烈地
主办
赞助
…… 的成员
双方
形成，产生
继承，传下来
传播到……
以…… 为依据
对…… 产生巨大的影响
丰富某人的生活
给某人留下深刻的印象
展现对…… 的天赋
以…… 为背景
在展出中
扮演（某一角色）
和某人玩得高兴
转折点
强身健体
对…… 兴致勃勃
安排…… 做……
和某人竞争
撞上……
接球
招收新队员
试演一个角色
提前买票
广场舞
随着音乐起舞
看歌剧
加入俱乐部
周末去野餐
受某人欢迎
传达信息
表达感受
打破纪录
保持纪录
避免冲突
在…… 中扮演角色一直是我最想做的事情之一。
京剧有着…… 年的历史，是一种传统的戏剧形式，被认为……
…… 是很好的保持健康的方式。
大多数流行歌曲赞扬了我们触手可及的…… 并且聚焦于丰富我们的生活上。
仍然有很多人喜欢…… 因为这为…… 提供了机会。
在中国，…… 一直是收视率最高、最受人喜爱的节目之一。
不可否认，…… 不仅给人们带来了许多欢乐，也为很多艺术家提供了舞台。
一方面，……（活动）设计了很多出色的演出，像……，给我们观众留下了深刻的印象。
这样的乐趣是无与伦比的。
目的是让公众接触到艺术并且以一种全新的方式去欣赏。
表演最后很成功。
幽默之处在于……
无论你是否喜欢，…… 已经成了我们生活中的一部分。
这不仅使我们接触自然，让我们从繁重的功课中获得了放松，而且还促进了我们之间的友谊。
一个世界闻名的剧目……（剧目名字），将在……（时间）在新建好的……（地点）上映。
我确信这会拓展你们的视野，并且你们会从中获得享受。
…… 在这个城市的增长已达到 20%。
1989 年出现了逐渐下降的情况。
让…… 点亮我们的生活。
我进行了一项关于中学生是否每天应该跑 1500 米的调查。
他们认为…… 是一种很好的放松和保持健康的方式。
我一直忙于为…… 进行训练。
我们确实知道的是它始于……
……（运动）源于一种…… 方式，在 19 世纪末期发展成了一项运动。
事实上，阻挡、推搡和碰撞都是比赛的一部分。
我们必须学会冷静、理智地处理冲突。
配备有…… 我们学校提供给我们进行各项运动的机会。
就我而言，没有什么比…… 更能促进和别人合作。
我们学校运动场占地大约两平方公里。
在一班和二班之间举办了一场足球赛。
没有证据表明……
我们认为友谊第一，比赛第二。
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()第08讲 建议信
（考试时间：15分钟/每题 ）
目 录
建议信常用词汇 P1
建议信常用句型 P2
建议信常用模版与演练 P3
建议信精准测试18篇 P5
通用高分替换训练（文娱和体育） P33
一、建议信常用词汇
序号 中文 英文
1 给某人提建议 give/offer sb. some advice(on)
2 向某人征求意见 ask sb. for advice
3 如下 as follows
4 在我看来 in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view
5 认为…… 有用 find...helpful/useful/beneficial
6 参加 take part in/participate in...
7 采纳某人的建议 follow/take/adopt one's advice
8 把…… 考虑在内 take sth. into account/consideration
9 关于；就 with regard to
10 提出 put forward
11 在这点上 / 在这方面 in this regard/in this respect
12 与某人分享某事 share sth. with sb.
13 随着时间的推移 with time going on
14 面临 Be faced with
15 重视；认真对待 take sth. seriously
二、建议信常用句型
1.很遗憾听说你在... 有困难。
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble ...
2.这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
3.我已经收到了你的来信，信上说......
I have received your letter saying you plan to...
4.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese, and I will try to make some suggestions here.
5.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何......
I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ..
6.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在......我写信给你一些建议。
I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to ...
7.我希望这些建议会对你有用。
I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.
8.记住：有志者事竟成。
Remember: where there is a will, there is a way.
9.我会非常开心看到（情况）有所改善。
I would be more than happy to see improvement.
10.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习 / 工作顺利！
I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！
11.这里有一些建议。
Here are a few suggestions.
三、建议信常用模版与演练
1. 基本模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
You can’t imagine how ______(情感) I am hearing about ______(写信的原因). I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.
Firstly, you are supposed to ______ (建议一) . Additionally(For one reason), it makes sense to ______ (建议二/理由一) . Moreover（For another reason）, ______ (建议三/理由二)is also a good choice . Do bear in mind that （Therefore）______ (建议四/理由三)
I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will______ (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 写作实操技巧
假如你是李华，你的外教Mr Geller计划让8岁的女儿在中国学习一门传统艺术作为兴趣培养，正在书法、剪纸与象棋中选择，写邮件寻求你的看法和学习建议。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐内容及简要原因；
2.切实可行的学习建议；
3.祝福与希望。
注意：1．词数：80词左右；
2．内容应包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
参考词汇：书法：calligraphy 剪纸：paper-cutting 象棋：Chinese chess
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【模板范文】
Dear ______ (称谓)
You can’t imagine how overjoyed (情感) I am hearing about your plan (写信的原因). I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.
