第10讲 道歉信
(考试时间:15分钟/每题 )
目 录
道歉信常用词汇 P1
道歉信常用句型 P2
道歉信常用模版与演练 P4
道歉信精准测试18篇 P6
热点话题训练(课外活动) P36
一、道歉信常用词汇
序号 中文 英文
1 信守诺言 keep promise
2 缺席 / 出席 be absent/present from
3 因某事向某人道歉 apologize to sb.for sth.
4 因某事向某人道歉 show an apology to sb.for sth.
5 因某事向某人道歉 make an apology to sb.for sth.
6 对某人说抱歉 say sorry to sb.
7 恳求你的原谅 beg your forgiveness for
8 造成不便 cause inconvenience
9 错过 / 取消约会 miss/cancel the appointment
10 弥补 make up for...
11 表达我的道歉 express my regret
12 体谅 be considerate of
13 接受我的道歉 accept my apology
14 与…… 冲突 conflict with...
15 除了做某事别无选择 have no choice/option but to do sth.
16 选择 make a choice
二、道歉信常用句型
1.我写信是为…… 道歉。
I am writing to apologize for…
2.我想…… 向你道歉。
I would like to give you my apology for…
3.我很抱歉……
I am very sorry to say that…
4.对于做了 / 没做……,我必须道歉。
I must apologize about (not) doing sth…
5.请接受我对于…… 的真诚道歉。
Please accept my sincere apology for…
6.我很抱歉,但是……
I am terribly sorry, but…
7.我想让你知道我们有多难过,我向你保证这不会再发生了。
I want you to know how bad we feel about it and to assure you that it won't happen again.
8.我希望这不会给你带来太多的不便。
I hope that this does not cause you too much inconvenience.
9.你太好了,再给我一次机会做某事。我保证不会再发生这种事情。
It would be very kind (considerate) of you to give me another chance to do sth. I promise it will never happen again.
10.如方便的话,我们再约去做某事。
If it is convenient for you, let's have another appointment to do sth.
11.你会介意我改变约会的时间吗?
Would you mind if I change the appointment time
12.顺便说一下,下周约个时间一起吃晚饭好吗?
By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week
13.可能让我做某事来弥补损失吗?
Is it possible that I make up for the loss by doing sth.
14.我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
15.请允许我再一次说抱歉。
Please allow me to say sorry again.
16.我真诚的希望你能够站在我的位置想一想,并且接受我的道歉。
I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.
17.我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。
I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.
18.我刚刚得了一场重感冒,有人坚决建议我呆在家里休息一下。所以我非常遗憾地错过了这个机会……(和你在一起)。
I have just had a bad cold and I'm advised to stay at home for a rest. So I feel terribly sorry to miss the opportunity to...(with you).
19.我当时将缺席的原因是我的学校安排发生了变化。
The reason why I will not be available at that time is that there is a change in my school arrangements.
20.我得去机场接我叔叔。我试着找一个人,但没有其他人。
I have to pick up my uncle at the airport. I'd tried to find an alternative person but no one else is available.
21.你能给我机会面对面向你道歉吗?我真诚地邀请你来参加。
Would you give me a chance to make an apology to you face to face I sincerely invite you to...
22.我们要不要推迟我们的时间到……
Shall we postpone our meeting/visit/...till...
23.再次抱歉为我的缺席 / 突然更改造成的不便。
Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence/the abrupt change.
三、道歉信常用模版与演练
1. 基本模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that ______(写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and ______(失约理由) .
Shall we fix another time I’ll be available any time after______(补救办法). Will ______(另约时间) suits your convenience If it’s ok, let’s meet at ______(见面地点). If not, let me know what time suits you best. I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 写作实操技巧
假定你是李华,你和外教MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国际摄影展,但你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2. 解释原因;
3.补救措施。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【模板范文】
Dear MrSmith (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that I can' t accompany you to the International Photography Festival held this Saturday (写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and my parents have to go outside of the city this Saturday, so I have to stay at home and take care of my little brother (失约理由) .
Shall we fix another time I’ll be available any time after this Saturday(补救办法). Will this Sunday(另约时间) suits your convenience If it’s ok, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 a.m.(见面地点). If not, let me know what time suits you best. I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
3. 仿写演练
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友David本周六即将结束在中国的旅行,乘飞机返回英国,你因有事无法按原定计划取机场为他送行,只好写信向他道歉,内容如下:
1.表达歉意;2.说明不能送行的原因。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【模板范文】
Dear David (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that I cannot make it to see you off at the airport this Saturday as promised (写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend. Actually, I have just been informed of this plan by the schoolmaster. Moreover, as the chairman of the Student Union, I feel responsible for this job. How I wish I could have the chance to talk with you once more about the happy days we spent together before you leave! (失约理由) .
I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Wish you a safe journey.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
四、道歉信精准测试18篇
1.(高三模拟题精选)
假如你是李华, 现因公司货品质量问题给Johnson写一封道歉信。要点如下:
1.表示要查漏补缺, 改进提高;
2.提出补救办法;
3.表明决心和意愿。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好, 不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
First of all, thank you for informing us of the quality issue. I sincerely apologize to you for our failure to provide you with satisfactory products.
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Johnson,
First of all, thank you for informing us of the quality issue. I sincerely apologize to you for our failure to provide you with satisfactory products.
We'll study the problem, find out the cause of it, and try to avoid the same bad thing. We assure you that we will provide you with a free replacement of the one you bought. Mr. Lee of our Business Department will contact you as soon as possible.
