2023-2024八年级英语下期期末高频考点真题专练（人教版）
13 书面表达30篇
1．暑假将至，学校正开展“好书伴我行”活动，鼓励大家假期要多读书。假如你是李华，请你以“The book I like best”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，分享一下你最喜欢的一本书。
1.要点：①你最喜欢的一本书是什么？②这本书主要讲了什么？③你为什么喜欢这本书？
2.要求：①文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；②词数80左右。
The book I like best
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2．在童年时代，可能拥有一样玩具，让我们爱不释手；也有可能读过一本书，使我们产生求知的渴望……。它们将永远停留在我们的记忆里，给我们留下很多美好的回忆。我想你也不会例外吧？
请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你童年时代的最爱吧！
提示：
1. What is your favorite thing
2. Who did you get it from What’s it about
3. How long have you had it
4. Why do you like it so much
5. What do you learn from the thing
要求：
1. 短文应包含提示中所有信息，并适当发挥。
2. 短文中不准出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。
My favorite ________
In my childhood, there were many soft and sweet memories in my heart.
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3．第19届亚运会将在杭州举办。亚运会组委会(the Organizing Committee) 在报纸上刊登了一封中学生志愿者招募信。假如你叫李华，请根据要求，写一封自荐信。
要求：
1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
3.不得出现学校和个人等真实信息。
Dear Students,
The 19th Asian Games in Hangzhou is drawing near. We are calling for your attention for the volunteer work. Are you free from October 1st to October 8th Have you worked as a volunteer before What are you good at and what can you help with We are waiting for your reply and active participation(参与) in this big event.
Your sincerely,
The Organizing Committee
Dear Organizing Committee,
I am writing to apply to be the volunteer for the Asian Games.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．家乡是每个人心底的根，是每个人心中最特别的地方。你的家乡正在开展主题为“My Hometown, My Love”的演讲活动，请用英文写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
1.介绍我的家乡，如：美景、美食、风俗、人文、家乡的变化等；
2.欢迎游览我的家乡及游览注意事项，如：最佳游览时间、交通方式等。
注意：
1.词数：100 左右；
2.可进行适当发挥；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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5．对于我们学生来说，初中是很重要的一段时光，它对我们的将来有着重要的意义。那么，怎样才能愉快地度过这段重要的时光呢？你有什么样的建议和想法？请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
提示：
1. What can we get during the three years in a junior middle school
2. How can you enjoy yourself during this time
注意：
1. 短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数 80 左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The three years in a junior middle school is a long time. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．每个人都有自己难忘的经历，这些经历或者带给我们快乐，或者带给我们成长。请根据要点与提示谈一段你自己难忘的经历。
1. 要点: 1）这个经历是什么；
2）你有何收获和体会。
2. 要求: 1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右。
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7．每一份礼物都承载着一段美好的回忆。明天你们班将开展主题为The most special gift I’ve ever received的英语口语交流活动，请你准备一篇发言稿，与大家分享你收到过的最特殊的礼物。
提示：
1. What is the most special gift you’ve ever received
2. Why is it special
3. What’s the story about it
要求：
1.文章须包含所给提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.表达正确，语句通顺，书写规范；
3.词数不少于80个（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Everyone has received some gifts. The most special gift I have received is
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8．6月11日，第十九届 “文博会（ICIF）”在深圳国展中心顺利闭幕。假如你是山河中学的学生通讯员李华，请根据以下提示用英文写一则简讯向《Shenzhen News》投稿。
（1）游览时间：6月11日下午2点
（2）游览内容：
1. 在深圳展区用VR眼镜游览太空，和宇航员们打招呼；
2. 在四川展区了解熊猫的生活，购买熊猫公仔；
3. 在外国展区欣赏艺术品 ……（自由发挥 1-2点）
（3）游览感想
参考词汇：展区 exhibition area
注意事项：
1. 必须包括提示内容，请补充要点，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名；
4. 不少于 80词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
I Had a Good Time at ICIF
The 19th China International Cultural Industries Fair was successfully held in Shenzhen._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．学校校刊英文版正在开展以“The best gift I have ever received（收到）”为主题的征文活动，内容需包括以下要点：
1. How long have you had it
2. When did you receive it
3. Who gave it to you Why did he/she buy you the gift
4. Why do you like it
要求：
1.语句通顺，100词左右。
2.不得出现真实姓名和其他透露真实身份的信息。
The best gift I have ever received
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10．《21世纪英文报》以“A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”（千里之行始于足下）为题向中学生征集优秀作品，请你用英文完成一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你对谚语的理解；
2. 你生活中的一个事例（如：运动，乐器，家务，学习等）；
3. 你的感悟。
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总数；