Firstly, you are supposed to choose Chinese calligraphy because it’s a natural combination of beauty, strength, history and technique (建议一) . Additionally, aiming at learning it well, it makes sense to devote himself/ herself to long hours of practice (建议二) . Moreover, signing up for a calligraphy course (建议三)is also a good choice, which would help her study in a systematic way . Do bear in mind that it’d also be beneficial to study and imitate the works of famous calligraphers (建议四)
I am fully convinced that use the tips above and you will gain benefit (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
3. 仿写演练
假定你是李华，你朋友张帅在美国学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，前不久, 他来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信。
1.建议他回国。
2.你的理由是国内形势好、学有所用、就业机会多、便于照顾父母、报效祖国等。
注意：1.词数80左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【模板范文】
Dear Zhangshuai (称谓)
You can’t imagine how overjoyed (情感) I am hearing about you are going to graduate (写信的原因). I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.
In my opinion, you are supposed to come back after you finish your studies abroad (建议) . For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China and it will be quite easy for you to find a good job (理由一) . For another reason, it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old (理由二). Therefore，it's a good idea for you to return. (总结)
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
四、建议信精准测试18篇
1.（2025·河北·三模）
假定你是李华，近日你发现一些招聘广告对应聘者设置了年龄限制。请你给当地英文报写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 描述你对此现象的看法；
2. 说明存在的问题；
3. 提出你的建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
I’ve noticed some job advertisements in our area set age limits for applicants. I find it inappropriate.
By focusing on age, employers might miss out on talented individuals who don’t fit within the required age range. These age limits may also be seen as discriminatory, potentially leading to negative attitudes towards these companies. Instead, I believe job advertisements should focus on skills, qualifications, and experience.
I suggest that you discuss this issue in your newspaper. Encouraging businesses to prioritize capabilities over age can make our local job market fairer.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以李华的身份，给当地英文报写一封邮件，对招聘广告中的年龄限制现象提出看法和建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
不合适的：inappropriate→unsuitable
问题：issue→problem
建议：suggest→advise
集中于：focus on→ concentrate on
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I suggest that you discuss this issue in your newspaper.
拓展句：It is suggested that this issue be discussed in your newspaper.
【点睛】【高分句型1】By focusing on age, employers might miss out on talented individuals who don’t fit within the required age range. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】These age limits may also be seen as discriminatory, potentially leading to negative attitudes towards these companies. (运用了现在分词作结果状语)
【高分句型3】Encouraging businesses to prioritize capabilities over age can make our local job market fairer. (运用了动名词作主语)
2.（2025·河南豫东部分名校·三模）
假定你是李华，近日，你发现同学们参与外教Thomas组织的“英语月”活动的兴趣不高，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Thomas,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Thomas,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students. I’m writing to render what I’ve found about students’ interest in our English Month.
Aimed at cultivating students’ interest in English leaning, your English Month undoubtedly offers us students a great platform to enhance our English proficiency. However, I’ve found students lacking enthusiasm to get involved lately. I think it would be a good idea to showcase the unique charm of English Month by adding more interactive activities like English Drama Performance. Additionally, why not undertake a survey to know about what really interests students
I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change, in which case, the English Month will surely become one of the fondest memories rooted in our hearts.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外教Thomas写邮件，说明同学们参与“英语月”活动兴趣不高的问题，并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
培养：cultivate → foster
提高：enhance → improve
参与：get involved → participate
独特的：unique → distinct
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I think it would be a good idea to showcase the unique charm of English Month by adding more interactive activities like English Drama Performance.
拓展句：I think that it would be a good idea if we showcase the unique charm of English Month by adding more interactive activities like English Drama Performance.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Aimed at cultivating students’ interest in English leaning, your English Month undoubtedly offers us students a great platform to enhance our English proficiency.（运用了过去分词短语作状语）
【高分句型 2】I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change, in which case, the English Month will surely become one of the fondest memories rooted in our hearts.（运用了“介词 + 关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句）
3.（2025·陕西咸阳·二模）
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter因学业压力将放弃足球训练，请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示理解；
2．给出建议。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re considering quitting football training due to academic pressure.
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Best wishes，
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re considering quitting football training due to academic pressure.
I know how difficult it can be to manage both studies and a passion like football. The mountains of assignments and looming exams are indeed overwhelming, making you feel like you have no choice but to let go of football.
But think about it. Football isn’t just a sport; it’s a great stress reliever. After focusing on textbooks for hours, a short training session can help you relax and recharge. My suggestion is to draw up a well-organized schedule. Set fixed time for study, training, and rest. By doing this, you can keep up with your studies while still enjoying football. I sincerely hope you won’t give it up.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
4. (2025·山东青岛·一模)
假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动(spring outing)，现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)具体活动； (2)你的理由。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear that we’ll have a spring outing next Saturday. I suggest we go to the botanical garden. There, we can admire various plants and learn about different species, which is both educational and relaxing. Also, we can have a picnic in the garden. It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other. I’m looking forward to the activity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给外教Chris写封信，就其计划于下周六组织一次春游活动一事给出自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→ delighted
建议：suggest→ advise
各种各样的：various→ a variety of
机会：chance→ opportunity
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Also, we can have a picnic in the garden. It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.