We hope you understand that this is just an accidental event, and we will try to continually improve our product quality. We cherish the establishment of a lasting friendship with you. At the same time, we will also continue to work hard to provide high-quality and affordable products and better after-sales service for you.
I sincerely apologize again for the trouble this has caused you.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封道歉信,就公司货品质量问题给Johnson道歉。
【详解】1.道歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意,请求对方原谅自己的过失。写道歉信时要明确不是在找借口为自己辩护,而是承认自己的过错并提出弥补过错的具体建议和方法。此类信件的关键是语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实。
2.在写作时可以根据提示的要点按照三段式的模式谋篇布局:
首段:表明自己做错了事,表示歉意;主体段落:提出作为弥补的可行措施,措施要具体、合理;结尾段:再次表明承认错误的态度,请求收信人的谅解。
第一步:词汇积累
查明,确信:assure
珍惜:cherish
意外的:accidental
建立:establishment
买的起:affordable
3.文章的结尾再次因给对方造成的不便而道歉,显得礼貌且态度诚恳。
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:we will provide you with a free replacement of the one you bought.
拓展句:We assure you that we will provide you with a free replacement of the one you bought.
第三步:高分句式
[高分句型1]
At the same time, we will also continue to work hard to provide high-quality and affordable products and better after-sales service for you.(连接词at the same time的使用使上下文衔接自然,后文使用并列句并运用高级词汇如affordable, after-sales等。)
[高分句型2]
I sincerely apologize again for the trouble this has caused you.句子副词sincerely的运用使得句子流畅自然,this has caused you为省略关系代词的定语从句。
2.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训,回国时因为匆忙,把房东Bob的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob写一封道歉信,要点如下:
1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意;
2. 提出解决的办法;
3. 再次请求原谅。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Bob,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Bob,
I am writing to make an apology to you, for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I came back from England and found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.
The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it If you cannot find a similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.
I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness. Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文,就将房东Bob的光盘带走一事写一封道歉信。
第一步:词汇积累
相信:believe→ensure
购买:buy→purchase
发现:find→spot
解决办法:solution→settlement
第二步:句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.
拓展句:So sorry am I that you cannot listen to it at present.
第三步:高分句式
[高分句型1]
I am writing to make an apology to you, for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
5.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,在澳大利亚留学期间,父母维修厨房时影响到了邻居James,请给他写一封道歉信,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意;
2. 解释原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear James,
We were very shocked to get your letter complaining about the noise from our flat. We didn't expect it spoiled your evenings and caused you some distress.We do hope you accept our apologies.
My parents are busy at work during daytime , so they have to refit our kitchen in the evenings. What's more, they are not so expert at doing house repairs that they have difficulty in getting things to fit properly.
As the repair is still not finished, we will call in a professional worker to finish the work this weekend.We promise that he'll work only during daytime hours, so you won't be disturbed in the evenings again.
Sorry to have caused these problems.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定考生是李华,在澳大利亚留学期间,父母维修厨房时影响到了邻居James,请给他写一封道歉信。
第一步:词汇积累
希望:wish→ hope
困难:trouble→ difficulty
惊讶的: astonished→ shocked
促使,导致:result in→ cause
第二步:句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:My parents are busy at work during daytime, so they have to refit our kitchen in the evenings.
拓展句: Because my parents are busy at work during daytime, they have to refit our kitchen in the evenings
第三步:高分句式
[高分句型1]
What's more, they are not so expert at doing house repairs that they have difficulty in getting things to fit properly.(so…that…引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]
We promise that he'll work only during daytime hours, so you won't be disturbed in the evenings again.(that引导的宾语从句)
4.(高三模拟题精选)
假设你是高二学生陈伟,昨天,你和你的外籍同桌Bob关于用集体班费给灾区捐款这一问题发生了一些小争执,请你按照以下要求给他写一封道歉信。
1. 表达自己的歉意;
2. 阐述道歉的原因(至少2条);
3. 表达自己的友好之情,提倡(advocate)相互理解、相互尊重。
注意:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
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【参考范文】
Dear Bob,
I am writing to express my regret at the unpleasant argument between us yesterday. I felt so sorry for what 1 did and said yesterday. I donated all the money to the students in the flooded area without discussing the plan with you.
I could have dealt with it differently. But when I handed in the money, you happened to be away from school and later I didn't explain it to you in an appropriate way. What was worse, I said that you didn't care about the collection, which hurt you so much.
Now I want to take back what I said. Please accept my apology for being so impulsive yesterday, and I'd like you to try to understand my situation. I hope our friendship will last long.
Yours,
Chen Wei
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作,要求你给同桌Bob写一封道歉信,表达歉意,阐述道歉原因并表达友好之情。
第一步:词汇积累
歉意:apology→regret
合适的:suitable→appropriate
撤回:withdraw→take back
冲动的:hotheaded→impulsive
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Please accept my apology for being so impulsive yesterday.
拓展句:Please accept my apology, for I was so impulsive yesterday.
第三步:高分句式
[高分句型1]
I could have dealt with it differently. (could have done,运用了虚拟语气)
[高分句型2]
What was worse, I said that you didn't care about the collection, which hurt you so much. (综合运用状语从句、宾语从句和非限制性定语从句)
5.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,因下周五要到机场接表妹,所以不能陪Tom去北京旅行。请你给Tom写一封道歉信。
内容主要包括:
1. 向Tom表达歉意。
2. 向Tom解释原因。
3. 祝Tom下周愉快并另约时间陪Tom去北京旅游。
注意:
1. 词数100 左右
2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I am very sorry that I can’t go on a trip to Beijing with you next weekend, which I have promised you. I am writing to tell you the reason for it.