2. 内容涵盖要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step
Have you heard of the saying “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step” It means that
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11．时光如梭，八年级学习生活即将结束，九年级学习生活即将开始。请你用英语写写自己过去两年学习生活的收获和感悟，以及对九年级学习生活的安排。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.文章通顺，书写规范；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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12．在我们成长过程中有很多重要的东西，比如time, love, books, friendship，它一定对我们的学习生活有所帮助或者产生影响，请以“The Most Important Thing in My Life”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1. 你生命中最重要的东西是什么；
2. 它为什么那么重要；
3. 你是怎样对待它的。
要求：
1. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯，文中不得出现考生真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数100左右。
The Most Important Thing in My Life
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13．近来学校严格控制学生的书面作业总量，合理布置了不同类型的作业。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以“My Creative English Homework”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文，讲述自身经历，提出合理建议。
参考作业类型：make a poster (海报) ； draw a mind map；perform a fairy tale；learn to sing English songs—
参考信息：(1) 做过的最有创意的英语作业 (内容、收获……)；
(2) 更多有创意的英语作业建议 (形式、理由……)；
(3)……
要求；
(1) 字数80词左右，开头已给出；
(2) 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息。
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14．请以“The Food I Like Best”为题，并根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
1. What food do you like best
2. Why do you like it
要求：
1. 文章应包含提示的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级、姓名等信息；
3. 词数100左右。
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15．可爱的同学们，人的一生，总会遇到困难，面对才是最好的选择，学习才会不断进步。请以“How to Face Trouble in Life”为题，并根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
1. What trouble did you meet
2. How did you deal with it
3. What have you learned from it
要求：
1. 文章应包含提示的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级、姓名等信息；
3. 词数100左右。
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16．时光荏苒，初中生活还剩一年。回想过去的两年初中生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多 请你根据以下提示，以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化。
提示：1. 生活和学习方面的变化；
2. 对这些变化的看法。
要求： 1. 包括以上内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2. 80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school.
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17．生命在于运动，你最喜欢的运动是什么呢？请根据以下提示以“My favorite sport”为题，用英语写一篇短文，给你们班的英语园地小报投稿。
提示：
(1) What’s your favorite sport
(2) How often do you play the sport
(3) How long do you play the sport each time
(4) Who do you often play the sport with
要求：
1. 短文必须包括提示所有要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 短文中不要出现真实的人名及校名；
3. 词数60—80词左右。
My Favorite Sport
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18．读书，不仅能开拓视野，陶冶情操，更能增长智慧。
你校英文网站正在开展以“读书伴我成长” 为主题的征文活动。请你根据要点及要求用英语写一篇短文投稿。
1. 要点：1）你平时都读哪类书籍；
2）阅读给你带来的哪些益处。
2. 要求：1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右。
Reading plays an important role in our life.
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19．2023年4月，大熊猫丫丫结束了长达20年的旅美生活，平安回国，大熊猫的保护情况备受关注。假如你是李华，你校来了一批国际交换生，他们很关心大熊猫丫丫，你们学校制作了一个视频介绍丫丫并呼吁大家保护动物，请你为该视频写一段英文解说词。
内容包括：
1.大熊猫丫丫目前的基本情况（①被精心照顾；②…）；
2.保护大熊猫的举措（①建立自然保护区；②… ③…）；
3.倡议一起保护动物。
要求：
1.词数80左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：自然保护区nature reserve
Boys and girls, welcome to our school! We know that you care about Yaya very much. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your watching.
20．同学们，你一定有一样物品是你从小时候到现在都不舍得丢弃的，因为它对你有特殊的意义。请根据以下提示和要求写一篇70词左右的英语小短文。
提示：
1. How long have you had it
2. How did you get it
3. Why do you like it so much
要求：
1、包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥；
2、书写清晰、规范，表达准确、顺畅。
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21．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter下学期将作为交换生来中国学习，他想利用假期时间学习汉语，并了解遇到困难时如何向人求助等。请你根据以下要点写一封信。
要点提示：
1)学习汉语的方法：看中文电影，听磁带，朗读练习发音，制作字卡，求助老师等；
2)如何求助：要有礼貌的求助，避免太直接，在不同情况下使用不同的语言；
3)……
注意：1)词数不少于80；
2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3)信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4)开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to China next term.
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Have a good time!