拓展句：Also, we can have a picnic in the garden, which will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear that we’ll have a spring outing next Saturday.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】There, we can admire various plants and learn about different species, which is both educational and relaxing.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.（2025·江苏南通·三模）
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分学校举行春季远足活动这一现象，以“My views on spring outings”为主题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.陈述看法； 2.提出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My dear classmates,
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That’s all. Thank you!
【参考范文】
My dear classmates,
Recently, an increasing number of schools are organizing spring outings for students. It’s my privilege to share with you my views on this phenomenon today.
Properly-managed spring outings are of irreplaceable benefit to us students. To start with, they boost physical and mental well-being by encouraging outdoor activities, which in turn reduce stress and enhance our bond with classmates and teachers. They also offer us opportunities to refresh ourselves and connect with nature.
I highly recommend that we all participate in such events actively. Let’s get prepared, tough out outings, and enjoy them!
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“My views on spring outings”为主题写一篇演讲稿，参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
观点：view→opinion
增强：enhance→increase
机会：opportunity→chance
参加：participate in→join in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Properly-managed spring outings are of irreplaceable benefit to us students.
拓展句：There is no doubt that properly-managed spring outings are of irreplaceable benefit to us students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To start with, they boost physical and mental well-being by encouraging outdoor activities, which in turn reduce stress and enhance our bond with classmates and teachers.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I highly recommend that we all participate in such events actively.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和省略should的虚拟语气)
6.（高三模拟题精选01）
最近，你班越来越多的同学使用AI助手完成学习任务，请你就该现象写一篇短文投稿校英文刊，内容包括：1、你的看法 2、你的建议
注意：写作词数应为80词左右。
请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【参考范文】
Embracing AI Assistants Wisely
Recently, more classmates have turned to AI assistants for academic tasks. While AI tools boost efficiency and offer instant solutions, over-reliance risks undermining independent learning. Students may grow dependent, losing opportunities to hone critical thinking and problem-solving skills.
To maximize benefits, I suggest using AI as a supplementary tool rather than a replacement. Set clear goals before seeking AI help — for example, verify answers after attempting tasks independently. Additionally, allocate time for self-study to strengthen foundational knowledge and self-discipline.
By striking a balance between technology and personal effort, we can harness AI’s potential without compromising academic growth.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就班级越来越多的同学使用AI助手完成学习任务的现象写一篇短文投稿校英文刊。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近：recently→lately
即时的：instant→immediate
而不是：rather than→instead of
此外：additionally→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, allocate time for self-study to strengthen foundational knowledge and self-discipline.
拓展句：Additionally, allocate time for self-study so that you can strengthen foundational knowledge and self-discipline.
【点睛】【高分句型1】While AI tools boost efficiency and offer instant solutions, over-reliance risks undermining independent learning.（运用了while引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型2】To maximize benefits, I suggest using AI as a supplementary tool rather than a replacement.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语和动名词作宾语）
7.（高三模拟题精选02）
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Leslie最近来中国某中学交换学习，她来信告诉你她不知道如何跟新同学相处，请你给她回一封信。
内容包括：1.写信的目的；2.具体建议及理由；3.表达个人期待。
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【参考范文】
Dear Leslie,
I’m glad to know that you have come to study in China. As for the problem of how to get along with new classmates, here is my advice.
First, you should try to communicate with your classmates actively. I think the cultural difference is a good topic. Second, you should care about your classmates and offer help to those in need. After all, being friendly is always a good way to make friends. Finally, you should take an active part in different kinds of class activities so that you can build close relationships with your new classmates.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Wish you a good time in your new school.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之建议信写作。要求考生给英国笔友Leslie写一封建议信。内容包括：写信的目的(针对如何跟新同学相处的问题给她一些建议)。具体建议及理由(比如：尝试与同学积极交流，聊聊文化差异的话题；关心同学，帮助那些需要帮助的人，友好总是交朋友的好方法；积极参加各种各样的课堂活动，以便与新同学建立密切的关系等等)；个人期待(希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。祝你在新学校过得愉快)。
【句式拓展】
原句：First, you should try to communicate with your classmates actively.
拓展：First, you should try to communicate with your classmates actively, which can help you understand each other better.
【亮点句型】
1.Finally, you should take an active part in different kinds of class activities so that you can build close relationships with your new classmates.(运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
2.I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.(运用了that引导的宾语从句作hope的宾语，省略了that)
8.（高三模拟题精选03）
假如你是李平，为丰富校园英语广播节目内容，校英语广播电台向全体同学征求建议。请你向负责管理英语广播电台的老师John提出三点建议，使校园英语广播内容丰富起来。
注意：词数100左右。
Dear John,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear John,
Hearing that that the English radio station of our school is asking for suggestions on how to enrich the programme, I sincerely want to express my ideas.
