Unit 2 Neighbours 书面表达（含解析）牛津译林版 七年级下册英语题型专项集训
1．请你根据下表中的提示，以“My dream home in the dream neighbourhood”为题，谈谈自己理想社区中的梦想家园。
社区情况 社区很大；邻居友善；病有人医，坏有人修，老有人问，学有人帮……
周围环境 在一座小山脚下，可以……
房子概况 两层，一个花园……
内部设施 有多个房间、一个大阳台……
要求：
1. 短文不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，字迹工整；
3. 内容必须包括表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥。
My dream home in the dream neighbourhood
My dream home is at the foot of a hill. It has two floors. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．根据下表提示，以“My dream community”为题用英语写一篇短文，词数150左右。
概述 社区很大，居民不多
设施 花园、运动场 (playground)、游泳池……
环境 花草树木多；空气清新
邻居 善良，友好；一些邻居是志愿者，他们有一技之长，帮人们解决问题；帮老人购物、打扫房屋；帮孩子们学习……
其他 我打算为社区做点事：（1）……（2）……
要求：
1. 内容必须包括表格中的要点，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清楚，语句连贯。
My dream community
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3．请根据以下提示，以“My Neighborhood”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你的社区情况。
提示：
1. 不大，但非常漂亮；
2. 有个大型游泳池，我每周游泳两次；a big swimming pool twice a week
3. 有个篮球场，经常举办篮球比赛； have basketball matches
4. 有个大型购物中心，可以买到各种各样的东西； many kinds of things
5. 人们很友好，彼此相互帮助。be friendly to each other
My Neighborhood
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4．假设你所生活的小区将在这周末举行一个互帮互助的活动，为社区居民提供一些便民服务。请你根据所学内容并适当发挥想象，帮助社区中心写一篇80词的英语书面通知。通知的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入要求词数。
Notice
We are going to have an activity called “Helping each other” at the community centre this Saturday afternoon.
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Everyone is welcome!
Community Centre
January 21, 2016
5．假设你是西蒙，你刚刚搬进了新的社区，请你根据以下提示，并适当发挥想象，向你的笔友莉莎介绍它。
要求1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
内容：1. 我的新公寓在市中心，在第五层。
2. 我不再和哥哥分享同一个房间，有了自己的房间。
3. 房间有一个阳台，是个种花的好地方。
4. 我的学校离家只有2英里远，我可以步行去上学。
5. 社区里的人友好而且乐于助人。社区里有一个社区服务中心，能帮助邻居解决各种问题。
Dear Lisa，
How are you I live in a new neighbourhood now. Let me tell you something about it.
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Best wishes.
Simon
6．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”, 邻居对我们的生活非常重要。请你根据下面的提示, 以“My Neighbour”为题，写一篇作文。要点如下：
1. 我是Jim，我有一个新邻居叫Peter。我和他住同一栋楼，他住在五楼。
2. 他是一名导游 (tour guide)，他喜欢带领游客游览不同的城市。在未来，他打算环游世界；
3. 他非常乐于助人，当人们遇到各种问题时，都向他求助；
4. 我的感受……(2-3句)
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7．假如你是李华，所在的城区正在举行“十佳学生”评选活动。请根据以下信息介绍你班上的同学Daming的情况。
出生时间 2004年10月26日
就读学校 新星中学七年级二班
性格 有礼貌、友好，乐于助人
学习情况 努力、成绩好
兴趣爱好 ……
要求：
1．用上所有的要点，但可适当发挥；
2．词数在60左右。
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8．假如你叫Jim，请根据中文提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，向大家介绍你们社区。
1. 这里的邻居很友好并乐于助人。每周末他们都在社区中心举行互助会。
2.当我们需要帮助时，他们就来帮忙。
3.电脑工程师帮助我们检查我们的电脑。
4.我们能找他们修理坏了的自行车。
5.一些大学生乐于助人
6. 一些义工经常帮助老人。他们帮助老人打扫公寓，为他们购物。
7.这儿的人们就像一个大家庭。
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9．假如你住在一个新社区，遇到一位好邻居Linda。请根据以下要点写一篇80词左右的短文(短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。
1.Linda乐于助人。如果你外出度假，她会帮助你照看房子，并帮你花园里的植物浇水。
2.她是你的好邻居，也是你的好朋友。你们下班后经常在一起聊天。有时间时，你们经常一起购物。
3.你认为生活中好邻居非常重要。因此，每个人都应该在社区里做好邻居，使得社区成员开心，就像一个家庭一样。
I live in a new community and meet a good neighbour, Linda. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．请根据所给中文提示，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你们的社区中心。
1. 在我们的居民区里有一个社区中心，它很有帮助；
2. 周末有很多志愿者聚在这里，和大家分享各自的一技之长；
3. 帮助我们解决各种问题……
4. 社区中心还帮助老人，有时社区的人为他们买东西；
5. 我们很幸运有这样的社区中心。
注意：1. 文章须包括所有的内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；第三要点要至少发挥2句；
2. 词数70左右。
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1．例文
My dream home in the dream neighbourhood