Just now, my cousin, Li Ying, who went abroad for further education last year, informed me that she would return the next Friday morning. She asked me to pick her up at the airport with her parents. As you know, we haven’t seen each other for about a year, so I have to see her in the first place.
I really hope that you can accept my apology and understand me. I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.
Wish you have a good time this weekend.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
第一步:词汇积累
出国深造: go abroad for further education
接某人: pick sb up
首先: in the first place
带某人参观某地: show sb around somewhere
玩得开心: have a good time
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We haven’t seen each other for about a year. I have to see her tin the first place.
拓展句:As you know, we haven’t seen each other for about a year, so I have to see her in the first place.
第三步:高分句式
[高分句型1]
I am very sorry that I can’t go on a trip to Beijing with you next weekend, which I have promised you.(使用非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Just now, my cousin, Li Ying, who went abroad for further education last year, informed me that she would return the next Friday morning.(使用非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]
As you know, we haven’t seen each other for about a year, so I have to see her in the first place.(使用非限制性定语从句和并列句)
[高分句型4]
I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.(使用形式宾语)
6.(高三模拟题精选)
假如你是李华,你的好朋友Peter明天回国,你因故不能明天去机场送他,请给他写一封道歉信。
内容包括:1.表达道歉;
2.解释原因。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I have to make an apology to you. I had planned to see you off tomorrow at the airport, but now I can’t.
The reason is as follows. It is at that time that I will have to participate in a spoken English competition held, for I was once champion in our university competition. Therefore, I have no choice but to change my plan as well as schedule and cannot make my presence when you leave for your country. I am deeply sorry for it.
Sad as I am that I can’t see you for a long time, I wish you have a good time with your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之道歉信写作。要求考生就因故不能明天去机场送好友Peter回国,给他写一封道歉信。本篇书面表达题干所给的信息非常有限,所以考生要仔细思考如何适当增加细节,也就是在“解释原因”上要多下点功夫。原因可以从“自己那时正好要干什么事情(比如:要参加比赛啦,要参加面试啦等等)而抽不开身前往送行”来设想。
【句式拓展】
原句:I have to make an apology to you. I had planned to see you off tomorrow at the airport, but now I can’t.
拓展:I have to make an apology to you because I can’t see you off tomorrow at the airport.
【亮点句型】
1. It is at that time that I will have to participate in a spoken English competition held,
(运用了that强调句)
2.Sad as I am that I can’t see you for a long time, I wish you have a good time with your family.
(运用了部分倒装)
7.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,你的美国老师Mr.Evans要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr.Evans道歉并说明情况。
要点如下:1.表示歉意;
2.道歉理由(至少两点);
3.询问他是否有录音,以便补听讲座。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr.Evans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr Evans,
I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow afternoon.
My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now. I am afraid that I will have to take care of her these days. However I am actually very interested in English society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之道歉信写作。要求考生就明天下午不能去听Mr.Evans的英国历史讲座给他写一封信道歉信。要点如下:表示歉意;道歉理由;询问他是否有录音,以便补听讲座。本篇书面表达的题干所给的信息还是比较多的。首先,“表示歉意;询问他是否有录音,以便补听讲座”等要点表达起来还是非常容易的;其次把“道歉理由”表达出来就可,记住至少需要两条理由。
【句式拓展】
原句:My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now.
拓展:My mother suddenly fell ill, because of which she was taken to hospital last night, and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now.
【亮点句型】
1.I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won't be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow afternoon.(由that引导的宾语从句)
2.I am afraid that I will have to take care of her these days.(由that引导的宾语从句)
3.I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape
(由if引导的宾语从句和if so引导的省略的条件状语从句)
4.It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
(由what引导的宾语从句)
5.I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.
(由that引导的宾语从句)
8.(高三模拟题精选)
假如你是李华,你约好昨天去公交车站接你的英国朋友Dylan,然后一起去公园。但你却迟到了,他有些生气,没有等到你就离开了。请用英语给他写一封道歉信。
内容如下:1.认错,道歉,解释原因;
2.许诺以后一定守时;
3.请求原谅。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Dylan,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Dylan,
I am writing to convey my sincere apology to you for not being punctual yesterday.
I was supposed to pick you up at the bus station at 10 a.m. But so careless was I that I forgot to take the busy traffic into consideration.As a result, I unfortunately got caught up in a terrible traffic jam and failed to arrive there on time.However, it shouldn’t be my excuse and you have every right to be angry with me.
I promise that anything like this won’t happen once again. Again, I am excessively sorry about what have happened. I would truly appreciate it if you could kindly forgive me and I will definitely turn over a new leaf in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之道歉信写作。要求考生给自己的朋友写一封道歉信。本篇书面表达的题干所给的信息足够的多,看似好事,其实不然。因为考生如果按照题干中所给要点的顺序一一写出来的话就嫌得太啰嗦,也没有逻辑性,所以考生需要对题干中的要点进行筛选并捋顺后,再设想一下如何解释才行。筛选捋顺:本来应该到汽车站接你的,(因为什么原因);结果你生气了;作出保证。
【句式拓展】
原句:I am writing to convey my sincere apology to you for not being punctual yesterday.
拓展:I am writing to convey my sincere apology to you because I was not punctual yesterday.