To begin with, I strongly suggest that English news should be added, through which we students can learn the latest news from home and abroad. In addition, it is advisable to invite ordinary students to the broadcasting room to do a talent show, which will become a hit of our school. Lastly, many students don’t have good learning methods, so if you can invite the outstanding students to share their learning experience, your program will come to the attention of students.
I hope my advice will be of help. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之建议信写作。要求考生要求学生写一封建议信。为丰富校园英语广播节目内容，向负责管理英语广播电台的老师John提出三点建议，使校园英语广播内容丰富起来。表达时首先需要说明写信之目的(就学校的英语电台如何丰富广播内容，谈谈自己的建议)；其次是三点建议(围绕“学校的英语电台如何丰富广播内容”去展开，还要适当阐述如此建议的理由。比如：增加英语新闻，理由是什么；邀请普通学生到电台做才艺表演，理由是什么；邀请优秀的学生分享他们的学习经验，理由是什么等等)；最后是必备的客套话(我希望我的建议会有所帮助。期待您的回复)。
【句式拓展】
同义句转换
原句：In addition, it is advisable to invite ordinary students to the broadcasting room to do a talent show, which will become a hit of our school.
拓展：Additionally, it is advisable that ordinary students should be invited to the broadcasting room to do a talent show, which will become a hit of our school.
【亮点句型】
1.Hearing that that the English radio station of our school is asking for suggestions on how to enrich the programme, I sincerely want to express my ideas.(运用了现在分词作原因状语)
2.To begin with, I strongly suggest that English news should be added, through which we students can learn the latest news from home and abroad.(运用了介词+which引导非限制性定语从句)
9.（高三模拟题精选04）
假如你是李华，你的学习中文专业的外国朋友Tony将于近期来中国交流，他来信询问你如何提高汉语口语水平。请你给他回信。
内容包括： 1.提出建议； 2.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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【参考范文】
Dear Tony,
Learning that you long for some improvement in your spoken Chinese, I am more than delighted to offer you some advice.
Make as many Chinese friends around you as possible and you can get more opportunities to practice. Moreover, it will do you good to learn Chinese songs and watch Chinese movies, which can provide you with an enjoyable learning context and exert an imperceptible influence on your spoken Chinese. By the way, why not talk to me online as much as possible
May you achieve great progress! And welcome to China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之建议信写作。要求考生就近期来中国交流、学习中文专业的外国朋友Tony来信中所询问的“如何提高汉语口语水平”的问题，给他写封建议信。开门见山表明写信的目的和态度：得知你渴望提高你的汉语口语水平，我非常高兴为你提供一些建议。接下来的重头戏就是提建议：围绕“如何提高汉语口语水平”这个话题展开合理想象：结交尽可能多的中国朋友，目的是什么；学习中文歌曲和看中文电影，目的是什么等等。不要忘记了结尾所要用的客套话：祝你取得巨大进步！欢迎来中国！
【句式拓展】
原句：Make as many Chinese friends around you as possible and you can get more opportunities to practice.
拓展：You can make as many Chinese friends around you as possible, which can offer you more opportunities to practice.
【亮点句型】
1.Moreover, it will do you good to learn Chinese songs and watch Chinese movies, which can provide you with an enjoyable learning context and exert an imperceptible influence on your spoken Chinese.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
2. Learning that you long for some improvement in your spoken Chinese, I am more than delighted to offer you some advice.(运用了现在分词作状语及that引导宾语从句)
10.（高三模拟题精选05）
假定你是李华，你的好友Steven即将代表学校参加全市留学生中文演讲比赛，写信向你求助。请你给他回一封信。
内容包括：1.表示祝贺； 2.提供建议； 3.表达祝愿。
注意事项：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Steven,
I’m overjoyed to hear that you will represent our school to be engaged in the city’s Chinese speech contest for overseas students. Congratulations! And I am here willing to offer some relevant suggestions.
First, you can seek Chinese teachers’ professional guidance to reinforce your language proficiency and accuracy. Second, watch videos of previous speech contests, which will help better your speech skills, like the application of gestures. Additionally, staying self-assured is what it takes to guarantee your performance and bring out the best in you.
I genuinely hope that your unremitting effort will pay off ultimately.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之建议信写作。要求考生给即将代表学校参加全市留学生中文演讲比赛的好友Steven回信，提出建议。建议信的内容包括：表示祝贺；提供建议；表达祝愿。第一段：不仅仅要表示祝贺，还要把为什么要祝贺的缘由表达出来，同时表示愿意提供建议，以便引起下文。第二段是本篇书面表达的关键，给对方提出建议(比如：寻求汉语教师的专业指导，目的是什么；观看之前演讲比赛的视频，目的是什么；保持自信，目的是什么等等)；第三段：必备的客套话(我真诚地希望你的不懈努力最终会得到回报)。
【句式拓展】
原句：First, you can seek Chinese teachers’ professional guidance to reinforce your language proficiency and accuracy.
拓展：First, you can seek Chinese teachers’ professional guidance so that you can reinforce your language proficiency and accuracy.