My dream home is at the foot of a hill. It has two floors. There is a beautiful garden with different kinds of flowers. There are many rooms and a big balcony in it. I can look out at the hill and trees on the balcony. My dream home is in a very big neighbourhood and the neighbours are kind to each other. There are many volunteers in my neighbourhood. Some of them are doctors. They can take good care of the sick people. If there is something wrong with our things, the engineers here can help us fix them. When we have problems with our study, the college students will help us. They often help the old clean their houses and do some shopping.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格中的提示内容介绍自己理想社区中的梦想家园，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍梦想家园的周围环境和房子概况；
第二步，介绍梦想家园的内部设施；
第三步，介绍梦想家园的社区情况。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of各种各样的
②be kind to对某人友好
③take good care of好好照顾
[高分句型]
①My dream home is in a very big neighbourhood and the neighbours are kind to each other.(and连接的并列句)
②If there is something wrong with our things, the engineers here can help us fix them.(if引导的条件状语从句)
2．例文：
My dream community
My dream community is very big, but there aren’t many people living there. There are lots of trees and beautiful flowers in the neighbourhood，so the air there is fresh. We have a big garden, a swimming pool and some playgrounds. We can have a good time playing there.
All my neighbours are nice and helpful. Some of them are volunteers with different skills. If we have any problems，they can help us. They also help old people do some shopping and clean their houses. If children have problems with their lessons, they will give them a helping hand.
I will do some things for my neighbourhood. I am going to pick up the rubbish in the community centre. If my neighbour is not good at English，I will help her/him with her/his English after school. My community will be a good place to live in.
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时注意围绕题目“My dream community”展开叙述。内容要包括要求中所给的所有要点，缺一不可。内容要积极向上，条理要清晰。
写作指导：本文写作应该使用第一人称。时态用一般现在时。根据要点提示文章可分为三部分，第一部分描写社区的设施和环境；第二部分描写社区的人；第三部分阐述自己想为社区出一份力。注意最后一部分应有具体做法，因为是打算，这部分应用一般将来时。
3．One possible version:
My Neighbourhood
My neighbourhood is not very big but beautiful. There is a swimming pool. I go swimming twice a week. There is a basketball court. We often have basketball matches there. There is also a large shopping mall. We can buy different kinds of things there. People here are very friendly. They often help each other. Welcome to my neighbourhood.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料文写作，根据题干所给的社区情况，结合提示词进行描述；保证内容完整，条理清晰。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主，在写作时可写成一个段落，但是要分清层次；第一个层次总述社区情况；第二层次描述社区的游泳池、篮球场和购物中心；第三个层次描述社区的邻居都很友好，欢迎大家来社区。
4．One possible version:
Notice
We are going to have an activity called “Helping each other” at the community centre this Saturday afternoon.
Some volunteers will come here and help us with some problems. Mr. Zhang and Mr. Wang are good engineers. If there is something wrong with your broken TV sets, computers or fridges, you can ask them for help. Miss Yang, a good English teacher, will give children a talk on how to study English well.
There are also some doctors from the community hospital. They will help us with our health problems.
It will begin at 9:00 a.m.
Everyone is welcome!
Community Centre
January 21, 2016
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一则通知。要求结合给出的开头和结尾，根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态以一般将来时为主。作文要分别介绍活动的时间、内容和志愿者会分别来帮忙做什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
5．例文
Dear Lisa，
How are you I live in a new neighbourhood now. Let me tell you something about it.