【亮点句型】
1.But so careless was I that I forgot to take the busy traffic into consideration.
(运用了that引导的结果状语从句和倒装句,即表语前置时,用倒装)
2.Again, I am excessively sorry about what have happened.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
9.(高三模拟题精选)
假设你是高二学生陈伟,昨天,你和你的外籍同桌Bob关于用集体班费给灾区捐款这一问题发生了一些小争执,请你按照以下要求给他写一封道歉信。
内容包括:1.表达自己的歉意;
2.阐述道歉的原因(至少2条);
3.表达自己的友好之情,提倡(advocate)相互理解、相互尊重。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
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【参考范文】
Dear Bob,
I am writing to express my regret at the unpleasant argument between us yesterday. I felt so sorry for what I did and said yesterday. I donated all the money to the students in the flooded area without discussing the plan with you.
I could have dealt with it differently. But when I handed in the money, you happened to be away from school and later I didn’t explain it to you in an appropriate way. What was worse, I said that you didn't care about the collection, which hurt you so much.
Now I want to take back what I said. Please accept my apology for being so impulsive yesterday, and I’d like you to try to understand my situation. I hope our friendship will last long.
Yours,
Chen Wei
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之道歉信写作。要求考生给同桌Bob写一封道歉信,表达歉意,阐述道歉原因并表达友好之情。同上题一样,本篇书面表达的题干所给的信息足够的多,但是跟上题所不同的是本篇书面表达所要表达内容的顺序题干已经给出:1.表达自己的歉意;2.阐述道歉的原因(至少2条);3.表达自己的友好之情,提倡(advocate)相互理解、相互尊重。所以考生只需要筛选一下要点。重点是设想道歉的原因(至少2条)。
【句式拓展】
原句:Please accept my apology for being so impulsive yesterday.
拓展:Please accept my apology, for I was so impulsive yesterday.
【亮点句型】
1. I could have dealt with it differently.(could have done,运用了虚拟语气)
2.What was worse, I said that you didn't care about the collection, which hurt you so much.
(综合运用状语从句、宾语从句和非限制性定语从句)
10.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是校英语社社长李华,原定于下周举行的英语戏剧比赛因故推迟,请给担任评委的外教Mr. Johnson写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 推迟原因及后续调整。
注意:1. 写作词数应在80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Johnson,
With utter sincerity, I’m writing to extend my apology for the postponement of the English Drama Performance Competition, which otherwise would be held next Friday.
Out of our expectations, a lecture of vital importance will fall on next Friday, which unavoidably conflicts with our initial arrangement, making many competitors unavailable to the contest. Therefore, the contest has to be put off to next Sunday night. Would it be convenient for you
I apologize again for any inconvenience it may bring to you and your understanding will be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your attendance!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。原定于下周举行的英语戏剧比赛因故推迟,要求考生给担任评委的外教Mr. Johnson写封邮件表示歉意,并解释推迟原因及后续调整。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
推迟:postponement→delay
至关重要的:vital→essential
比赛:contest→match
因此:therefore→thus
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Therefore, the contest has to be put off to next Sunday night.
拓展句:Therefore, it has become necessary that the contest should be put off to next Sunday night due to the scheduling conflict.
【点睛】[高分句型1]With utter sincerity, I’m writing to extend my apology for the postponement of the English Drama Performance Competition, which otherwise would be held next Friday.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Out of our expectations, a lecture of vital importance will fall on next Friday, which unavoidably conflicts with our initial arrangement, making many competitors unavailable to the contest.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
11.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,你班同学决定本周日下午为外教 Daniel举办生日聚会,你因故无法参加,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 说明原因;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应的位置作答。
Dear Daniel,
We’ re throwing a party for your birthday this Sunday afternoon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Daniel,
We’re throwing a party for your birthday this Sunday afternoon. But I am here to express my sincerest apologies for not being able to attend it.
As scheduled, there is going to be a science competition on Sunday afternoon. This competition is so important to me that I do not want to miss out on it. You are an amazing teacher, from whom I feel fortunate to have the opportunity to learn.
Once again, I apologize for not being able to join in the celebrations. May your birthday be filled with love, laughter, and wonderful memories. Wish you a fantastic birthday!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教 Daniel写封邮件,对自己因故无法参加周日下午举办生日聚会道歉,并说明原因,送上祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express →convey
幸运的:fortunate → lucky
参加:join in → take part in
充满:be filled with → be full of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:But I am here to express my sincerest apologies for not being able to attend it.
拓展句:But I am here to express my sincerest apologies because I am not able to attend it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This competition is so important to me that I do not want to miss out on it.(运用了“so…that…”句型引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】You are an amazing teacher, from whom I feel fortunate to have the opportunity to learn.(运用了“介词+whom”引导的非限制性定语从句)
12.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,你不小心遗失了交换生好友Judy借给你的英文小说。请你给她写封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.补救措施。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Judy,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Judy,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to sincerely apologize for losing the English novel you kindly lent me. I am truly sorry for any inconvenience this may have caused.
I misplaced the book during a recent trip to the library. Despite my best efforts to locate it, I have been unable to find it. I understand the importance of the book to you and deeply regret my carelessness.
To compensate for this, I will purchase a new copy of the book and have it delivered to you as soon as possible. Once again, I apologize for the trouble and appreciate your understanding.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你不小心遗失了交换生好友Judy借给你的英文小说,要求给她写一封电子邮件来道歉。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚地:sincerely → genuinely
真地:truly → terribly
尽管:despite → in spite of
补偿:compensate → make up
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I understand the importance of the book to you and deeply regret my carelessness.