Li Hua
22．Starlight Secondary School每年4月份举办“Starlight Reading Month”活动，为使这项活动能更好地开展，学校的Reading Club做了一个调查。请根据以下调查结果和建议，以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为题，谈一下学生们在阅读方面存在的问题以及你对阅读的看法，并给同学们提出一些合理化的建议。
阅读的好处 1. 获得知识，使人变得更加聪明；2. 使人心情愉悦；3. ……
存在问题 1. 一些学生喜欢玩电脑游戏，几乎不读书；2. ……
建议 1. 好读书，读好书，让阅读成为一种生活方式；2. ……
要求：
1.短文必须包含表格所有内容，可适当拓展；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；
4. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
It is really important for us to read books in our daily life.
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23．同学们，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，用英语制定一个度假计划，可适当发挥。
内容提示：
1. 和父母或同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情；
2. 参加志愿活动、帮家长做家务；
3. 读自己喜欢的书、看英文电影；
4. 远离危险的地方……
写作要求：
1. 100词以上，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 不得出现自己真实姓名和学校等信息。
The summer holiday is coming. Here is my plan for the exciting holiday.
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24．近段时间班上同学对学校是否应该强制学生穿校服展开了激烈的讨论，褒贬不一，请你以 “My View on School Uniforms”为题写一篇文章，100词左右。
提示词：ugly难看的，smart敏捷的，tidy整洁的，concentrate on专注于...
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25．健康对我们每个人来说都是非常重要的，但是并非每个人都知道如何保持健康。这里，请你根据下面表格的提示内容，以“Good Ways To Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇70~80词的短文，倡导健康生活并从以下三个方面做起。
Food a balanced(均衡的) diet, vegetable, fruit, less meat
Exercise do more exercise, take a walk after meals
Mood(情绪) keep happy, smile often, make friends
注意：1. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 卷面整洁，语言流畅，可适当发挥。
Good Ways To Keep Healthy
It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep healthy
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26．阳光学校正在开展主为“My Favorite Thing In My Childhood”的演讲比赛请你根据下表信息用英语写一篇演讲稿，同时谈谈它对你的特殊意义。
Favorite Thing Meaning
a toy /... get it from... keep it for... bring back sweet memories ...
注意：(1)演讲稿必须包括以上表内所有信息，可适当增加细节：
(2)词数：80词左右：
(3)对你的特殊意义至少两条：
(4)演讲稿首句及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi, everyone! My favorite thing in my childhood is
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That’s all. Thanks for listening!
27．初二的你，入团了吗？中国共产主义青年团已经走过了百年历程。作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以How to make myself better为题，谈谈你塑造更好自己的做法及意义。除提示内容外，请你补充至少一点。
make myself better healthy lifestyle eat healthily, do more exercise
good qualities polite, feel sure of oneself
improve myself take part in activities, develop hobbies
… …
参考词汇：lifestyle n. 生活方式 qualities n. 品质
写作要求：
1.意思连贯，表达准确，书写规范，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名及所在地等信息；
3.词数80-100词，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to make myself better
As a teenager, I think I will try my best to make myself better.
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28．2022年在北京和张家口举行冬奥会。为了确保冬奥会（Winter Olympic Games）圆满成功，组委会发起了志愿者（volunteer）招募活动。假如你是第四中学的学生李华，希望能成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，表达你的意愿。
内容提示：
1. Introduce yourself；
2. Your advantages（优势）；
3. Your promise。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 词数80个左右；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：fluently流畅地；athlete运动员；be suitable for适合
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29．你想在朋友圈晒一晒你最喜欢的书籍或音乐，请根据下面的英文提示，写一篇短文介绍你的最爱。
提示：
(1) What kind of book/music do you like best Why
(2) Introduce the book/music.
(3) What do you know about the writer/singer
(4) Have you met him/her
注意：
(1) 短文须包括提示中几个要点，可适当发挥；
(2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
(3) 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My favorite ________
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30．请根据下面的提示，以 “How I’ve Changed!”为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：1. 可以从学习状况、人际关系、个人习惯等方面选取，谈谈你过去与现在的变化；
2. 是什么促使你做出改变？他人的帮助还是不寻常的经历？
3. 现在的你是什么样子？你的感悟是什么？
要求：1. 注意时态的转换；
2. 词数80左右；
3. 题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How I’ve Changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．例文：
The book I like best
Since I was a child, I have been interested in reading books. Gulliver’s Travels is my favourite book.
The book was written by the English writer Jonathan Swift. The book is about a man called Gulliver who visited many strange places. He met different difficulties during his journey. However, he could save himself wisely from danger.