My new apartment is downtown, on the fifth floor. I don't share the same room with my brother anymore. I have my own room. The room has a balcony, which is a good place to grow flowers. My school is only two miles away from home. I can walk to school. People in the community are friendly and helpful. There is a community service center in the community, which can help the neighbors solve all kinds of problems.
Best wishes.
Simon
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一封信给我笔友莉莎，介绍我的新社区。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍我的新公寓的位置、我的房间、社区里的人；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文要衔接流畅。
6．范文：
My Neighbour
As the saying goes "A neighbor is better than a distant relative". Neighbors are very important in our lives.
I am Jim. I live in Sunshine Community. I have a new neighbour, Peter. We live in the same building. He lives on the fifth floor. He is a tour guide. He likes showing visitors around different cities. He is going to travel around the world in the future. He works hard. He is kind-hearted and ready to help others. When people are in trouble, they usually ask him for help. Everyone in our neighbourhood likes him. So we are lucky to have a nice neighbour.
I think we should help each other in our neighbourhood. I like our neighbors.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时要根据汉语提示的内容来介绍自己的新邻居，包括名字、住所、职业、爱好、性格等方面，最后再写出自己的感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时。在介绍时，力求语言准确，内容完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。
7．例文：
Daming was born on October 26th, 2004 in our town. Now he studies in Class Two, Grade Seven, in Xinxing Middle School. Every day he comes to school early and studies very hard. So he does well in all the subjects. He is also polite, kind and ready to help others in trouble. After school he often plays basketball with his classmates. On weekends he enjoys listening to music at home. Both teachers and students in our school like him very much.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，文章通过介绍一名学生的个人信息、性格、学习情况和兴趣爱好等内容来让读者了解这位学生。
2. 写作指导：本文采用第三人称来介绍这名学生，时态主要采用一般现在时，用一般过去时介绍了他的出生情况；从就读学校介绍到该生的学习情况，顺其自然；在介绍兴趣爱好时，具体生动；最后以老师和其他学生的评价结尾，升华主题。
8．My name is Jim. I live in a great neighbourhood. The neighbours here are kind and helpful. They have a“helping hands" meeting at the community centre every weekend. When we need help，they will come to help us. The computer engineer helps us to check our computers. We can ask them to fix our broken bikes. Some college students are ready to help us. Some volunteers often help old people to clean their flats and do some shopping for them. People here are like a big family.
【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如live in，kind and helpful，at the community centre，every weekend，come to help us，helps us to check our computers，ask them to fix our broken bikes，ready to help us，do some shopping等。而复杂并列结构Some volunteers often help old people to clean their flats and do some shopping for them.和时间状语从句When we need help，they will come to help us.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
9．I live in a new community and meet a god neighbour，Linda. She is always ready to help others. If I go out for holidays，she will look after my house and water the plants in my garden.
Linda is my good neighbour and friend，too. We often talk with each other after work and we often do some shopping together when we have time.
I think good neighbours are very important in our life. So every one of us should be a good neighbour in the community and make the community happy，like a family.
【详解】本文需要描述我的好邻居Linda,包括她的性格状况，以及她乐于助人的行为，我们平时在一起的活动等，并对好邻居对生活的重要性发表自己的意见。时态主要用到一般现在时。内容要包括题目内容要求，但是不要逐句翻译，适当使用连词，连句成篇。本篇文章，开篇点题，I live in a new community and meet a god neighbor，Linda.提出我的好邻居Linda。接着是文章的主体部分，具体描述为什么说她是一个好邻居。亮点短语及句型例如：be ready to do sth；if I…, she will…是if引导的条件状语从句；We often…when we…,是when引导的时间状语从句。最后一段对好邻居的重要性发表自己的观点，并呼吁大家为创造良好社区而努力。文章内容完整，层次清晰，语言表达正确，用词恰当，从句及连词的使用也使文章浑然一体，有很强的连贯性，是一篇不错的文章。
10．There is a community center in our neighbourhood . It is helpful. At weekends, many volunteers meet here. They share their different skills. They help us with all kinds of problems. They help us check the computers. They also help us fix bikes. The center helps old people too. Sometimes some people from the center do some shopping for them . We are very lucky to have a community center like this.
【详解】请根据所给中文提示，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你们的社区中心，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的文章。注意紧扣文章主题，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、词组及句型，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】文中用到了一些好的句型：They help us with all kinds of problems. They help us check the computers. They also help us fix bikes.这些给文章增色不少。
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