拓展句:I understand the importance of the book to you, deeply regretting my carelessness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to sincerely apologize for losing the English novel you kindly lent me.(运用了省略关系词的限制性定语从句和动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】To compensate for this, I will purchase a new copy of the book and have it delivered to you as soon as possible.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语和过去分词作补足语)
13.(高三模拟题精选)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9:00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件,就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。
【详解】1.词汇积累
造成:cause→contribute to
麻烦:trouble→problem
怎么样:how about→what about
此外:in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I should be available anytime next weekend.
拓展句:I should be available anytime next weekend when I can go out with you and have a good time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
14.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,你把交换生Jerry的书弄丢了,请你给他写一封电子邮件表示歉意,内容包括:
1.说明具体情况;
2.提出解决方案。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Jerry,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jerry,
How are you going I am writing to apologize for losing the book I borrowed from you.
I understand what this book means to you, and I feel extremely terrible for losing it. To make up for my mistake, I would like to offer to buy you a new copy. If you could let me know where I can purchase it or if you have a preferred edition, I will make sure to get it for you as soon as possible.
I am truly sorry for the inconvenience this has caused you. I hope that we can find a solution that works for both of us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,就你把交换生Jerry的书弄丢了一事,给他写一封电子邮件表示歉意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表示歉意:apologize → make an apology
理解:understand → be aware of
弥补:make up for → compensate for
不方便:inconvenience → unpleasantness
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To make up for my mistake, I would like to offer to buy you a new copy.
拓展句:In order that I can make up for my mistake, I would like to offer to buy you a new copy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I understand what this book means to you, and I feel extremely terrible for losing it.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I hope that we can find a solution that works for both of us.(运用了第一个that引导的宾语从句,第二个that引导的定语从句)
15.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是校英语戏剧社社长李华,原定于下周举行的英语戏剧表演赛因故推迟,请你给担任评委的外教Katherine写邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意;
2. 说明理由;
3. 后续调整。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Katherine,
I’m Li Hua, leader of the English drama club.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Katherine,
I’m terribly sorry to inform you that the English Dram a Competition scheduled for next Thursday will have to be rearranged.
The school auditorium, where the competition is to be held, is not available for use for five days next week due to essential maintenance. Thus, we’re made a decision to reschedule the competition for next Sunday evening when the maintenance work will be complete and the auditorium will be ready for use. Would you be available that day
Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience caused. Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。原定于下周举行的英语戏剧表演赛因故推迟,要求考生给担任评委的外教Katherine写邮件表达歉意,说明理由并告诉他后续调整。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
通知:inform→notify
重要的:essential→important
因此:thus→therefore
完成:complete→finish
2. 句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:The school auditorium, where the competition is to be held, is not available for use for five days next week due to essential maintenance.
拓展句:The school auditorium, where the competition is to be held, is not available for use because it will undergo essential maintenance for five days next week.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m terribly sorry to inform you that the English Dram a Competition scheduled for next Thursday will have to be rearranged.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Thus, we’re made a decision to reschedule the competition for next Sunday evening when the maintenance work will be complete and the auditorium will be ready for use.(when引导的时间状语从句)
16.(高三模拟题精选)
假如你是李华,你约好昨天去公交车站接你的英国朋友Dylan,然后一起去公园。但你却迟到了,他有些生气,没有等到你就离开了。请用英语给他写一封道歉信,内容如下:
1.认错,道歉,解释原因;
2.许诺以后一定守时;
3.请求原谅。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Dylan,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Dylan,
I am writing to convey my sincere apology to you for not being punctual yesterday.
I was supposed to pick you up at the bus station at 10 a.m. But so careless was I that I forgot to take the busy traffic into consideration. As a result, I unfortunately got caught up in a terrible traffic jam and failed to arrive there on time. However, it shouldn’t be my excuse and you have every right to be angry with me.
I promise that anything like this won’t happen once again. Again, I am excessively sorry about what have happened. I would truly appreciate it if you could kindly forgive me and I will definitely turn over a new leaf in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生向自己的朋友道歉,因为自己没有遵守约定按时接他,并承诺以后一定守时。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:convey→ express
真诚:sincere → genuine
应该:be supposed to → should
非常:excessively→ extremely/very
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to convey my sincere apology to you for not being punctual yesterday.
拓展句:I am writing to convey my sincere apology to you because I was not punctual yesterday.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But so careless was I that I forgot to take the busy traffic into consideration.(运用了that引导的结果状语从句和倒装句,即表语前置时,用倒装)
【高分句型2】Again, I am excessively sorry about what have happened.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
17.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,在英国就读。前几天同学 Jim在背后议论你,愤怒之下你在网上发帖指责他。后来你认识到自己的错误,写信向他致歉并承认错误,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.反思。
注意:
1. 写作词数 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to apologize to you. I shouldn’t have posted that online to blame you for gossiping about me. I was too angry at that moment and failed to control my emotions. I realize my mistake and I’m really sorry for what I’ve done. I hope you can forgive me.
Sorry again and I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于道歉信。同学 Jim在背后议论李华,愤怒之下在网上发帖指责他。后来李华认识到自己的错误,写信向他致歉并承认错误,要求考生李华给英国朋友写信向他致歉并承认错误。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的:genuinely →sincerely
愤怒的:angry → aannoyed
意识到:realize →be aware of
控制:control→ contain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I was too angry at that moment and failed to control my emotions.