I like the book because the book is filled with fun. I enjoy the interesting story when I read it. Besides, I would like to be as brave as Gulliver. If you read it, I’m sure you will fall in love with it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：介绍书籍时三点写作要点不得遗漏，细节部分适当拓展。
[写作步骤]
① 第一步，点明主题，自己最喜欢的书是什么；
② 第二步，讲述这本书的主要内容；
③ 第三步，写出喜欢它的理由并向大家推荐阅读。
[亮点词汇]
① be interested in 对……感兴趣
② during 在……期间
③ as...as... 像……一样
[高分句型]
① The book was written by the English writer Jonathan Swift.（一般过去时的被动语态）
② The book is about a man called Gulliver who visited many strange places.（定语从句）
③ If you read it, I’m sure you will fall in love with it.（条件状语从句）
2．例文：
My favorite teddy bear
In my childhood, there were many soft and sweet memories in my heart.
My favorite thing from childhood is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me on my birthday. I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. It’s special to me because my grandmother made it for me. The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young and I was scared at night because I didn’t like the dark. I held my teddy bear to feel safe.
I think I will keep it forever to remind me of my grandmother.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我最喜欢的……”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“为什么喜欢以及这个东西的来源”等方面具体描述；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①dress in穿着
②special特别的
③be scared at害怕
[高分句型]
①I have had it since I was five years old.（since引导的时间状语从句）
②I think I will keep it forever to remind me of my grandmother.（宾语从句）
3．例文：
Dear Organizing Committee,
I am writing to apply to be the volunteer for the Asian Games. I’m really happy to find this piece of news and I’m free from October 1st to October 8th. I have worked as a volunteer before. I’m quite good at English. So it won’t be a problem for me to communicate with sports players from other countries. Also, I enjoy walking around Hangzhou in my free time. As a result, I can introduce some great places to our guests. I think they will like them! What’s more, I am free every weekend. I hope l can play a role in this big event!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先表明写这封信是想申请成为亚运会志愿者；
第二步，具体阐述自己成为志愿者的优势所在；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
③As a result结果是
④What’s more此外
[高分句型]
①So it won’t be a problem for me to communicate with sports players from other countries.(it固定句型)
②I hope l can play a role in this big event!(省略that的宾语从句)
4．例文：
Dear everyone, would you please be kind enough to vote for my home town
My home town Jiangshan is in the west of Zhejiang Province. It is on the east of Jiangxi Province. It has a population of about 0.6 million. The people here are very friendly. The house we live in now is big and clean. Our living conditions have also been greatly improved. There are a lot of places of interest here, such as Jianglang Mountain and Shigu Canyon. Every year, lots of visitors come here in spring. They enjoy themselves a lot in my home town. Also, you can taste much delicious food, such as Zongzi and rice cake. May is the best time to visit my hometown. The weather is neither too hot nor too cold. Our transportation here is very convenient. There are buses and taxis. You can’t litter when you come here. And if someone helps you, say thank you. If you have a chance to visit my home town, I’m sure you’ll have a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一篇应用文，是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：本文时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍家乡是什么地方；
第二步，详细介绍家乡是个什么样的地方，如景点、美食、风俗、气候和发展情况等，
第三步，总结并表达对家乡的热爱，欢迎读者光临。
[亮点词汇]
①have a population of 人口有……
②place of interest 名胜古迹
③enjoy oneself 玩得愉快
④neither too hot nor too cold 不冷不热
[高分句型]
①There are a lot of places of interest here, such as Jianglang Mountain and Shigu Canyon. 这里有很多名胜古迹, 如江郎山和石谷峡谷。（there be句型表示某地有某物；such as表示“例如”）
②If you have a chance to visit my home town, I’m sure you’ll have a good time. 如果你有机会参观我的家乡, 我相信你会玩得很开心。（if引导条件状语从句）
5．例文
The three years in a junior middle school is a long time. It is very important for us students. During this time, we can get a lot of knowledge, skills, close friends and other things. Then how to make it a happy time First, we should work hard to get ready for further studies. Second, making some friends can bring us a lot of pleasure. We can play and study together with them. Third, having a hobby can make our life more colorful. If friends have the same hobby with us, it is great. We’re sure to have a good time together.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在初中的三年里，我们能得到什么；
第二步，针对怎样才能愉快地度过这段重要的时光，给出自己的建议和想法。
[亮点词汇]
① a lot of大量的
② work hard努力工作
③ have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It is very important for us students（动词不定式作主语）
②Second, making some friends can bring us a lot of pleasure.（动名词短语作主语）
③If friends have the same hobby with us, it is great.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．例文
My most unforgettable volunteering experience was taking part in Waste Sorting Activity in our community with my friend.