【亮点句型】
1.I’m overjoyed to hear that you will represent our school to be engaged in the city's Chinese speech contest for overseas students.(that引导宾语从句)
2.Second, watch videos of previous speech contests, which will help better your speech skills, like the application of gestures.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
11.（高三模拟题精选06）
假定你是李明。你的外国朋友 David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信。
内容包括：1.提出建议； 2.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Ming
【参考范文】
Dear David,
I’m delighted to learn that you’ve started learning Chinese! Knowing that would like to have a better command of Chinese, I’m writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.
With proper guidance and enough practice, you're bound to learn Chinese well. To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture. Besides, you'd better make some Chinese friends and communicate with them as much as possible. With frequent communication in real life, you'll eventually improve your oral Chinese and feel more confident.
Hopefully my tips above can be of some help. Wish you success！
Yours,
Li Ming
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之建议信写作。要求考生就最近选修了中文课程的外国朋友 David在他的来咨询信中所提出的“如何学好中文的方法”的问题，给他写一封建议信。开门见山表明写信的目的和态度：我很高兴得知你已经开始学习中文了！知道你想更好地掌握中文，我写信给你分享一些实用的建议，仅供参考。(在提建议前，也可以做个铺垫以便使上下文联系更加紧密。比如：有了适当的指导和足够的练习，你是一定能够学好汉语的)。接下来的重头戏就是提建议：围绕“如何学好中文的方法”这个话题展开合理想象：定期观看一些汉语学习节目，目的是什么；最好交一些中国朋友并尽可能多地与他们交流，目的是什么等等。不要忘记了结尾所要用的客套话：希望我上面的提示能有所帮助。祝你成功！
【句式拓展】
原句：Knowing that you would like to have a better command of Chinese, I’m writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.
拓展：After I know that you would like to have a better command of Chinese, I’m writing to share with you some practical suggestions, just for your reference.
【亮点句型】
1.I’m delighted to learn that you've started learning Chinese!(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2.To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programs, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
12.（高三模拟题精选07）
假如你是晨光中学高三学生李津。为了改进教学并有效提升每个学生的英语水平，你的英语老师Ms.Li希望了解你的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
①对英语学习的认识；
②自己目前的英语水平；
③自己英语学习存在的主要问题；
④对英语教学的两点建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms.Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
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Thank you!
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Ms. Li
Learning that you seek to enhance your teaching method so as to improve our English, I am more than grateful and pleased to offer you some information.
First and foremost, I’d like to talk about my view on English learning. As I see it, the core of English learning is based on extensive reading and speaking, by which we can be familiar with scores of English grammar rules and expressions. I am now quite fluent in oral English. However, to my discouragement, I am terrible in working out questions about English passages. Therefore, I hope that you can give a clear analysis of the structures of some English articles. In this way, we will master how to figure out the main idea of an article. In addition, it would be better if you can instruct us to complete English comprehension questions.
Thanks again for your devoted teaching.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生应英语老师Ms.Li的要求，谈谈自己对英语学习的看法，说明自己目前英语水平及不足之处，并最后提出英语教学方面的建议。
第一步：词汇积累
提供：offer→provide
提高；改善：improve→enhance
搞清楚；查明：figure out→find out
教授；讲解：teach→instruct
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First and foremost, I’d like to talk about my view on English learning.
拓展句：First and foremost, I’d like to talk about my view on English learning, which may help you to organize your teaching more properly.
第三步：高分句型
[高分句型1] Learning that you seek to enhance your teaching method so as to improve our English, I am more than grateful and pleased to offer you some information. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] As I see it, the core of English learning is based on extensive reading and speaking, by which we can be familiar with scores of English grammar rules and expressions. (运用了介词+which引导的非限定性定语从句)
13.（高三模拟题精选08）
假定你是李华，美国“汉语桥(Chinese Bridge)”网上冬令营组织方正在网上征集活动内容，欢迎网友献计献策。请你给组织方写一封建议信，内容包括：
1. 你建议的活动(至少两项)；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你的希望。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear committee members,
I’m glad to know that
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear committee members,
I am glad to know that you are making a call for events for your Chinese Bridge online winter camp.
First, I’d like to recommend you a short video about the origination of the Chinese characters. Full of great fun, the video will arouse foreigners’ interest in Chinese characters. Secondly, you can hold a storytelling competition to spread Chinese culture. This can further campers’ understanding of China, building a good bridge between China and the outside world.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国“汉语桥(Chinese Bridge)”网上冬令营组织方写一封建议信，内容包括：1. 你建议的活动（至少两项）；2. 你的理由；3. 你的希望。
第一步：词汇积累
首先：first→first of all
充满：be full of→be filled with
想要做某事：would like to do sth.→feel like doing sth.
举办、组织：hold→organize
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Full of great fun, the video will arouse foreigners’ interest in Chinese characters.
拓展句：The video is full of great fun, which will arouse foreigners’ interest in Chinese characters.
第三步：高分句型
【高分句型1】This can further campers’ understanding of China, building a good bridge between China and the outside world. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
14.（高三模拟题精选09）
假定你叫李华，是西北师范大学附属中学的一名高中生。你发现你校校门口在上学放学高峰期交通堵塞特别严重。请你就此向二十一世纪学生英文报Teens专栏写信，内容包括：
1. 校门口的交通现状;
2. 改变该现状的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Northwest Normal University High School. I’m writing to tell you the traffic problem with the neighborhood of our school gate.