拓展句:I was so angry at that moment that I failed to control my emotions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I realize my mistake and I’m really sorry for what I’ve done(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Sorry again and I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
18.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,外教Mike邀请你担任英语俱乐部下周五举办的“Drama Night”的主持人。现你因故无法出席,请写信说明情况。内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因。
注意:
1.开头和结尾已经给出;
2.词数80左右;
3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I am truly sorry for not being able to attend the “Drama Night” as the host next Friday. I know how much effort you have put into organizing this event. Unfortunately, I have a conflict that I cannot reschedule. My cousin is getting married on that day and I am required to be part of the wedding ceremony. Family gatherings are very important in Chinese culture.
I hope you understand my situation and please accept my sincere apologies. If there is anything else I can do to help or support the event, I would be more than willing to assist in any way I can.
YYours Sincerely,
LLi Hua
【导语】这是一封道歉信,要求考生以李华的身份,向外教Mike解释自己无法担任“Drama Night”主持人的原因。
【详解】词汇积累
重要的:be very important→ be of great importance
道歉:apologize→ make an apology
解释:explain→ clarify
要求:require→ request
句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:I know how much effort you have put into organizing this event.
拓展句:I am fully cognizant of the immense effort and dedication you have invested in orchestrating this remarkable event.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am truly sorry for not being able to attend the “Drama Night” as the host next Friday.(使用了动名词短语作宾语)
【高分句型2】If there is anything else I can do to help or support the event, I would be more than willing to assist in any way I can.(使用条件状语从句)
五、热点话题训练(课外活动)
一、话题概述
翻译:课外活动 / 课外娱乐活动对青少年学生来说至关重要。它们不仅能缓解学业负担带来的精神压力,还能让学生在人际交往中结交更多朋友。通过参与这些有意义且有趣的活动,学生们肯定能够培养综合能力和团队精神。
After-class activities/Extra-curricular recreations are essential to teenage students. Not only can they relieve mental pressure from the academic burden, but also they can make more friends in the interpersonal interactions.
By involving themselves in those meaningful and entertaining activities, students can definitely cultivate their overall abilities and team spirit.
重点词汇积累
extra-curricular [ ekstr k r kj l (r)] adj. 课外的
recreation [ ri kri e n] n. 娱乐活动,游戏
essential [ sen l] adj. 必不可少的,极其重要的
拓展:vital/crucial/significant/fundamental(基本的,根本的)
meaningful [ mi n fl] adj. 有意义的
拓展:instructive(有教育意义的)/educational
entertaining [ ent te n ] adj. 有趣的,娱乐的
拓展:amusing
cultivate [ k lt ve t] v. 培养,养成
拓展:develop/foster
二、课外活动的意义
翻译:随着高考临近,我们高中生忙于学业任务。在一定程度上,课外活动为我们提供了恢复精力、振奋精神的机会。在我看来,这些活动有助于强身健体,塑造个性,还有助于培养我们的合作意识,增强团队精神。
With the college entrance examination drawing near, we senior high school students are occupied with academic assignments. To a certain extent, after-class activities serve as an opportunity to refresh ourselves and lift our spirits. From my perspective, these activities help to strengthen our body as well as shape our personality. It contributes to developing our awareness of cooperation and enhancing team spirit.
重点词汇积累
college entrance examination:高考
be occupied with:忙于
refresh [r fre ] v. 使恢复精力
lift one’s spirits:提高某人的兴致
perspective [p spekt v] n. 角度,观点,想法
contribute to:有助于
三、丰富课外生活
翻译:我们有很多选择来丰富课余时间,比如志愿工作,它能帮助我们培养解决问题的能力,学会担当,获得自尊。
志愿工作的方式有很多。在周末,去附近公园捡垃圾做志愿,不仅能给我们带来成就感,还有助于构建和谐社会。在社区里,我们可以陪伴孤独的老人,给他们讲有趣的故事或帮忙打扫卫生。在学校,协助图书管理员整理图书也很有价值。正如那句谚语所说:“事实胜于雄辩”。让我们开始行动,让课余时间更有意义、更有价值。
We have many options to enrich our spare time, such as voluntary work, which can help us develop problem-solving skills, learn responsibility and acquire self-esteem.
There are many ways to do voluntary work. At weekends, volunteering to pick up rubbish in a nearby park will not only bring us a sense of accomplishment but also contribute to a harmonious society. In the community, we can accompany lonely senior citizens, telling them funny stories or doing some cleaning. At school, it will be of great value to help librarians keep books in order. Just as the saying goes, actions speak louder than words. Let’s get down to making our spare time more meaningful and rewarding.
重点词汇积累
option [ p n] n. 选择
spare [spe (r)] adj. 空闲的,空余的
self-esteem [ self sti m] n. 自尊(心)
accomplishment [ k mpl m nt] n. 成就
harmonious [hɑ m ni s] adj. 和谐的
accompany [ k mp ni] v. 陪同,陪伴
get down to sth./doing sth.:开始做某事
四、春游活动
翻译:我们打算本周末组织一次春游。我们将在学校门口集合,然后乘校车出发。这次春游最精彩的部分是登山比赛,获胜队伍将获得奖品。此外,我们鼓励大家拍摄美丽的风景照片,回来后与全班同学分享。在春游过程中,我们不仅能释放压力、恢复精力,还能增强团队精神,加深友谊。
We intend to organize a spring outing this weekend. We will gather at the school gate and set out by school bus. The highlight of this outing will be a mountain-climbing competition and a prize will be prepared for the winning team. Besides, everybody is encouraged to take photos of the splendid views, which can be shared with the whole class after we return. During the outing, not only can we release tension and refresh ourselves, but also we can enhance team spirit and strengthen our friendship.