First, we introduced the importance of waste-sorting in our daily life. Second, we told the grandparents the differences among the dustbins. Third, we told them how to sort out different kinds of waste and put them into different dustbins. We were busy all the afternoon. We were tired but we were happy because we thought we did something meaningful. I have learnt a lot from the experience. If we sort out recyclable things before throwing them away, the amount of waste will be reduced and less waste will be burned or buried.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最难忘的经历是什么；
第二步，讲述自己的经历；
第三步，分享自己的收获和体会。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②sort out分类
③throw away扔掉
[高分句型]
①Third, we told them how to sort out different kinds of waste and put them into different dustbins.（“疑问词+动词不定式”结构）
②We were tired but we were happy because we thought we did something meaningful.（because引导原因状语从句）
7．例文
Everyone has received some gifts. The most special gift I have received is a camera.
Whenever I see the camera, it makes me think of my grandfather. He gave it to me as a gift five years ago. The camera plays an important role in my life. It not only helps me record my life, but also tells me never to give up.
I failed an exam and went home unhappily that day. When my grandfather found out what happened, he took some photos on the street with his camera and showed them to me. In the pictures, some people were happy while others were not. Grandpa encouraged me, saying “Life is full of ups and downs, but it is colorful.” I learned from him that not being afraid of difficulties is the greatest thing in the world.
I will keep the camera and take good care of it forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你收到过的最特别的礼物是什么；
第二步，说明为什么它很特别；
第三步，分享有关它的故事。
[亮点词汇]
①think of想起
②play an important role扮演重要角色
③give up放弃
④be full of充满
[高分句型]
①Whenever I see the camera, it makes me think of my grandfather.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）
②When my grandfather found out what happened, he took some photos on the street with his camera and showed them to me.（when引导的时间状语从句，what引导的宾语从句）
8．例文
I Had a Good Time at ICIF
The 19th China International Cultural Industries Fair was successfully held in Shenzhen. I went to visit at 2 p.m. on June 11. I used VR glasses to tour the space at the Shenzhen exhibition area, and then I said hello to the astronauts. I learned about the life of pandas in the Sichuan exhibition area and bought panda dolls. I appreciated the works of art in the foreign exhibition area and had a deeper understanding of the differences between Chinese and American cultures.
Through this visit, I learned a lot of knowledge outside the book. It not only enriches my cultural knowledge, but also broadens my vision.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇点出写作主题：第十九届 “文博会（ICIF）”在深圳国展中心顺利闭幕；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体阐述游览时间和内容；
第三步，书写结语。表达游览感想。
[亮点词汇]
had a deeper understanding of对……有更深的理解
[高分句型]
It not only enriches my cultural knowledge, but also broadens my vision.（“not only...but also...”短语）
9．例文：
The best gift I have ever received
So far, I have received a lot of gifts. But the best one is a watch, which my dad gave me when I was five years old. At that moment, my family were living a hard life. Although it was not expensive, in order to buy me the gift, my dad made every effort to earn money. Each time I see the watch, I think about my great dad. He always tries his best to support our family and he is the greatest man in my heart. So, I like it so much. I think it is the best gift.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“现在完成时”，“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏，可适当添加细节使文章更通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己收到的最好的礼物，引出下文；
第二步，介绍这个礼物的相关事情，包括拥有时间、来历、喜欢的原因等；
第三步，总结全文，再次点题，“这是我收到的最好的礼物”。
[亮点词汇]
① in order to 为了
② make every effort 做出努力
③try one’s best 尽某人最大努力
[高分句型]
But the best one is a watch, which my dad gave me when I entered the senior middle school.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
10．例文
A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step
Have you heard of the saying “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step” It means that starting a good life is the result of the beginning.
Last summer holiday, I wanted to learn how to swim. I asked my father to teach me. I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first, I was afraid of diving in the water. And I felt uncomfortable in the water. But my father always encouraged me. He said he would protect me. Then I began to swim, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. It made me upset. Then my father told me how to move, how to stretch out my hands and legs. Slowly I could move a little. It took me about four hours to learn to swim. I felt quite happy.