A strange phenomenon always occurs near our school gate during the rush hour that a mass of vehicles is congested on the road, causing much trouble for students and teachers to enter the school. As far as I am concerned, measures taken, the traffic congestion should be relieved. First, traffic signal time needs increasing, and in that case, more pedestrians and vehicles are allowed to pass respectively. What’s more, during the rush hour, set the limitation of car numbers, for which the number of cars is reduced.
Hopefully, traffic conditions could be improved, which brings much convenience for students and teachers.
Yours，
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生就校门口在上学放学高峰期交通堵塞情况，向英语报刊Teens专栏写一封信，提出改变现状的建议。
第一步：词汇积累
发生：occur→happen/take place
大量的：a mass of→vast/a good deal of/plenty of
措施：measures→actions/steps
减少：reduce→decrease
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变成复合句
原句： a mass of vehicles is congested on the road, causing much trouble for students and teachers to enter the school.
拓展句： a mass of vehicles is congested on the road,which causes much trouble for students and teachers to enter the school.
第三步：高分句型
【高分句型1】
A strange phenomenon always occurs near our school gate during the rush hour that a mass of vehicle is congested on the road, causing much trouble for students and teachers to enter the school. (运用了that引导同位语从句，以及现在分词作结果状语)
【高分句型2】
Also, during the rush hour, set the limitation of car numbers, for which the number of cars is surely reduced. (运用了介词+ which引导非限制性定语从句)
15.（高三模拟题精选10）
假如你是李华，你校外教Daniel正为每周的“English Corner”征集自由讨论的话题，欢迎同学们畅所欲言。请你给他写一封建议信，内容包括：
1.你建议的话题（至少两个）；
2.你的理由；
3.你的希望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.内容应包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Daniel,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Daniel,
I’m Li Hua from Senior 3. You can’t imagine how overjoyed I am hearing about your plan. I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.
Food is a topic that will never be outdated, and I’m pretty sure the students will be interested in it. When it comes to food, we always have a lot to share, such as our favorite recipes, and the most renowned food streets. If possible, I think it will be fun if students can take some food along with them and share with each other. Another topic highly recommended is films. By exchanging information ranging from the plots to the film reviews, students are bound to benefit a lot both in their spoken English, and their thinking, which will undeniably help the activity enjoy an increasing popularity.
I hope these recommendations will be of value and I can’t wait to join you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Daniel写信，就“English Corner”的话题提出自己的建议，并说明原因。
第一步：词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
建议：advice→suggestion
著名的：renowned→famous/well-known
一定……：be bound to→be sure to
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m Li Hua from Senior 3.
拓展句：I’m Li Hua from Senior 3, who is one of the faithful fans of the English Corner.
第三步：高分句型
[高分句型1]Food is a topic that will never be outdated, and I’m pretty sure the students will be interested in it. （运用了that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]By exchanging information ranging from the plots to the film reviews, students are bound to benefit a lot both in their spoken English, and their thinking, which will undeniably help the activity enjoy an increasing popularity.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
16.（高三模拟题精选11）
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter来信，说他每次大型考试来临，都会感到十分焦虑，为此写信向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示，用英语给Peter写一封建议信。内容包括：
1. 表示理解；2. 具体建议；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
Many of us feel somehow nervous whenever we are taking an important exam. Nervousness not only does harm to students’ health but also disturbs our studies. So it’s necessary for us students to learn to relax. I’d like to share my advice with you.
I think it’s very important to have a right attitude towards exams. Exams are only a means of checking what we have learned. Therefore, there is no need to worry too much about the results of the exams. Before an exam, making a scientific study plan and keeping a peaceful mind can help to reduce the pressure from the exam. We can also relax ourselves by doing sports and listening to music. Besides, enough sleep and a balanced diet will work as well.
Hopefully, my advice will be of some use for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生向美国朋友Peter写一封建议信，帮助他缓解考试前的焦虑。
第一步：词汇积累
①焦虑的：nervous/anxious
②必要的，必然的：necessary/essential/inevitable
③平静的：peaceful/placid
④起作用：work/play a role
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We can also relax ourselves by doing sports and listening to music.
拓展句：We can also relax ourselves by doing sports and listening to music, through which we can get much energy to give us confidence.
第三步：高分句型
[高分句型1]So it’s necessary for us students to learn to relax.(运用了it作形式主语)
[高分句型2]Before an exam , making a scientific study plan and keeping a peaceful mind can help to reduce the pressure from the exam.(运用了动名词作主语)
17.（高三模拟题精选12）
假定你是李华，你校交换生George给你发来邮件，说他在学习唐诗时遇到了一些困难，希望你能给他提供一些建议。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 给出建议；2. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear George,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear George,
I’m sorry to hear that you’ve experienced some difficulties while studying Tang poetry. I’m happy to offer some advice to help you.