重点词汇积累
outing [ a t ] n. 短途旅游,远足
set out:出发,动身
highlight [ ha la t] n. 最精彩的部分
splendid [ splend d] adj. 壮丽的
tension [ ten n] n. (精神上的)紧张
enhance [ n hɑ ns] v. 提高,增强
拓展:boost/reinforce/strengthen
五、志愿服务
翻译:志愿服务在很多方面对学生有益。一方面,通过服务他人,我们可以培养解决问题的能力,提高沟通能力。另一方面,摆脱学业负担,我们可以享受愉快时光,放松身心,这对我们的身心健康有益。
Voluntary services are beneficial to students in many aspects. For one thing, by serving others, we can develop problem-solving skills and improve communicating abilities. For another, free from academic burden, we can enjoy a pleasant time and have our body relaxed, which contributes to our mental and physical health.
重点词汇积累
beneficial [ ben f l] adj. 有利的,有用的
拓展:helpful/favorable
六、话题相关表达积累
after-class activity 课外活动
extra-curricular recreation 课外娱乐活动
relieve mental pressure 缓解精神压力
academic burden 学业负担
interpersonal interaction 人际交往
cultivate team spirit 培养团队精神
shape one’s personality 塑造某人的性格
enrich the spare time 丰富业余时间
a sense of accomplishment 成就感
spring outing 春游
strengthen a friendship 加深友谊
voluntary service 志愿服务
mental and physical health 身心健康
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()第10讲 道歉信
(考试时间:15分钟/每题 )
目 录
道歉信常用词汇 P1
道歉信常用句型 P2
道歉信常用模版与演练 P4
道歉信精准测试18篇 P5
热点话题训练(课外活动) P17
一、道歉信常用词汇
序号 中文 英文
1 信守诺言
2 缺席 / 出席
3 因某事向某人道歉
4 因某事向某人道歉
5 因某事向某人道歉
6 对某人说抱歉
7 恳求你的原谅
8 造成不便
9 错过 / 取消约会
10 弥补
11 表达我的道歉
12 体谅
13 接受我的道歉
14 与…… 冲突
15 除了做某事别无选择
16 选择
二、道歉信常用句型
1.我写信是为…… 道歉。
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2.我想…… 向你道歉。
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3.我很抱歉……
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4.对于做了 / 没做……,我必须道歉。
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5.请接受我对于…… 的真诚道歉。
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6.我很抱歉,但是……
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7.我想让你知道我们有多难过,我向你保证这不会再发生了。
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8.我希望这不会给你带来太多的不便。
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9.你太好了,再给我一次机会做某事。我保证不会再发生这种事情。
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10.如方便的话,我们再约去做某事。
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11.你会介意我改变约会的时间吗?
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12.顺便说一下,下周约个时间一起吃晚饭好吗?
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13.可能让我做某事来弥补损失吗?
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14.我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。
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15.请允许我再一次说抱歉。
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16.我真诚的希望你能够站在我的位置想一想,并且接受我的道歉。
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17.我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。
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18.我刚刚得了一场重感冒,有人坚决建议我呆在家里休息一下。所以我非常遗憾地错过了这个机会……(和你在一起)。
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19.我当时将缺席的原因是我的学校安排发生了变化。
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20.我得去机场接我叔叔。我试着找一个人,但没有其他人。
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21.你能给我机会面对面向你道歉吗?我真诚地邀请你来参加。
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22.我们要不要推迟我们的时间到……
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23.再次抱歉为我的缺席 / 突然更改造成的不便。
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三、道歉信常用模版与演练
1. 基本模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that ______(写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and ______(失约理由) .
Shall we fix another time I’ll be available any time after______(补救办法). Will ______(另约时间) suits your convenience If it’s ok, let’s meet at ______(见面地点). If not, let me know what time suits you best. I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 写作实操技巧
假定你是李华,你和外教MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国际摄影展,但你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2. 解释原因;
3.补救措施。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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3. 仿写演练
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友David本周六即将结束在中国的旅行,乘飞机返回英国,你因有事无法按原定计划取机场为他送行,只好写信向他道歉,内容如下:
1.表达歉意;2.说明不能送行的原因。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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四、道歉信精准测试18篇
1.(高三模拟题精选)
假如你是李华, 现因公司货品质量问题给Johnson写一封道歉信。要点如下:
1.表示要查漏补缺, 改进提高;
2.提出补救办法;
3.表明决心和意愿。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好, 不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
First of all, thank you for informing us of the quality issue. I sincerely apologize to you for our failure to provide you with satisfactory products.