From this experience, I have learned a lot. The first step is always the hardest. But if you do it in a proper way and never give up, you will make it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称，结合自己的亲身经历解释千里之行始于足下这句话，内容阐述完整，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，解释谚语的意思；
第二步，具体介绍自己的亲身经历来阐述谚语的意思；
第三步，谈一谈对自己经历的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①At first首先
②be afraid of害怕
③give up放弃
④begin to do开始
⑤want to do想要
⑥ask sb.to do sth.要求某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It means that starting a good life is the result of the beginning.（宾语从句+动词ing短语作主语）
②He said he would protect me.（宾语从句）
③But if you do it in a proper way and never give up, you will make it.（条件状语从句）
11．例文
Looking back at the past two years, I have made great progress.
First of all, I have made many friends. We share our feelings with each other and help each other in life as well as study. I am not shy any longer and become active and confident. With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on. I can take care of myself well now. Thanks to my kind and patient teachers, I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well.
Next year I am going to be serious about what I do. I will make full use of time to study when I’m in Grade 9. I will try my best to do well in every subject and I will spare some time to do some exercise to keep healthy. I will make greater efforts to achieve greater success in the future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：本文主要是讲述自己过去两年学习生活的收获和感悟，以及对九年级学习生活的安排。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示在过去的两年里取得了很大的进步；
第二步，详细介绍自己过去两年学习生活的收获和感悟；
第三步，介绍对九年级学习生活的安排。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
②not...any longer不再
③with the help of在……的帮助下
④thanks to幸亏
[高分句型]
①With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on.(动名词作宾语)
②I will try my best to do well in every subject and I will spare some time to do some exercise to keep healthy.(and连接的并列句以及动词不定式作目的状语)
12．例文
The Most Important Thing in My Life
In my opinion, the most important thing in my life is time. No matter how long one may live, his life has only a certain number of years. And once the time goes by, nobody can get in back.
Even though he is the richest person in the world, he cannot afford to waste time, because it means that he is wasting his own life.
The only thing we can do is making full use of our time. If we can finish more work with less time, we will have more time than other people.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍自己生命中最重要的东西。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你生命中最重要的东西是什么；
第二步，介绍它为什么那么重要；
第三步，介绍你是怎样对待它的。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion以我来看
②go by流逝
③make full use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①Even though he is the richest person in the world, he cannot afford to waste time, because it means that he is wasting his own life.(even though引导的让步状语从句以及because引导的原因状语从句)
②If we can finish more work with less time, we will have more time than other people.(if引导的条件状语从句)
13．例文
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in pared with common tasks like copying and translating, most students like creative English homework better. The most interesting creative English homework that I have done is to learn an English song. We were asked to perform it on New Year’s party. To finish this job, I must learn an English song by myself. After that, I got more confident in English learning.
I do hope we can have more kinds of creative English homework, such as drawing a mind map, making an English poster and so on. In these ways we can show what we have learned more creatively.
It’s true that creative homework can make English study easy and interesting.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己的观点——做英语作业可以帮助我们练习和运用我们在课堂上学到的知识；
第二步，具体介绍做过的最有创意的英语作业；
第三步，对更多有创意的英语作业提出建议；
第四步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb to do sth.帮助某人做某事
②kinds of各种各样的
③make a poster制作一张海报
④such as例如
[高分句型]
①Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class.(动名词作主语)
②To finish this job, I must learn an English song by myself.(动词不定式作目的状语)
14．例文
The Food I Like Best
There are different kinds of food in China. Most of them are very delicious. Among them, I like hot pot most.
Hot pot has a history of more than 1,700 years in China. Since it was invented, it has been popular in China. Hot pot is very delicous because I can eat what I want to eat. What’s more, it is a good chance to get together with my friends and family when having hot pot. At last, hot pot is nutritious because there are different kinds of vegetables in it.
I think as long as you taste hot pot, you will like it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示介绍自己最喜欢的食物。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍自己最喜欢的食物是什么；
第二步，介绍自己为什么喜欢这个食物；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②as long as只要
[高分句型]
①Since it was invented, it has been popular in China. (since引导的时间状语从句)
②Hot pot is very delicous because I can eat what I want to eat. (because引导的原因状语从句)
③I think as long as you taste hot pot, you will like it. (as long as引导的条件状语从句)
15．例文
How to Face Trouble in Life
As I grow, there are lots of troubles around me. Today I’d like to share one with you.
When I was in Grade 7, I tried out for my school’s basketball team. However, I failed to join the team.
I thought seriously about the reason for failure and made a plan carefully. I practiced hard every day according to my plan. Besides, I also looked for some ways to improve my skills in basketball by asking my PE teacher for help. Day by day, I am playing basketball better. In eighth grade, I participated in the school’s basketball team again and achieved success.