Firstly, if I were you, I would read translations of Tang poems to get a better understanding of the poems’ meaning. Secondly, it makes sense to focus on understanding the historical and cultural background of the poems to appreciate the poetic language and imagery. Thirdly, you’d better try to read the poems out loud to better understand the poems’ structure. Finally, why not join a study group that can help you with your studies
Don’t be discouraged. With time and effort, I’m sure you will be able to achieve your goals.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生George回信，给他提供一些学习唐诗的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：firstly→first of all
集中：focus on→concentrate on
沮丧的：discouraged→upset
能够：be able to→be capable of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：With time and effort, I’m sure you will be able to achieve your goals.
拓展句：As long as you try with time and effort, I’m sure you will be able to achieve your goals.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you’ve experienced some difficulties while studying Tang poetry. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, if I were you, I would read translations of Tang poems to get a better understanding of the poems’ meaning. (运用了虚拟语气)
18.（高三模拟题精选13）
假定你是李华，你们学校将举办主题为“校园最美，因为有你”（Most Beautiful Campus, Thanks to You）的海报设计大赛，学生作品将在校内展出，你的好朋友Ryan，现就他的参赛作品初稿征求你的意见。请回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 提出存在的问题；
2. 给出修改建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文1】
Dear Ryan,
Having reviewed your initial draft for the poster design competition on “Most Beautiful Campus, Thanks to You”, I’m writing to offer some suggestions for improvement.
Firstly, your design seems to lack some touching stories, which can vividly showcase how students are trying their best to beautify our campus, from their working hard to civilized behaviors. Additionally, some of the text on the poster is difficult to read and recognize due to font (字体/字型) choice and size. Therefore, I’d like to propose selecting a convincing example of students keeping the school environment harmonious and refreshing, clean and tidy by starting with small things. And it’s beneficial to choose a clean and easy-to-read font, simplifying the layout by removing some unnecessary elements.
I hope my feedback is helpful. Good luck with your design. Your revised work is highly expected.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文 2】
Dear Ryan,
I hope this letter finds you well. So delighted to receive your first draft for the poster design competition themed “Most Beautiful Campus, Thanks to You”, I’m writing to brief you on the noticeable problems and offer some suggestions for improvement.
Fabulous as your work is, there’s still something to be improved. To begin with, the theme of the poster, presented in your poster, fails to fully raise/arouse/enhance students’ awareness of loving and maintaining our campus sustainably, which should be highlighted, for it is what the judges look forward to. In addition, as for the layout of the poster, which was a little bit chaotic, if you put them in a certain order or refer to specific display, the overall view would be greatly/significantly improved.
I hope my suggestions are of some help to your improvement. Your revised work is highly expected.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给好朋友Ryan写封邮件，就他的参赛作品初稿提出意见。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提供某人某物：offer sb. sth.→provide sb. with sth.
首先：firstly→to begin with
尽最大努力做某事：try one’s best to do sth.→spare no effort to do sth.
因此：therefore→as a result
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, some of the text on the poster is difficult to read and recognize due to font (字体/字型) choice and size.
拓展句：Additionally, some of the text on the poster is difficult to read and recognize due to font (字体/字型) choice and size, which will leave a bad impression to the judges.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Having reviewed your initial draft for the poster design competition on “Most Beautiful Campus, Thanks to You”, I’m writing to offer some suggestions for improvement. (运用了现在分词的完成式作状语)
【高分句型2】Firstly, your design seems to lack some touching stories, which can vividly showcase how students are trying their best to beautify our campus, from their working hard to civilized behaviors. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
五、通用高分替换训练（文娱与体育）
1. 高分词汇替换
词义 简单词汇 高分词汇
开端，起源 beginning origin
运动员 sportsman athlete
结果 result outcome
技巧 skill technique
吸引力 attraction appeal
出名 become famous rise to fame
喜爱 be fond of be crazy about
被认为…… be regarded as... be viewed as.../be thought of as...
看电影 watch films go to the cinema/theater
出版 be published come out
保持健康 keep healthy keep fit
追溯到…… start from... date back to.../date from...
深受欢迎 be popular be widely accepted
去户外 go outside go outdoors
与优秀选手对抗 play against the good players challenge the good players
各种各样的 all kinds of... a variety of/varieties of...
擅长 be good at be skilled at
2. 高分句型替换
句意 普通句型 高分句型
很多人玩…… Many people play... ... is played all around the world.
对他们的技能感到惊讶，我决心要和他们一样优秀。 Surprised at their skills, I decided to be as good as them. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good.
你将一定得到…… 回报。 You are certain to get... You are bound to be rewarded with...
…… 需要很多时间和精力。 ... needs a lot of time and energy. It takes much time and energy to do...
你可能会认为…… You may think that... You may get the feeling that...
3. 经典表达
汉语释义 经典表达
表演者 performer
乐器 musical instrument
表演艺术 performing art
主角 major role
杰作，名著 masterpiece
练习 practice
观众，听众 audience
灵感 inspiration
主题 theme
家庭聚会 family gathering
庆祝活动 celebration activities
娱乐 entertainment
结局 ending
气氛，氛围 atmosphere
场景 scene
形式 form
娱乐的 entertaining
令人高兴的 amusing
有指导意义的 instructive
感人的 moving/touching
令人享受的 enjoyable
准备充分的 well-prepared
有创造力的 creative
体育馆 gym
想象力 imagination
欣赏 appreciation/appreciate
传统体育 conventional sports
赛事 event
运动爱好者 sports fans
技巧 technique
奖章 medal
锦标赛 tournament
潜力，潜能 potential
精力充沛的 energetic
身体的；物理的 physical
激烈地 fiercely
主办 host
赞助 sponsor
…… 的成员 a member of...