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
2.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训,回国时因为匆忙,把房东Bob的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob写一封道歉信,要点如下:
1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意;
2. 提出解决的办法;
3. 再次请求原谅。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Bob,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,在澳大利亚留学期间,父母维修厨房时影响到了邻居James,请给他写一封道歉信,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意;
2. 解释原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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4.(高三模拟题精选)
假设你是高二学生陈伟,昨天,你和你的外籍同桌Bob关于用集体班费给灾区捐款这一问题发生了一些小争执,请你按照以下要求给他写一封道歉信。
1. 表达自己的歉意;
2. 阐述道歉的原因(至少2条);
3. 表达自己的友好之情,提倡(advocate)相互理解、相互尊重。
注意:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
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5.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,因下周五要到机场接表妹,所以不能陪Tom去北京旅行。请你给Tom写一封道歉信。
内容主要包括:
1. 向Tom表达歉意。
2. 向Tom解释原因。
3. 祝Tom下周愉快并另约时间陪Tom去北京旅游。
注意:
1. 词数100 左右
2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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6.(高三模拟题精选)
假如你是李华,你的好朋友Peter明天回国,你因故不能明天去机场送他,请给他写一封道歉信。
内容包括:1.表达道歉;
2.解释原因。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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7.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,你的美国老师Mr.Evans要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr.Evans道歉并说明情况。
要点如下:1.表示歉意;
2.道歉理由(至少两点);
3.询问他是否有录音,以便补听讲座。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr.Evans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8.(高三模拟题精选)
假如你是李华,你约好昨天去公交车站接你的英国朋友Dylan,然后一起去公园。但你却迟到了,他有些生气,没有等到你就离开了。请用英语给他写一封道歉信。
内容如下:1.认错,道歉,解释原因;
2.许诺以后一定守时;
3.请求原谅。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Dylan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.(高三模拟题精选)
假设你是高二学生陈伟,昨天,你和你的外籍同桌Bob关于用集体班费给灾区捐款这一问题发生了一些小争执,请你按照以下要求给他写一封道歉信。
内容包括:1.表达自己的歉意;
2.阐述道歉的原因(至少2条);
3.表达自己的友好之情,提倡(advocate)相互理解、相互尊重。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
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10.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是校英语社社长李华,原定于下周举行的英语戏剧比赛因故推迟,请给担任评委的外教Mr. Johnson写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 推迟原因及后续调整。
注意:1. 写作词数应在80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,你班同学决定本周日下午为外教 Daniel举办生日聚会,你因故无法参加,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 说明原因;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应的位置作答。
Dear Daniel,
We’ re throwing a party for your birthday this Sunday afternoon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
12.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,你不小心遗失了交换生好友Judy借给你的英文小说。请你给她写封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.补救措施。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Judy,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
13.(高三模拟题精选)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
14.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,你把交换生Jerry的书弄丢了,请你给他写一封电子邮件表示歉意,内容包括:
1.说明具体情况;
2.提出解决方案。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Jerry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
15.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是校英语戏剧社社长李华,原定于下周举行的英语戏剧表演赛因故推迟,请你给担任评委的外教Katherine写邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意;
2. 说明理由;
3. 后续调整。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Katherine,
I’m Li Hua, leader of the English drama club.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
16.(高三模拟题精选)
假如你是李华,你约好昨天去公交车站接你的英国朋友Dylan,然后一起去公园。但你却迟到了,他有些生气,没有等到你就离开了。请用英语给他写一封道歉信,内容如下:
1.认错,道歉,解释原因;
2.许诺以后一定守时;
3.请求原谅。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Dylan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
17.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,在英国就读。前几天同学 Jim在背后议论你,愤怒之下你在网上发帖指责他。后来你认识到自己的错误,写信向他致歉并承认错误,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.反思。
注意:
1. 写作词数 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
18.(高三模拟题精选)
假定你是李华,外教Mike邀请你担任英语俱乐部下周五举办的“Drama Night”的主持人。现你因故无法出席,请写信说明情况。内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因。
注意:
1.开头和结尾已经给出;
2.词数80左右;
3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
五、热点话题训练(课外活动)
一、话题概述
翻译:课外活动 / 课外娱乐活动对青少年学生来说至关重要。它们不仅能缓解学业负担带来的精神压力,还能让学生在人际交往中结交更多朋友。通过参与这些有意义且有趣的活动,学生们肯定能够培养综合能力和团队精神。
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二、课外活动的意义
翻译:随着高考临近,我们高中生忙于学业任务。在一定程度上,课外活动为我们提供了恢复精力、振奋精神的机会。在我看来,这些活动有助于强身健体,塑造个性,还有助于培养我们的合作意识,增强团队精神。
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三、丰富课外生活
翻译:我们有很多选择来丰富课余时间,比如志愿工作,它能帮助我们培养解决问题的能力,学会担当,获得自尊。
志愿工作的方式有很多。在周末,去附近公园捡垃圾做志愿,不仅能给我们带来成就感,还有助于构建和谐社会。在社区里,我们可以陪伴孤独的老人,给他们讲有趣的故事或帮忙打扫卫生。在学校,协助图书管理员整理图书也很有价值。正如那句谚语所说:“事实胜于雄辩”。让我们开始行动,让课余时间更有意义、更有价值。
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四、春游活动
翻译:我们打算本周末组织一次春游。我们将在学校门口集合,然后乘校车出发。这次春游最精彩的部分是登山比赛,获胜队伍将获得奖品。此外,我们鼓励大家拍摄美丽的风景照片,回来后与全班同学分享。在春游过程中,我们不仅能释放压力、恢复精力,还能增强团队精神,加深友谊。
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五、志愿服务
翻译:志愿服务在很多方面对学生有益。一方面,通过服务他人,我们可以培养解决问题的能力,提高沟通能力。另一方面,摆脱学业负担,我们可以享受愉快时光,放松身心,这对我们的身心健康有益。
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六、话题相关表达积累
课外活动
课外娱乐活动
缓解精神压力
学业负担
人际交往
培养团队精神
塑造某人的性格
丰富业余时间
成就感
春游
加深友谊
志愿服务
身心健康
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