Through my experience, I realized that where there’s a will, there’s a way. When we face trouble, we should stick to our goals and never give up. As long as we take action, we’ll make our dreams come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，讲述自己所遇到的困难，以及如何应对它的；
第三步，介绍自己从这次经历所学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①try out for参加选拔
②according to根据
③participate in参加
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade 7, I tried out for my school’s basketball team.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②As long as we take action, we’ll make our dreams come true.（as long as引导条件状语从句）
16．One possible version:
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school. I have changed a lot.
First, I can get up by myself in the morning and I don’t need my mother to wake me up. Sometimes I can cook some food for myself. I like to cook fried eggs. I think it is delicious. Sometimes I wash my clothes and shoes, too. Second, I can finish my homework every time now. I often forgot my homework before and the teachers were often angry with me. But now all the teachers like me very much. And I can also read some other interesting books in my free time.
I hope to become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍自己过去两年在生活和学习上的变化，及对这些变化的看法，提示的内容阐述完整，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，感叹时间过得真快，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍自己在生活和学习方面发生的变化；
第三步，表达希望自己变得越来越好。
[亮点词汇]
① by myself独自
② get up起床
③ wake up醒来
④ be angry with生气
⑤ in one’s free time在某人的空闲时间
⑥ better and better越来越好
⑦ hope to希望
[高分句型]
①How time flies!（感叹句）
②It has been two years since I went to the middle school.（时间状语从句）
③First, I can get up by myself in the morning and I don’t need my mother to wake me up.（并列句）
④I think it is delicious. （宾语从句）
17．例文：
My Favorite Sport
My favorite sport is volleyball because it is interesting and meaningful. By playing it, I can become healthy and make some friends with the same interest.
I almost play it every day especially on weekends. I play it almost the whole day. There are many friends playing with me. They are my classmates or my schoolmates. Even I play it with those who I don’t know at all. Of course, if we play it once together, we will be friends.
What an exciting sport it is! Don’t you want to come and join us
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山阐明自己最喜欢的运动；
第二步，具体阐述做运动的频率，时间及一起做运动的人；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends交朋友
②with the same interest有相同兴趣
③the whole day整天
④of course当然
[高分句型]
①My favorite sport is volleyball because it is interesting and meaningful. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Even I play it with those who I don’t know at all. (who引导的定语从句)
18．例文：
Reading plays an important role in our life. Reading has lots of advantages. I benefit a lot from it. Not only does it broaden my knowledge and horizon but also gives me a sense of belonging and satisfaction. Compared with other books, the storybook interests me most. Whenever I immerse myself in the storybook, I can experience the characters’ life and then have a better understanding of my own real life. So, I keep reading it before bedtime every day and I will keep on it in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中读书伴我成长的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍读书伴我成长”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容：你平时都读哪类书籍以及阅读给你带来的哪些益处；
第三步，书写结语，表达“以后还会继续读书”的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①in our life在我们生活中
②broaden one’s knowledge and horizon拓宽知识和视野
③in the future在未来
[高分句型]
①Not only does it broaden my knowledge and horizon but also gives me a sense of belonging and satisfaction.（“not only...but also...”句型）
②Whenever I immerse myself in the storybook, I can experience the characters’ life and then have a better understanding of my own real life.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）
19．例文
Boys and girls, welcome to our school! We know that you care about Yaya very much. The giant panda Yaya is currently being carefully taken care of, with good physical recovery and good mental health. Luckily, our government is doing useful things to protect pandas. We have built a nature reserve for pandas in Sichuan. We plant more bamboo so that they have enough food to eat. The number of the giant pandas is now increasing.
I hope everyone will love and protect these animals because they are one of the treasures of all human beings.
Thanks for your watching.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍大熊猫丫丫目前的基本情况。
第二步，介绍保护大熊猫的举措。
第三步，倡议一起保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①care about关心
②take care of照顾
③nature reserve自然保护区
④the number of……的数目
⑤the treasures of ……的财富
[高分句型]
①We know that you care about Yaya very much.（that引导的宾语从句）
②The giant panda Yaya is currently being carefully taken care of, with good physical recovery and good mental health.（被动语态）
③We plant more bamboo so that they have enough food to eat.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
④I hope everyone will love and protect these animals because they are one of the treasures of all human beings.（because引导的原因状语从句）
20．例文
I have a book that I am not willing to lose. It is my favorite book Harry Potter. I have had it for five years. It is about a boy called Harry and his adventures at Hogwarts. It shows us the importance of friendship and courage. I fell in love with the book as soon as I started reading it. I got the magic book as a birthday gift from my mother. I know it shows my mother’s love to me. It also reminds me of the sweet memory between us.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
② 时态：主要是“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作内容以问题的形式给出，有三个方面：“拥有它多长时间了”、“怎么得到它的”和“为什么喜欢它”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍拥有这个特殊物品的时间；
第二步，介绍我为什么喜欢它；
第三步，介绍我怎么得到它的。
[亮点词汇]
①fall in love with爱上
②as soon as一……就……
③remind sb of 使想起
[高分句型]
①I have a book that I am not willing to lose. （定语从句）
②I fell in love with the book as soon as I started reading it.（时间状语从句）
21．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to China next term. I will give you some advice on how to learn Chinese.