双方 both sides
形成，产生 come into being
继承，传下来 pass down
传播到…… spread to...
以…… 为依据 be based on...
对…… 产生巨大的影响 have a great influence on...
丰富某人的生活 enrich one’s life
给某人留下深刻的印象 make a deep impression on sb.
展现对…… 的天赋 have/show one’s talent for...
以…… 为背景 be set in...
在展出中 on show/exhibition/display
扮演（某一角色） play the role of...
和某人玩得高兴 have fun with sb.
转折点 a turning point
强身健体 build up one’s body
对…… 兴致勃勃 take delight in...
安排…… 做…… arrange for...to do...
和某人竞争 compete with sb.
撞上…… bump into...
接球 catch the ball
招收新队员 admit/recruit new players
试演一个角色 try out for a part
提前买票 buy the tickets in advance
广场舞 square dance
随着音乐起舞 dance to music
看歌剧 see an opera/go to the opera
加入俱乐部 join clubs
周末去野餐 have a picnic over the weekend
受某人欢迎 be popular with sb.
传达信息 convey information
表达感受 express feelings/emotions
打破纪录 break the record
保持纪录 keep the record
避免冲突 avoid conflicts
在…… 中扮演角色一直是我最想做的事情之一。 It has always been one of my strongest desires to have a part in...
京剧有着…… 年的历史，是一种传统的戏剧形式，被认为…… With a history of... years, Beijing Opera is a form of traditional Chinese theater, which is considered as...
…… 是很好的保持健康的方式。 ... is a good way for people to keep fit.
大多数流行歌曲赞扬了我们触手可及的…… 并且聚焦于丰富我们的生活上。 Most pop songs praise... which are within our reach, and they focus on enriching our life.
仍然有很多人喜欢…… 因为这为…… 提供了机会。 There are still lots of people who are fond of... since it provides a chance for...
在中国，…… 一直是收视率最高、最受人喜爱的节目之一。 ... has been one of the most watched and favorable programs in China.
不可否认，…… 不仅给人们带来了许多欢乐，也为很多艺术家提供了舞台。 There is no denying that... has not only brought plenty of fun to people but also served as a platform for many artists.
一方面，……（活动）设计了很多出色的演出，像……，给我们观众留下了深刻的印象。 For one thing,... is designed with a number of wonderful performances like... which make a deep impression on us audience.
这样的乐趣是无与伦比的。 Nothing can be compared with such great fun.
目的是让公众接触到艺术并且以一种全新的方式去欣赏。 The purpose was to let the public have a new access to art and appreciate it in a new way.
表演最后很成功。 It turned out that the performance was successful.
幽默之处在于…… The humor lies in the fact that...
无论你是否喜欢，…… 已经成了我们生活中的一部分。 Whether you like it or not,... has become a part of our life.
这不仅使我们接触自然，让我们从繁重的功课中获得了放松，而且还促进了我们之间的友谊。 Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork, it also promoted the friendship among us.
一个世界闻名的剧目……（剧目名字），将在……（时间）在新建好的……（地点）上映。 A world famous play... will be put on in the newly - built... at... on...
我确信这会拓展你们的视野，并且你们会从中获得享受。 I am sure that it will broaden your horizons and that you will enjoy it.
…… 在这个城市的增长已达到 20%。 The increase of... in the city has reached to 20%.
1989 年出现了逐渐下降的情况。 There was a gradual decline in 1989.
让…… 点亮我们的生活。 Let... light up our life!
我进行了一项关于中学生是否每天应该跑 1500 米的调查。 I did a survey about whether middle school students should run 1,500 meters every day.
他们认为…… 是一种很好的放松和保持健康的方式。 They think... is a good way to relax and keep healthy.
我一直忙于为…… 进行训练。 I have been very busy training for...
我们确实知道的是它始于…… What we do know is that it began in...
……（运动）源于一种…… 方式，在 19 世纪末期发展成了一项运动。 ... originated as a means of..., and developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.
事实上，阻挡、推搡和碰撞都是比赛的一部分。 As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just parts of a game.
我们必须学会冷静、理智地处理冲突。 We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.
配备有…… 我们学校提供给我们进行各项运动的机会。 Equipped with..., our school offers us an opportunity to do a variety of sports.
就我而言，没有什么比…… 更能促进和别人合作。 As far as I'm concerned, there is nothing better than..., which contributes to cooperating with others.
我们学校运动场占地大约两平方公里。 Our school has a sports field which covers an area of about two square kilometers.
在一班和二班之间举办了一场足球赛。 A football match was held between Class One and Class Two.
没有证据表明…… There is no evidence to suggest that...
我们认为友谊第一，比赛第二。 We think that friendship comes first, and a match comes second.
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