First of all, you can watch Chinese movies and listen to some tapes to improve your Chinese. Then you can practice pronunciation through reading aloud and make character cards. What’s more, when you are in trouble, you can ask your teachers for help. When you ask for help, you should be polite and avoid being too direct. And you should use different languages in different situations.
Hope my suggestions can be of help. Looking forward to your coming.
Have a good time!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容给他提出一些学习汉语的建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍学习汉语的方法以及如何求助；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to听
②in trouble有麻烦
③be of help有帮助
[高分句型]
When you ask for help, you shoud be polite and avoid being too direct.(when引导时间状语从句)
22．例文
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
It is really important for us to read books in our daily life. However, some students spend a lot of time playing computer games or chatting online. They hardly ever read books. In fact, reading helps us in many ways.
The more books we read, the more knowledge we will get. Reading can also make us smarter. What’s more, it can make us feel happy. It’s necessary for us to read good books. Try to make reading become a part of our daily life. We can share our feelings with our parents and friends after reading. It is a happy experience in our life.
I hope the advice above can give you some help.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中有关“阅读”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，描述阅读方面存在的问题。介绍阅读现状：一些学生喜欢玩电脑游戏，几乎不读书；
第二步，具体阐述阅读的好处。从“知识获取、愉悦心情”等方面介绍阅读的好处和重要性；
第三步，书写结语。希望自己的建议可以提供帮助。
【亮点词汇】①spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
②in fact事实上
③what’s more并且
④share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
【高分句型】①The more books we read, the more knowledge we will get.（The +比较级+主谓，The +比较级+主谓.）
②It’s necessary for us to read good books.（It is+形容词+for sb. to do sth.）
23．例文：
The summer holiday is coming. Here is my plan for the exciting holiday.
Firstly, I will take a trip to Weihai with my parents. We will enjoy the beauty of nature and relax ourselves. Secondly, I will take part in volunteer activities and help my parents with chores. Thirdly, I will read my favorite books and watch English movies, which can help enrich my knowledge and improve my English. Last but not least, I will stay away from dangerous places when I’m outdoors. I will also pay attention to the safety of electricity at home.
I am looking forward to my summer holiday. I hope it can be colorful and meaning.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
② 时态：主要是一般将来时；
③ 提示：写作内容是“暑假计划”，要点已经给出，适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍暑假即将到来（已经给出）；
第二步，介绍具体的暑假计划，这是本文写作重点；
第三不，表达期待暑假。
[亮点词汇]
① enrich my knowledge 丰富知识
② stay away from 远离
③ pay attention to 注意
④ look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
① Thirdly, I will read my favorite books and watch English movies, which can help enrich my knowledge and improve my English.（定语从句）
② I hope it can be colorful and meaning. （宾语从句）
24．例文
My View on School Uniforms
At our school, we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. They think young people should look smart and so we would like to wear our own clothes. Our teachers believe that if we did that we will concentrate more on our clothes than our studies. But I disagree with them. We should feel more comfortable and that is good for studying. If we can’t do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. We also think everyone should be different from others. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先介绍学生们及老师们对校服的看法；
第二步，介绍自己对校服的看法；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have to do不得不做某事
②would like to do想要做某事
③disagree with sb与某人意见不合
[高分句型]
①The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly.(表语从句)
②If we can’t do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms.(if引导的条件状语从句)
25．例文：
Good Ways To Keep Healthy
It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep healthy
First, it’s necessary to keep a balanced diet. Eat more vegetables and fresh fruit, and less meat.
Besides, doing more exercise every day can help us keep healthy. We can take a walk after meals. Sometimes, we can walk to school or to work instead of taking a bus.
What’s more, staying in a good mood is another way to keep fit. We should keep happy and simle often. Do you feel lonely or unhappy sometimes If so, try to make friends with others.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇话题作文，为说明文；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：从饮食、锻炼、情绪三个方面介绍保
